Football: Starting with Maximum Potential

Don't write about Liu Yifei, brother, your subscription is not high to begin with. Why did the protagonist write 85 flowers in 1995? Although I also think about China Entertainment, she has nothing to do with football. Chen Duling is quite suitable. His father named him after watching football.

I haven't watched the Chinese Super League and Chinese National Football League for many years. I always skip relevant news when I encounter it. The author is not very optimistic when writing this.

No. The protagonist went to play football abroad and found a domestic guy who was almost ten years older??? You're not writing about China Entertainment, so you can't get her traffic. Will only be disgusted

The most important aspect of the novel is the sense of substitution. The author does it poorly and always changes the reality.

You can have the butterfly effect, but don't make it too much, and you won't be able to get a normal start. The text of football is just a fantasy within a fantasy, and then you create a reality within the fantasy, and you also mess around with parallel worlds. What else are you looking at?

Liu becomes the heroine directly and wants to give up

I only want to say that there are status skills and active skills. If you like to see them, look at them first. If I don't like to see them, I'll dodge them first.

The character of the protagonist is not written well. To put it simply, the protagonist has no charm. Even though he is so strong, he still licks someone who has some potential in his previous life. The family is also written in a mess. Your protagonist is still a loser with a mentality! It's okay to read the first dozen or so chapters in the refined version, but unfortunately, the rest becomes a mess! My teammates are all tool men. Dong Fangzhuo is very impressive. Even if he declines, he is still a strong player in the Chinese Super League. Do you want to read what you wrote? Whether Chinese football is popular or not is another matter. But your book is going to be useless because it is not interesting to read. Forgive me for telling the truth, because basically everyone who watches football is like me.

I've read 20 chapters, and overall it's pretty good. The biggest shortcoming is still a common problem with online novels (it used to be a bad problem among young literary writers, but now it has spread to cool writers), and they don't like to write about the protagonist's progress, gains, and achievements. The protagonist has been training for two months, but there is still no progress at 110? Why don't you quickly add the attribute points rewarded by the protagonist's competition? Where to add it? You won't write about the issues that readers are most concerned about! Why? What is the cool thing about online writing? Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be cool and getting slapped in the face? Big mistake! The biggest joy of online writing is the sense of gain, and there is no other one The second place is the sense of control (only "Soul of the Team" among football articles has passed) The third place is the stimulation and satisfaction of curiosity (such as "Zhetian", a legendary text) The fourth place is change and compensation

When you reach full potential, you still need to use restored energy cards. Otherwise, you will be directly judged as the winner. Then what is the difference between energy cards and stimulants?