People Are Doing Martial Arts, and God Rewards Those Who Work Hard.

This male protagonist is so hypocritical that it makes me want to vomit.

A bad start! You are surrounded by soldiers who are worth two kinds of cold poison. Yesterday's sword (one punch and one palm) can't kill you, a little guy!

I read the introduction of Heritage Prison e, went in and watched the plot, and now I'm copying the game's plot, and just put a Yitian in it now.

It's too messy, and super masters are introduced at the beginning. The protagonist is just a little guy with no autonomy at all. If this book was written 20 years ago, it would definitely have good results. It's no longer possible now. Wuxia has no new ideas and I don't have the patience to read it.

If you have to eat special fish to practice the second-rate Nine-Yang Kung Fu, then what's the use of this system? If you meet Lao Zhang and take Xiao Zhang to seek medical treatment, you won't tell Lao Zhang where the Nine-Yang Magic Kung Fu is and ask them to find it and quit gambling together. You'll force it to be more difficult, right?

An ordinary person received a Xuanming Divine Palm and survived! Do you think you are Zhang Wuji

What a mess, what kind of spiritual fish does a good Shaolin Jiuyang need to get started? So to practice Jiuyang, the secret art, do you have to swallow the fire unicorn before you can practice it?

The author is obviously a loyal player of Yijian Fengyunjue. But readers are not. In just over ten chapters, including the background and plot, there are so many names crammed into it that you are dazzled and unable to remember a few people. Perhaps those who play games will smile knowingly after reading this. But for someone like me, who has only played a little bit of games a long time ago, it seems very difficult.

Except for the addition of Yi Tian in the plot, the rest of the development of the novel purely follows the plot of the game, so nothing has changed.

Inexplicable, a waste of time

This is so bloody. Author, why are you so embarrassed?

I am currently reading this book, and I feel that the biggest shortcoming is that it is not exciting enough It's not that the plot is not exciting enough, but that the author cannot write that kind of excitement The protagonist's panel is obviously very luxurious, but it just doesn't show up, giving people the feeling of a second-rate celebrity Maybe the author's plot is too watery, and it feels like a running account to promote the plot. It looks ordinary, without feeling, and there is no dual feeling.

Even the introduction has typos, which is understandable.

Did you stop updating it just after you came back? Anyway, they are all booked now. If you really don't want to write anymore, please let me know.

"Food and grass in the same genre, write it well and don't be an eunuch."

You are writing about Yu Wenyi, how come Li Mochou got into traditional Chinese medicine?

It tastes as bad as the soup made by Fat Tiger in Doraemon

Chapter 20, Chapter 21, That Poison. If you want a rating, you would have to be below 6.

It's okay, it's pretty good. It's similar to the first martial arts novel I read in 10 years. In the third grade, I dug out a bunch of books from my grandfather's old cabinet. They were similar to the Hong Kong martial arts novels at that time, with a little bit of jokes added. I really miss them.