Douluo Jueshi: I Don't Want to Be an Evil Soul Master

It is considered the best Douluo fanfic I have ever read. The protagonist is not like the diaosi protagonist in other Douluo fanfics, who can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman. There is no brainless villain yet, and there is no brainless Shrek.

First, the characterization is delicate. The author's description of both the psychology and the external environment is quite good. In just a few dozen chapters, I can understand the protagonist's growth and psychological struggle. The second point is the values ​​of Zhongzheng and Peace. The protagonist is a normal person, neither a saint nor a self-interested person. He is a person who is good at helping the world and helps the world while being poor. It happens that I am very fond of this method. Thirdly, the characterization is very good. The characters that have appeared so far are all quite full-bodied and have distinct personalities without feeling flat or facial makeup. The fourth point is that the plot design is reasonable and the progress is smooth. The author did not give the protagonist any outrageous tricks. I can feel that the author tried his best to consider the rationality of the plot, such as the two sisters the protagonist met after completing the spiritual ascension ceremony. Through a small incident, the cruelty of the protagonist's organization was revealed. It was not overly shaped but allowed me to understand the cruelty and chaos of the evil soul master group. I hope the author can stick to it. I think the Douluo fanfic you wrote is really unique. I want to see the subsequent plot development. I am very picky about reading books, and there are very few novels that I can finish. But if you can maintain stable quality and keep updating, I will definitely be able to order them all.

I'm too lazy to comment on those things about Shen Nong is Dead before I've finished watching them. The pace in the early stage is slow. After all, it's set before the main plot. The original content is like this. The pace is much better later on. It's just that the popularity is too low. I'm afraid it will be cut off someday 🙂

Seriously, when I look at so many Douluo fans, I rarely see a protagonist with such low subjective initiative. Other fan protagonists can tolerate it up to level 70 before starting to cause trouble everywhere. This protagonist has been banned as a Douluo, but he still shrinks to the Holy Spirit Cult and is a tortoise. Except for the fact that he planned to rob Electrolux, all the other opportunities happened by chance, and he never took the initiative to fight for them. When things happen, I sigh here and there. I never think about taking the initiative to change anything. I don't have the demeanor of a strong person. His strength is gained by chance, but his mentality is still completely ordinary. This kind of personality is only suitable for teaching in schools. The years are quiet and he should not go out to fight and kill. Even if you are a little cowardly in the early stage, you can still fight against level 98 Xuanzi, and you still only know how to obey orders. Now it is the protagonist who should create the main plot, instead of waiting for others to send him tasks to advance the plot. Can you understand? Author?

