Comics: Batman's Trickster

Why does Superman have weaknesses while Bats are mortal? I believe that stories like this are wonderful when you first acknowledge that abilities have limits, and then the characters can do things beyond the limits of abilities. There is an audience for upgrading and adding points, but in essence the author is being lazy, too lazy to dig into the character's inner being, and simplify the story. Of course, it would be great if the character's abilities and heart grow, and the character arc develops. The author can send me the saved manuscript and I will take your pulse.

Nowadays, some American comics have either mentally ill protagonists or terrible protagonists. I don't know what's wrong with that.

The protagonist has to make up his own origin, otherwise he will be helpless. Batman will rule Gotham in his place and become the lord. I have already thought of the hero's name and call him the Night Lord☝🤓

With your ability to self-hypnotize, and to be able to deceive all kinds of lies without being discovered, you can definitely write a villain with a high IQ. It would be very interesting. It's like using one's own example as a clue, indirectly or directly, but no evidence can be found. After being caught by Batman, he lied during various interrogations but could not detect it, which made Batman start to doubt himself, and then started various battles of wits. You can write about it, and it feels more interesting.

I only read the introduction and am a little curious whether hypnotizing myself can fulfill the requirements of various light rings.

Barbara Gordon (Batgirl, Oracle), Cassandra Cain (Black Bat, Orphan, Batgirl), Stephanie Brown (Spoiler, Robin, Batgirl)

My friend, you are about to reach your 70th chapter. I can briefly review the content of your 67th chapter. It seems that nothing has been promoted. I have no identity. Barbara is completely self-guided and defeated a little guy with an enhanced version of Bane's abilities. To be honest, these contents are compressed into 30 chapters. It is just right. Close to 70 pictures are too watery. In essence, it is too watery. There is no sexual content, and there are constant foreshadowings. The protagonist's past has not been explained yet, and the Fengchao organization is still unclear. The content of Gotham has not improved at all. Even if you spend time flirting and dating Barbara, wandering between women with different personalities, specifically attacking female characters, and spending time making plans, at least you can have sex with women. There is progress between the characters, instead of now, they don't know what to do. Clark and Lois came out and showed off, and then left. What can the protagonist get in the process? Can he get platinum kryptonite? Can he get Kryptonian technology? At this stage, can Superman help the protagonist eradicate the hive organization? If everything You can't get it, it's just a simple acquaintance, that means nothing. Superman is a good man. Even if you go to Metropolis as the most ordinary ordinary person and tell him all the hardships you have experienced, Superman will definitely help you with all his strength. It doesn't matter whether you know Clark or not. There is no point in simply being familiar with him. Protagonist He has always been passive, being pushed around, without any plan or purpose. The so-called normal identity is just an excuse to delay the protagonist from leaving Gotham. I have almost had enough of this excuse, and I am about to become impatient. As for emotions and light rings, don't say they were introduced later, please let the protagonist show up. After obtaining the yellow lantern ring, the protagonist's current emotional problems, obtaining the yellow lantern, and his ability to overcome fear and the fear of others are enough for him to obtain the yellow lantern. Then let the protagonist's special ability create a yellow lantern version of the Daybreak Ghost Lantern. I want to make the protagonist stand up and cheer him up In the recent DC, everyone is suffering. There is a deep hatred and no good products. The skeletal Batman is always dealing with crises and has endless things to do. The same goes for Gotham without Batman. It can never deal with crises and has stronger enemies that are always on the way to being eaten. It is purely for the plot and completely ignores everything else. I don't care. If you bring in the Laughing Bat, at least they will always succeed and get what they want, but the two above will never get what they want. They will always be trapped in the limitations of the plot, never be able to escape, rolling in the mud,

First of all, praise you. The confrontation with the Joker was great. I prefer inhuman protagonists (mentally), that is, the psychotic protagonists like Feng Bujue, because according to the needs theory, physiological needs have the least impact on them, and they can achieve perfection for their goals. The same is true for your protagonist. His special abilities allow him to do his best. At the same time, his confrontation with the clown also reveals the psychological problems of the protagonist. Whether it is examining life and finding pursuits, or colliding with other people's stories to create new sparks, it is an excellent point to watch. Then, scold you. I don't quite understand why there are plots like the female reporter, the Queen of the Beehive, and Catwoman. That's not to say that I reject the whispering part. The ambiguous plot can adjust the mentality, but on a deeper level, it seems to be abrupt due to platform restrictions and insufficient plot foundation. Readers are high-dimensional creatures. When I introduce the protagonist, I can only feel the physiological needs through words. You can say that the protagonist is very hungry after not eating all day, and is very tired from working from morning to night. I can also feel it through words. But for the protagonist Qixing Entertainment, you have to write in the moderator to let us feel it. I didn't feel clearly that it would eventually lead to the weird feeling of "Why can I still be seven-star entertainment when I have absolute calmness?" The feeling that this kind of car can still run without fuel is too abrupt.

