You Talk About Being an Ordinary Human Being, but You Become a God with Knowledge?

Why do I feel that the writing in the battle chapters feels a little childish?

The protagonist still needs to strengthen his physical body later on, otherwise if the heroine is stronger later, he may not be able to break his defense or she may be cut off by him if he gets excited.

How old is the heroine? ? ? 145 Is already deformed 😰

The young author, give you a picture and experience it yourself. If you support, please reply below😏

No, what are you trying to do with one shot? It was obvious that someone had planned to protect you, so what are you hiding? If you hide the opponent, the target will be less powerful? Can you avoid war by hiding?

Follow-up reading refers to how many people have finished reading the latest chapter within 24 hours. Whether all recommended positions can be ranked is determined by follow-up reading. Whether a book has a future is also determined by follow-up reading. If you think the book is good, I would like to trouble you even if you don't read it, but slide the most recent chapter to the end every day Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... ! The new author is so miserable

I have eaten too much at settings. At first I said it didn't matter if the copy failed, but later I said that if the copy is injured, real people will be injured. So where is the line between death of the copy and injury. When the protagonist has no money, he says that the blue and white cards are worthless, and when he has money, he says that it will cost a lot of gold coins to buy them. What is the use of the identity of the waiter in the first dungeon? At first it was said that the waiter can only go to the third floor, but it turns out that the waiter has a grudge against the owner of the third floor. The identity of the waiter was not highlighted during the process of going up to the third floor, so what is the use of the waiter skin? Suggestion, if you want to read it, throw away your brain. I can't stand it anymore by chapter 65.

No, little brother, according to your introduction, to travel through the past, you have to be the chief designer of the J-20, a firearms expert, and a tank expert. It's really difficult for an ordinary person like you to still love games so much, haha

It feels like it has completely degenerated into an old suit and slapped in the face. Every chapter is a breath of air, and I can't stand it anymore. I originally wanted to read about the development of the brain and the interaction with the world-destroying heroine, but I feel like I haven't written about these two points for a long time.

What the hell is 145cm tall? . Do you sell compressed towels too?

It's at the food and grass level. The disadvantage is that there's too much nonsense.

This book is written elsewhere: The male protagonist and his loli harem, but the starting point is: The suffering master and his harem

When you write thousands of words a day, mistakes such as grammatical errors and typos are inevitable and understandable. However, if someone is helping you catch bugs, why don't you change it, author?

In the middle and late stages, the male protagonist turns on the mecha and the female protagonist uses magic? The cp feeling is full and good

Author, why don't you change the heroine's height to 154? She has always been described as petite, and the result is 1.6, But she is not petite at all🤔. Why not please someone like me who likes this? It is better to be under 150🤤

Nice idea. But has anyone ever called you wordy?

Write about a bunch of extras and the opponent's father. They all look like clowns. If the protagonist uses a big move to kill the opponent at the beginning, it will be amazing. It seems that every time there is a fight, there will be a lot of words to describe the crowd. It has no meaning to the plot, cannot promote the development of things, and is in the way 😰

The setting is quite interesting, but I really can't stand the delay.

Now that AI has improved, why don't you use DeepSeek to reset it?