You're a Pirate, So No Tomb Raiding!
你是海贼啊，不许去盗墓！
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- Completed
- Length
- 302k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Is this introduction to the rebirth of Taoist priest Duan De as a pirate?
The front is very beautiful, I received gifts from the dead and fulfilled their wishes. It's a bit unexpected why Fish-Man Island suddenly became a grand narrative of resistance against oppression.
It's a good idea, I hope it won't be poisonous in the future
It's good to have a little ghost as the heroine, but don't be Robin again. I feel like every One Piece book wants to be Robin. . What's so good about Robin?
Shennong arrives
The writing is good, but the details are not rigorous Also, the protagonist is too young. He is still ten years old when it is released. His physical strength and defense are seriously insufficient, and he cannot even return life. He relies entirely on Ryoma, a novice gift bag. The protagonist's strength depends entirely on plug-ins and talents, but the protagonist's hardware is not good. The best equipment and talents are too low level. The protagonist is good at everything but lacks time to grow or develop physically. The protagonist wants to do things, so he must eat animal fruits or ripe fruits to grow faster, instead of adding talents all the time. Unless the protagonist can dig up space pirates' tombs in Rafdel and have alien talents, no matter how he cheats, he will still be insignificant.
Cut it? ? ? ? !
Why not Agile?
It feels weird to only have physique and strength and no reaction speed.
Now the plot of One Piece has already had its body taken away, for example, Yi Mu took her body from the Celestial Dragon Army, and it is also speculated that BGMM was also taken away by the nun, and that Hawkeye was taken away by Ryoma or reincarnated? , I don't know if it's true or false.
Moria, she still has this kind of past, fighting Kaido, falling for more than 20 years, and found that the characters of One Piece that I watched early on are not very understandable.
Shennong has read it. A small book of food and grass, you can read it if you are short of books
It's considered a source of food
Although brushing proficiency is a bit cliche, keep this pace and write down slowly. Also, don't be a licking dog or a nanny. Ever since Robin fucking appeared, I felt that your dog-licking nature, the author, was about to awaken. Anyway, the content of the dozens of chapters currently written is reasonable and relatively smooth. It's best to be more decisive in killing later, and don't write pirate fan fiction as a dog-licking novel, a harem romance novel or something like that. It's easy to look at and make you sick.