The protagonist can be more useless than Lu Mingfei

A rare normal Douluo fanfic

First of all, let me explain that this is one of the rare Dou Luo fan stories that tells its own story, rather than a mind-boggling protagonist who surpasses the Buddha. In my opinion, there is quite a lot of original content, and it is not the kind that just sticks to the main plot and eats the protagonist's tribute. I personally like the author's protagonist. He becomes an evil soul master and still maintains his kindness and bottom line The author chose a very contradictory and bold setting to let the protagonist be an evil soul master. It is obvious from the content of the first few chapters that the author wants the protagonist to face that kind of painful dilemma. He writes in the direction of sadism and is stuck between justice and evil. Going in the right direction will be painful, and going in the evil direction will also be painful. But he will soon stop and stop this kind of pain. Obviously, the author does not have the courage to write a character who struggles in pain, and in the end no matter what kind of torture and pain he suffers, he stays true to his heart. Sublimated Protagonist As I read the book, I became more and more helpless towards the protagonist. I want to give your protagonist and author a slap in the face. It is difficult for me to empathize with the protagonist. He seems to have a deep hatred. As a result, his behavior and performance are too casual, revealing a sense of ignorance. I want to love but not love, hate but not hate. Is it righteous or evil? I sometimes feel that you should write the plot more extreme and intense and kill some of the protagonists, which will cause exaggerated drama and contradictions. The character of the protagonist is too ordinary. He has a bunch of innocent people's lives on his hands. There is no specific guilt or pain. At most, he says silently in his heart, I'm sorry, I should kill or kill. I don't think about compensating those innocent people in the future. Looking at the protagonist's pure and pure appearance, I have to kill people with a compassionate and coy attitude. I can only say that it is weird. If the protagonist hadn't figured out the Holy Spirit Cult in the later period, there would be no god. I guess this weird state would have to continue. If I see that it is really the Tang Shenwang in the background, I estimate that the author will have to write another 2 million words to be promoted to the God King before he can barely dare to let the protagonist resist. At the same time, during this period, if the Tang Shenwang asks the protagonist to kill more innocent, poor people, or even people he likes and cares about. Then the protagonist then puts on a compassionate attitude that is different from you evil soul masters, and then kills the whole family. It is quite awkward and disgusting. It only shows that the protagonist cannot help himself. He has not seen the good side of human nature that he can't help himself. Evil is not evil enough The next thing is that good is not good enough. Please don't touch the edge and say that the protagonist is not a good person, but must be firm, he is a good person. In your writing, you sometimes emphasize intentionally or unintentionally that the protagonist is not a very good person. In my opinion, this is a very bad description. It makes me feel that all the so-called human goodness in your protagonist's previous works has a pretentious clown attitude All the bottom line insistence you described before has become a hypocritical and disgusting pretense. I don't have the capital to be kind. I can understand it. But a kind heart feels the same as those cut by Pinduoduo. I don't know. It will take a few more cuts to get it together. That's how it feels to me. But it got better in the later period. After getting stronger, I finally made a difference and was able to protect and do my best to help others. I was reading your book, and the more I read later, the less clear I became. What does the protagonist want? Author, you want to describe your protagonist. What do you want? I see that you chose a very contradictory subject to discuss. Is this a gimmick? Or are you sincerely thinking? If you want to have fun writing and make money, I think you should learn from the old timers and write more fun, use all kinds of tricks and collect harems, instead of being as frustrated as you are now. If you want to write a story that you want, your story can't be so awkward, but it must be determined, so that our readers can see your heart through your pen. When I see it now, I really don't know what the protagonist wants. Want power? Want to be invincible? Want to stay true to your heart? Want to be a good person? Want to be happy and happy forever? But I looked at the fearful, dark and twisted crawling, like an ordinary person who was struggling in pain, but still wanted to be better and a good person. In short, my last feeling after reading it, I feel that what I summarized is nonsense. I don't know what it means. The more I read your book, the more I want to read on, but I always feel that the more I read, the more confused I become...

Luo Li, don't have an awkward personality. You say one thing and do another. If you don't want to be an evil soul master, you will have more opportunities to run away and live in an ordinary place in the Three Kingdoms, but you will have no power. But you don't want to be an evil soul master just fine. But if you don't leave, you want power but refuse to accept the martial soul. You don't want to kill me, so you can just stay near the battlefield and finish the job. . . My cultivation base has risen sharply. I have been cultivating slowly while I am leveling up here. Then I complain about my fate as an evil soul master every time I have to face the danger of death. Anyway, you are doomed. Whether you cultivate it yourself or absorb it, if others see your cultivation level, they will only say that you are evil and have absorbed the cultivation level from others. Unless you have no cultivation and become a bitch setting up a memorial arch

Contra's knife to kill Soul Saint was blocked by the child Orange. This is not how things work in Hydrogen Continent. If you poke the child, it should explode directly. Otherwise, is this knife meant to tickle Xu?

1. As for the twins, if you don't get over them when they have grown old, then you will be ashamed of yourself, and you will be speechless if you don't dig a hole and bury it. 2. The relationship with Leslie Cheung is too abrupt, there should be more plots of the two of them taking care of each other on adventures 3. Orange was speechless after writing this 4. Kong Deming's level 10 writing was like a waste 5. There is also the issue of planes. You have given the Snow Emperor a spell to take away, why don't you just put all those Extreme Douluo Just accept it 6. If you forget about the natural disaster, you summon some skeletons and directly blow up the Dragon Emperor Soul Master Group, and make those soul masters sick and vomit, what do you write? 7. Why don't the opponents run away? You are less than half the strength of a 400,000-year-old soul beast to defeat a soul saint.

