Pokemon: The Laid-Back Trainer

The writing and plot are quite good, so why are the grades so bad?

It's beautiful, but I suggest avoiding the human carnation. For an elf story, focusing on the bond between elves and humans is enough (mainly because this character would be better if he were more normal; the problem is he's just too unlikable).

I usually update one chapter in the morning and one chapter in the afternoon, with updates at 5 PM every day. If there's no update, it means I haven't updated. Each chapter is guaranteed to be 2000 words. If the word count is insufficient, it means I haven't reached the required word count for the day. Of course, I will guarantee two updates a day. The protagonist is supposed to be lazy, but I'm not. Thank you for your support, my lovely readers.

There are so many typos, author, please be more careful! Also, most people who read Pokémon stories aren't there for the female lead, so please, author, stop writing about girls!

This is just my personal opinion; please don't take it too seriously. I've read all the free chapters of this book so far; there are many free chapters. It only went public after more than 100 chapters, which shows the author's generosity. The story between the Pokémon and their trainers is well-written, and the protagonist also has his own little thoughts and feelings.

Seriously? You're even using aliases and hiding your identity in Elf language? You could clearly get more resources, but you're just looking for trouble. Stop pretending to be a tough guy.

To be honest, the Buddhist setting and the interactions between the main characters are particularly interesting. But their combat capabilities and progress have been too rapid. You start with 1 badge, the second one has 3-4 badges, and the third one is almost 8 badges. The rapid shifts in performance made the everyday scenes feel somewhat jarring.

Should we make a Qi Shi Hou (a character from a popular Chinese web novel)? It goes really well with a Buddhist-like attitude.

The author should rewrite a book. It can be Buddhist-like, but don't write about Buddhism, or it will discourage many people.

As of August 24, 2023 My impression of this book is that the plot flows smoothly and isn't awkward at all. I've even teared up a few times so far, and it makes me want to keep reading. It's probably a "feel-good" story, but it's not just mindless fun. If you're interested, you can check it out for yourself. There is no female lead so far.