If you have the ability, don't strengthen it for the rest of your life, just wallow in the mud of Gotham. If something big happens, you will disappear and you will never have to leave Gotham. You will be surrounded by the halo of the protagonist. Love needs, you can never escape, the shackles of the plot, you are trapped in the dilemma of the plot, the protagonist is the incarnation of the author and the reader, can't you act with the reader's thinking, as long as the mind is open, there are many ways in the world, You just drown in Gotham with your ideals, and never come out. You and the DC writers all have the same ideas

Gianna Hudson

It's really cool

You are always rational, pertinent, and objective. You never go crazy or let your emotions get out of hand. You don't take sides or express opinions, so that you can escape at any time. You are silent and firmly believe that silence is the best weapon. You are too lazy to fight for it and accept everything. The pendulum always stops in the middle. You see some people crying, shouting, angry, and at a loss. You think they are stupid. You live your life rigorously and skillfully, but in the end you are a little less human.

Oh, by the way, when you wake up and find that the room is full of stereotypes, I think you can change it. Don't forget that Bruce practiced in China, not just in the Shadow Warrior League, but also in China when he practiced other Chinese martial arts. I don't think there is a problem with other character stereotypes. Bruce's own words, if nothing else, he can't create stereotypes just to lurk.

Unemployed writer, the main thing is to listen to advice! In order not to affect the perception of other readers, negative reviews from outside will not stay long. Thank you for your support and understanding! 🙏

At the beginning of the article, there is a vague cover-up of special abilities. How many people have the patience to study fast-moving consumer goods seriously?

The confrontation between the clown is really amazing. Among the few good Psycho or Leziren DC fics, this is the only one that depicts the madness of the protagonist. The other characters are more or less baptized into goodness. This section is really good at portraying it.

After reading the introduction, I couldn't help but want to complain. Batman uses a lie detector to detect lies. Can he trust the results of the lie detector?

It was okay at first, but the more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became. I was obviously worried about trouble, but I still found various reasons for myself to get in touch with trouble to solve it. Moreover, if the female character can't be written well, don't write it. The logic is inconsistent, and the character is contradictory. If you want to have a legal identity by selling future information, you can just be the Riddler, and then get involved in all kinds of troubles. It's very uncomfortable for people watching. They say they don't want to be found by the Hive, but they are in contact with various extraordinary forces.

Does the heroine have a raven? It feels like there are almost no raven heroines in American comics.

Can hypnosis deceive one's body? Can you change your own genes? Can you deceive yourself into magic? If not, what's the use of just passing a lie detector and fear gas?

I've read Chapter 100. The content is really interesting, but I still want to complain. Isn't the protagonist's ability to be absolutely calm and collect other people's emotions to unlock new abilities? What does it have to do with hypnotizing oneself in the introduction 😅

It's essentially a hodgepodge of fan fiction. Although there is still a lack of writing power, and many of the foreshadowings of Amanda's operations are very abrupt, the setting is still quite interesting when you put your mind down and look at it.

Can self-hypnosis interfere with physiological phenomena?

The protagonist and Vicky were having sex in a hotel, and Jed was monitoring the whole process? Although the picture is blurry

I've saved 60 chapters and read them all at once. It's really great. Everything else about this book is okay. The only drawback is the update speed. I couldn't stand updating more than 200 chapters before and started to update. I can only say that automatic subscription is the right thing.

This book is still to my liking, but I read it with gusto. I didn't feel it was too watery, but I have to say it wasn't watery. There were a lot of things, but it was over a million words. The story line in the book from the beginning of the story to a million words actually took less than a month.

Stop being a eunuch, no matter what you say, people will still read your novels.

In addition, apart from the plot of the clown's confrontation, what is the most memorable plot for book lovers.

Brother, you update at 11 o'clock every night. One update is two pages, which is not enough. Can you come up with an update plan and give you a monthly ticket and a recommended ticket?

I've given you all 7 votes. I feel like the plot arrangement of this book is okay. It's just a bit of a stream of consciousness. I don't understand why so few people read it. Another shortcoming is that there are too many people in parallel universes. Will it be too confusing to write in the future?