The first soul skill, the seed from the other side. Flowers that bloom on the other side of life and death lead people's souls to the underworld. Lin Xiao's martial spirit has been closely related to the soul since its awakening. Even Nightmare Douluo didn't know that his martial spirit could not only absorb the remnant souls of the dead, but also make use of these souls. Using flesh and blood as a guide, the first soul skill will produce dark red seeds, which will feed on the enemy's body and sprout until they bloom. And using the soul as a guide will also produce a new seed of the other side, which is no longer rooted in flesh and blood, but rooted in the soul and feeds on the spirit. The second soul skill, Germination. Use the seeds of the other side to absorb the opponent's power to strengthen yourself and sprout. The third soul skill, bloom. Detonate the flower of the other side. The fourth soul skill, resurrection. Just like a flower's life, after it blooms to its fullest, it will not wither, but turn into new seeds. Lin Xiao's fourth soul skill will also awaken new seeds of the other side from the surrounding broken bodies. And when his soul skill became a ten-thousand-year soul skill, the power of this soul skill was even more impressive. Within the range that his soul power could affect, all the blood and flesh turned into dark red seeds floating up. The fifth soul skill, Wangchuan Yin. The only ten-thousand-year soul skill beside Lin Xiao is not a powerful attacking soul skill, but an auxiliary soul skill that amplifies other soul skills. Drain the water from the Forgotten River and irrigate the flowers on the other side. The flowers on the other side around Lin Xiao are more colorful, and the eerie red lights up the entire cave. The second soul ring next to him lit up again, and as the gold-swallowing beast roared in pain, the injuries on Lin Xiao's body recovered quickly. The original second soul skill is to use the Seed of the Other Shore to absorb the opponent's power to strengthen itself and sprout. With the blessing of the fifth soul skill, this power will also act on Lin Xiao himself. The powerful physical power of the gold-swallowing beast is pouring into Lin Xiao's body continuously. The sixth soul skill, crossing the underworld. Lin Xiao's sixth soul skill is to consume soul power to make the flower of the other shore bloom to bear the injury on his behalf. When the flower of the other shore successfully parasitizes the opponent, the injury will be transferred to the opponent in the process. The 80,000-year-old gold-swallowing beast's left arm bone soul and bone technique melts gold. The soul bone that Lin Xiao obtained from the gold-swallowing beast possesses the most famous ability of the gold-swallowing beast. As long as it is within the scope of his power, all metals can be devoured by it and then used. The 100,000-year-old badger beast's right leg bone soul bone skill is in full bloom. (Summary, three stages, three increases) The leg bones of the badger beast have been absorbed by Lin Xiao. It was only with the help of the 100,000-year-old soul ring and soul bones that his soul power level broke through to level 75. The soul skill provided to Lin Xiao by the badger beast's right leg bone was the same soul skill that he showed when he fought with it, which could exponentially increase all his attributes. One hundred thousand year badger beast right leg bone soul bone skill, second stage, blazing. The right leg bone of the 100,000-year-old badger beast does not have two soul skills like other 100,000-year-old soul bones, but only provides one soul skill. But because of this, the effect of this only soul skill is far greater than that of other hundred thousand year soul skills. Under the blood-red light, the aura exuding from Lin Xiao increased again, and the breath of death filled the entire world. The third stage of the soul bone skill of the 100,000-year-old badger beast's right leg bone has returned to silence. The remaining soul power in Lin Xiao's body was squeezed out by him, and it quickly poured into his legs. The accumulated strength seemed to be beyond his ability to bear. Blood marks burst from the inside out, and blood-colored lines covered his entire face. Although there is living gold in the body that is constantly repairing, after using the soul bone technique to return to silence, Lin Xiao's body is still cracking, even exceeding the repair speed of living gold. The Hundred Thousand Years Old Ghost Faced Owl's Left Leg Bone Soul Bone Technique, Remaining Fragrance. When this 100,000-year-old ghost-faced owl's soul bone was in Nightmare Douluo's body, one of the soul skills provided to him was similar to teleportation. Nightmare Douluo relied on this soul skill to avoid Lin Xiao's attack and sneak attack from behind. When this soul bone was absorbed by Lin Xiao, it seemed that because Lin Xiao's soul ring contained the power of the Ghost-faced Owl, the soul skills provided by the soul bone changed slightly. As long as he activates the power of the soul bone, he can exchange places with any other flower. What is left in the place is just a phantom of the other flower. Just as the flower fades, its fragrance still remains, so Lin Xiao calls this soul bone skill - residual fragrance. One hundred thousand year old ghost-faced owl's left leg bone soul bone skill, blooming flowers. Absorb the gathered soul power and drop a flying kick from the sky. With a soul bone and throat bone attached, it can breathe underwater and sing with soul bone skills. Spiritual power pours out through sound. Combat skills, withered. The clothes on those ordinary alliance members seemed to have gone through endless years and become fragile. Just a simple movement made it unbearable and cracks appeared. The weapons in his hands were covered with mottled rust, as if they had reached their own end. The weeds on the ground, the creatures in the soil, and even the other shore flowers that bloom everywhere and symbolize death itself have also ushered in their destined moment of withering. Lin Xiao's body was completely covered by a black cloak, and under the cloak, there seemed to be endless power. That is not a soul skill, it is the result of his continuous attempts for more than ten years. It is something that appeared naturally after breaking the mental restriction in the battle with Ji Juechen. It is Lin Xiao's own combat skill that has been honed through constant fighting in the past two years.

