
Daodao Hongyuan
大道洪元
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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System integration, story preparation
It can be seen that the ambition in this book is more precipitated than the previous "Red Leaves Flying in Kyushu" series. I have read books for many years, and domestic fantasy has changed over the years since the development of Huanzhu Louzhu. Various systems and theories have emerged one after another. Whether they are antiques or innovative, the settings are all very mature systems. This time, in addition to interspersing technology and magic, the multiple systems of the world of cultivation are generally self-sustaining. It seems that Duanda has been revised and saved for a long time. Entering the second chapter, various contents are further expanded. For the time being, it is still in the novice village of leveling, and I look forward to the continuation of the subsequent battle stories.
Shadow
While reading the new book, I reread "Red Leaves Falling Over Kyushu". Come on, Duan Da 👍👍👍👍
Absolutely no good
This gap must have been formed, otherwise she would not be a little fairy. The beating is a relief, but the follow-up may still be entangled and disgusting. The criticism of the soul may still not be as good as the criticism of weapons...
Unfinished branch line arrangement
Now that I think about it, I read the branch plots and did not explain the ending. It may not be accurate. I will write them together for the time being. I will add them when I read them later. 1. The compensation from Sihai Academy: the Sihai Secret Realm dungeon. Which blind people were killed in it, what causes and effects were made or resolved, and whether the final harvest was satisfactory or not, there is no explanation.
The college battle has lost the melon-eaters
College Exchange: Why don't other colleges take the opportunity to fight each other? For example, those from Hanhai College, wouldn't they plot against Guangming College on the road? After all, it doesn't matter if they have more enemies. Beating a drowned dog is also satisfying. Watching the enemy being swept aside also makes you think clearly. Watching the fun and eating something, or win over the enemy's enemy, this is not impossible, right? It's human nature to gossip, and these colleges don't necessarily just want to fight with Wanxiang College in order to compete, right?
College recent chapters
I originally felt that writing for each grade was a bit like a running account, but now I feel that despite the plain content, it is specific and effective in instilling more scientific and efficient experiences in students, and establishing benchmarks for subsequent character behaviors.
Sure enough, chivalry is not cold.
After seeing the latest chapter, I hope to have the opportunity to download a copy of Kyushu's Falling Red Leaves to fill in the pits of that world. This time, it seems that a peaceful life is impossible. Maybe I can recruit a sword boy to teach some kung fu to change the world line.
Xuan coins
To start printing money, is that to also act as a bank? Each force may have its own internal currency, which can be added to the alliance for exchange. In addition, if there is currency, there may be currency speculation, as well as currency anchors, various materials, etc. These people have nothing to gain from such great merits of great luck?
257 Comments on Xuanmen and Jianghu
In this latest chapter, it can be seen that the gap between the top Xuanmen and Jianghu sects is beyond imagination. The two local snakes were suppressed by Xu Shao and could not lift their heads. What they gave could directly become the foundation of a sect. More than ten years ago, the powerful purge of the famous sects in Daxia directly eliminated the middle layers between Xuanmen and the bottom, such as the Sanxian sect and the bottom for many years. The middle-level sects that are gradually rising are basically gone... Like the Tang Sect, although they may not be able to compete with the Taoist sect with a long history like Baidu Sect, they certainly have various ancestors who have accumulated for many years. Moreover, during the unification of Daxia, it is impossible for no one in the Tang Sect to join the army, which means that it is impossible for no one to be in the Zhuguo or several vassal kings' banners. So I can still contact the top masters more or less, and it is unreasonable to have no background at all. Moreover, due to the countless causes and relationships, it is difficult to guarantee that the Tang Sect will not be able to produce someone as good as Chen Ping who has the good fortune and good luck to be accepted as a disciple by the top Xuanmen. Even if he goes to cultivate immortality, a family like the Tang Sect can also be an anchor point. On the rivers and lakes. The Tang Sect may be just an outer sect or a disciple or a grandson. Otherwise, the difference between the top and the bottom would be like a vacuum. Now that the Tang Sect has come out, I wonder if there will be a chance to see the Wen family. Also, when the protagonist walks in another world later, will there be a chance to see characters from Kyushu make cameos, even if they are living in the lines.
