Alliance's Simulated Champion

Goodness gracious, everyone take note: this isn't esports fanfiction; it's a fictional story with no connection to reality.

This fictional world has nothing to do with games or League of Legends.

Simulated champion? It's not even worth a hair on the Void champion.

It's well-written, but there are too many simulated scenarios, which makes the plot drag.

That's true, it's okay to be a bit rambling in simulations, but don't write so much in real-life scenarios. Include more dialogue and interaction, and avoid just straightforward descriptions; sometimes it feels like reading a report.