Very good. The character of the protagonist is calm, rational and brainless. Although he looks cold and ruthless, he still has kind thoughts in his heart. The storyline is step-by-step and does not appear to be a disgusting plot. It has a storytelling feel. The author is not writing the kind of brainless cool novels and Long Aotian's secondary character. If you like this, you can leave.

I think it's quite interesting. I've read too many Douluo's cool articles, and I wanted to read something more normal.

It's too dull, there's no climax at all, and there's no motivation to keep reading. The main character is just a cold ice cube, and there's no one around him who's hot. There's no emotional stimulation at all, and the number of words in each chapter is pitiful.

If your Duel 2 fandom focuses on the quick and satisfying feeling of stepping on Shrek and kicking Tang San to death, this book may not be suitable for you. If you regard it as an original novel with the background of Dou 2, you will be surprised when it hits the airwaves. Let's talk about the advantages first: Detailed study of the original work (character relationships, timelines, etc. Are reasonable) Focus on the characterization of the story itself (many fans often have off-site factors that are actually very dramatic~) The plot setting is reasonable and step-by-step. I have my own judgment on the original characters but I don't kneel down or collapse the character. The decisive killing is not a saint, but there are normal people. Ethics Let's talk about the shortcomings The plot is too slow and requires readers to deal with the airwaves The protagonist is semi-invincible (invincible of the same generation) but because the opponent is too strong, he endures the humiliation. The plot setting is too long and it is not so "cool" A lot of pen and ink is used to portray the protagonist, but the needs of the plot lead to the image of the protagonist being just a thug with no emotions. The author wanted to write an emotional drama, but because the plot dragged on too long, the heroine has not yet entered the stage. Summary: A breath of fresh air among Dou 2 fans today. If you meet its radio wave, it is your unquestionable fairy grass. If you like anti-Tang anti-Shrek, then maybe this book is not your scope.

The good ones are not firm, the bad ones are not thorough. No wonder it's not too hot

Author, I have read your first two books, and they are both very well written. They are definitely the top level among Douluo fandoms! No matter how high the ratings of other fans are, their grasp of rhythm is not as good as the author's, which easily made me abandon the book! I just hope the author of this book writes more, three or four hundred chapters are not enough! I think it is easy to become a god in Douluo Continent, but it is difficult to defeat gods. I can write more words in a novel about conquering the gods as a mortal!

Author, don't be stupid and make an ending with a single female protagonist. If you don't have a female protagonist, you are right to have multiple female protagonists. A single female protagonist is just being funny.

What's the main plot? It feels like the running account didn't say anything and just kept accepting the situation.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long

Can we still see updates this year? Boss😭😭😭

Are you a native or a time traveler? Do you know the plot? ? ?