Main line question
The first part, 64 chapters. The second part, now has 96 chapters. Different from the last "Kyushu", I feel that the main plot is still lurking. In the previous book, the first part is about the escape, and the second extra chapter is about the boss's maturity. And accumulating power; the third extra is the second child's low strategy + low war, which is also mature and accumulating; the third part (the second part of the main story) has not been finished due to various reasons, but I think the main line is resistance, making a transition and paving the way for the counterattack and reunification in the third part. If there is a fourth part, It may be "detached". However, the author said that it is secular, and the fourth part may not be there. Looking back at this book, the first chapter, admission; the second chapter; promotion to grade (lower grade), I always feel that the main line is not very clear, and it is a bit confusing. Meaning. It has been mentioned in recent chapters, breaking the fate. So revenge for the mother will definitely not be the main line. It may involve the secrets of the world, family history, grievances and hatreds, but it may not be too long. Then the next question is how to develop in the future? The protagonist continues to advance in grade, pursuing immortality on the road to immortality, earthly immortality, heavenly immortality, and pursuit of transcendence? From the current point of view, the protagonist's will to seek immortality is not outstanding. Compared with "Mortal" (I just watched the TV series and animation recently, the animation is really good; the drama version is good for casual readers and animation viewers are average), Han Li's pursuit of immortality, Xu Chengyu has not established this ambition, and it is still very weak; there is no crisis related to the protagonist. Similarly, comparing with "Harry Potter", the protagonist has also been promoted, but the hidden plot has always been "fighting the big devil". There is obviously no villain running through the main plot here, and there is not even a villain so far. The only clue is the protagonist's life experience, which will be revealed soon. How to pave the way for the subsequent main plot? There is also a gray line, which is the expansion and development of Daxia. However, I feel that this line is not enough to support the subsequent expansion, especially since the protagonist is not among the several immortal cultivating forces that support the dynasty, and his majoring in Kung Fu has little to do with "merit". Looking forward to the subsequent development, and I also hope that the book will get better and better as it gets written. 👍👍👍
Listen to the wind
This is unfiltered big data. It is impossible for the Duowen Ghost King to listen to all the events in detail. There will definitely be a way to further refine the information. Whether it is a skill or a magic weapon, it needs to function as AI training, data cleaning, data retrieval, and maybe even more. Pay to the Duowen Ghost King 🤓 The unprocessed entry information can also be processed into a word cloud to see which ones have the highest hits. However, there are pros and cons to big data, and if someone knows about it, it can also cause data pollution. I don't know how to get around it in the future.
Comment on Chapter 184
The writing style of this chapter is actually too plain, like an expository text. In fact, the introduction of these aristocratic families can be interspersed in the subsequent plots as a narration or introduction to the scene. The current method is like looking at a map, with detailed information about each location marked on the map. Or in the previous chapter, Xu Chengyu flipped through the books in the college to make preparations, "I knew I had a plan in my mind," and left a hook. Then he told where to go in the following chapters, which not only laid the groundwork but also recovered the baggage. The current writing style of the whole book is still very old school 👍
Several small organizations in Xiaotan 249
Did Yang Yanzhang intend to do business with the army? This is actually very risky. If compared with reality, I do not support this path. If the organizations of Yang Yanzhang and the second prince are combined again, with the royal family on one side and the aristocratic family and the border army on the other, is this the emperor intending to create a rival for himself to rebel... Even if this generation can trust each other openly and honestly, what about the future? It's a test of human nature... Yang Yanzhang is actually suitable to start with veterans. The chamber of commerce that directly supports the border troops is a bit annoying. I think it is similar to the mercenary security group, which provides a better way for retired soldiers to improve their salaries. However, the escort agency and the transportation company will have conflicts of interest. It depends on how it is resolved later. As for the second prince, he wants to be an imperial merchant? A group of relatives, a royal family, it is easy to rebel if they have no money, but it is even easier to rebel if they have money. It is quite risky to suppress them simply by personal force. What if the highest combat power takes the lead in rebelling? I think the organization of these two people is very difficult to handle. Everyone is welcome to discuss it together.
Awesome, man. When I have free time, I hope I can finish writing "Red Leaves Falling in Kyushu".