Tomb Raiding: Unearthed from a Tomb from the Start

This kind of writing is great; it doesn't even need Shennong (a legendary Chinese figure), the synopsis is so clear, haha ​​🤭

The protagonist is being way too nice to everyone else; his apathy is his own fate.

The leveling up is slow, and you're constantly getting humiliated. You act like a king even when given a chicken. Your female character writing is a complete mess. These days, ambiguous relationships in novels never end well. Even if you're not involved in pimping, why write so much about it? Why dedicate so much space to character development?

The storyline is weak, the writing is poor, and it's a nanny-sycophant story with a saintly attitude.

The author should be working in a factory tightening screws; novels aren't for you. This isn't 10 years ago.

In the world of "Under One Person," immortal techniques flourish, but resources are scarce. In the world of tomb raiding, resources are abundant, but there are no magical methods. They complement each other perfectly.

The writing is a bit messy, the narrative logic is chaotic, and some plot points feel unrealistic. Adding more plot and characters is good, but the author didn't time it well, and some parts feel too far-fetched! It's a confusing read!

The protagonist, who dares not kill a single person, is also a super nanny and a saint.

What were you thinking? Is this what you call good? It's like the scene at the tomb of King Xian, where there's fighting in the front and flirting in the back—it's awful. I don't know what you were thinking, how could you write something like this?

It's so-so; you can pass it off if you haven't read the original novel.