The timelines don't match

It can be said that Noumenon Sect is the force that is most in line with the core values ​​of socialism. In Dou 2, if Noumenon Sect wants to absorb more Noumenon soul masters, it must promote policies with positive impact, such as popularizing free martial soul awakening, free basic education in the first and second rings, and a stable and fair social order. Increase the civilian base and increase per capita GDP. From this point of view, the Noumenon Sect is more like an interest group that starts out as common people, has ordinary talents, has unlimited potential, has different qualifications, is supported by teachers, has knowledge ties, and can break through desperate situations. I hope to rewrite the development direction of Noumenon Sect and avoid repeating the same mistakes. Don't completely fall to Tianhun or any country. The Noumenon Sect should build its own power, absorb the Noumenon Martial Spirits of various countries, deeply study the essence of Martial Souls and soul guides, and then represent the interests of the most advanced knowledge and technology of the human race. Tianhun Xingluo is an alliance of big nobles. It advocates suppressing civilian soul masters, collecting taxes on the awakening of martial souls - if you don't have enough money, you will sell yourself, and invisible taxes on various highly sticky consumer goods during the cultivation process - buying raw materials from civilians at low prices and selling finished products at high prices to earn a large proportion of technical processing fees. On the other hand, in order to develop technology-soul guides, Sun and Moon need to vigorously recruit civilian geniuses, popularize basic education, free martial soul awakening fees, and make junior soul master colleges almost free, and build grassroots political power. Therefore, the higher-ups will know about the soul masters awakened by Sun and Moon Danfan almost immediately. Comparing the sun and the moon with the Heavenly Soul Star Luo Xiang, the fundamental interests of the sun and the moon are closer to the Noumenon Sect. The marriage between Tianhun and Vina is more like selling one's butt. Vina's first interest is still the royal rule of Tianhun. For this purpose, the main body can be sent up and down to fill in the lines. After the backbone of the main body died in the battle and could no longer bring benefits to Tianhun, he turned to the next generation of leaders of Shrek, hoping to repeat the previous routine against the main body sect: Wei Na sacrificed his life in exchange for the opponent's life to fill the battle line.       ，，， At first glance, this seems to be a lot easier to cooperate with one country to find the ontology, but at the same time, it is difficult to cooperate with other countries to find newly awakened people of the ontology. With the emergence of the top combat power of the Noumenon Sect, those who have awakened the new Noumenon martial soul will be hidden, suppressed, eliminated, and studied privately by the nobles, royal families, and soul master families. Based on this, the Noumenon Sect should not move closer to Tianhun Xingluo, at least openly neutral. Otherwise, if the Heavenly Soul Sun and Moon start a war, what will happen to the original soul master who was born in the noble family of the Sun and Moon in the original sect, and the original son fights against the father of the soul master? Instead, they can start preliminary cooperation with Sun and Moon. Sun and Moon hire Noumenon Sect to help hunt souls and output refining medicine and soul guidance tools. The main body sect collects the main body soul masters, food system, and auxiliary system through the sun and moon. Then use the ice marrow from Dilongmen to contact the Snow Emperor, and exchange half for friendship and half for soul bones. The two extremes of Poisonous Snow Emperor are just right enough to go to the Sun and Moon Arsenal to steal equipment. The most important thing is that you can use the top soul master resources at hand, skip the whole body without looking for the official political power, and secretly look for the 79th and 89th level soul masters who are approaching their end, to help them break through the Soul Saint Soul Douluo and extend their life for fifty years. The soul masters of 7989 were unable to break through due to insufficient martial soul potential, so they actively or passively turned to researching soul guidance devices. They have been immersed in them all year round, and their soul guidance knowledge and skills are definitely among the best at their level. To rescue them at this time is just like reselling state-owned enterprises back then, and it's all for nothing. Cultivate a group of rare and guardian soul beasts, and build a high-quality soul beast forest nearby. Form an alliance of your own/origin and win over humanoid spirits, such as Titan Spirit, Healing Angel Spirit, and Holy Angel Spirit. During the Soul Master Competition, it can be considered that some of the young soul masters of the main body will not participate in the name of the main body, but will join other teams during the competition period in the form of mercenary bidding. The first is to make money, the second is to make friends, the third is to obtain information, and the fourth is to find the soul master conveniently. There is no analogy between the civilians of Douluo and the civilians of real society. The civilian class in real society is the main source of soldiers for the army and the main source of force for the army. The main source of force for Douluo's army is Titled Douluo and ninth-level soul masters and the soul guides they make. The main source of troops is 4567 ring soul masters. Therefore, the civilians in Douluo do not include those without soul rings. It can be said that ordinary people in Dou 2 have no bargaining power, but Dou 3 is slightly more respectable. What can really be counted are children before awakening their martial souls at the age of six, and 123 ring soul masters. These are the common people in Douluo. I will make some arrangements, please note it down, author First, use your power to collect as many body souls as possible, such as Nether Nana's family of three (mother and daughter's soul souls), exert influence on the body soul owners, and increase the sense of identity and belonging to the protagonist. After most of the second level martial souls join the Noumenal Sect after a thousand years, they will seek the right to speak or influence based on their numbers (merits). Strive to change the ending of Dou Er's original text. Second, cultivate an organic soul master to research and create an echelon, recruit people, and build a team. Looking for the soul master whose 7989 deadline is approaching. Research new soul tools that forge metal and use physics knowledge. Third, hunt at sea and collect cultivation resources. Qi-blood shrimp, Qi-blood bread. Cultivate food-based soul masters. Refining various types of elixirs for cultivation, foundation building, and limit breaking. Fourth, find ways to increase the soul bone explosion rate. Fifth, avoid facing the sun and the moon directly. After the linked soul guide comes out, you will never be able to win.

The great elder is gone. It's a pity. New flavor. I think love, hate, and hatred will definitely be interesting to write down.

I don't want to see my own family suffer, and I don't want to see the enemy who will definitely be hostile in the future accomplish anything.

laughing to death

Is there only one female character card for Zhang Lexuan?