Ming Dynasty: Empress Ma's Brother Rescues Zhu Xiongying at the Beginning

The writing is very good, and the short drama flavor is very strong. It feels like watching a fictional historical short video. It can be seen that the author has done some market research. This style is not rigorous, but it is refreshing enough. But the rhythm is a bit draggy, which reminds me of a segmented short video, the feeling of saying one thing over and over again. The advantages and disadvantages are similar to short videos. It is refreshing enough, but the character logic cannot withstand too much scrutiny. On the other hand, the writing is excellent enough. To sum up, it is suitable for book lovers who like to watch short dramas and have some requirements for writing. Book lovers who have requirements for logic should proceed with caution.

You squeeze in toothpaste, a little bit every day

The writing is good, but the plot is a bit ridiculous. It feels like a female channel. A group of inexplicable women can actually play tricks on Lao Zhu and Xiao Zhu. An Lao Zhu's methods, let alone if you really do it, you can't live even if you have some ideas! How many beggar emperors can China have in 5,000 years?

After recognizing the relatives, we still need to reform finance, open up the sea, conquer Lingnan, Mongolia, and Liaodong, and conquer the world. Lots of things to do. Why are you so worried about acknowledging your marriage and even getting into a palace fight when the crown prince, princess, concubine and concubine are all so awesome? Lao Zhu, Queen Ma, the prince, and Jin Yiwei are all fools. This is a male-channeled novel, not a female-channeled novel. It's too procrastinating. I have a monthly pass, but I don't want to give it. If you don't recognize it when it is put on the shelf, I will abandon the book. You may not be short of me, not less of him, or not less of a bunch of readers.

All I can say is that I write scripts specifically for short plays. It can be understood as a novel version of a short play.

The writing is acceptable, but the plot is delayed and has too many bugs. The biggest problem is that the Jin Yiwei are all trash. They can't be found, and they can't be found out by checking individual cases. They protect a group of people who cause trouble, and even show off a knife in the hospital. How can Zhu Ying come back from the dead?

... Why does this way of writing feel uncomfortable? Female author?

At present, I have read 260 chapters, which is about forty or fifty chapters short of catching up. I feel very tired from watching it, very tired. I am very interested in the setting of Queen Ma's brother, but almost three hundred chapters have passed and the protagonist has been being plotted. All clues will be interrupted, and every time a breakthrough is found, he will be plotted by a larger conspiracy. Ma Tian only took the initiative when he was leading troops in battles. Although no one in the court could restrain him from doing things, and he could directly scold or even fight if anything went wrong, but in the main line of cracking the story of poisoning the queen and grandson, Ma Tian never went smoothly. Even Zhu Di, who worked with him, was the man in black robe who had been in contact with the murderer (Princess Qin). I can no longer read it at this point. I will come back and look at the table of contents after it is finished.

The capital is like a colander. The concubines underneath are communicating with each other and plotting all kinds of things without even realizing it. Jin Yiwei should commit suicide collectively.

King Zhu Xi of Qin is famous for doting on his concubines and destroying his wives. He loves the daughter of his second concubine Deng Shi Deng Yu. Now you have become a slave to Guanyin.

After reading a few chapters, it turns out that Zhu Yuanzhang didn't even send a few people to keep an eye on the hospital.

To put it simply, Wang Baobao's sister is not favored and treated very poorly. Secondly, it is impossible for Lu to be loved too much by Empress Ma, whether politically or personally. It is also true that the real one is gone and the right one is

If the protagonist does not become the emperor, then the protagonist must carry out comprehensive changes that limit the emperor's rights. It is useless if the protagonist just copies the technology of later generations and adds a few reforms. If a country wants to produce a large number of original inventions and creations, it must carry out systematic changes in ideological foundation, political structure, legal system, social forces and other aspects. The reason why Britain was the first to enter the Industrial Revolution is that after experiencing the ideological changes of the European Renaissance, coupled with the British Glorious Revolution of 1688, the king's rights were further restricted. Britain established the framework of parliamentary sovereignty and the rule of law, and the bourgeoisie, the new aristocracy, and the king formed a check and balance, which allowed British civilians to gain unprecedented freedom. At this time, the degree of freedom of scholars, craftsmen, and farmers in Britain was higher than that of other European countries at the same time, and it was far more liberal than the civilians of China's Ming and Qing dynasties. The high degree of freedom of all British civilians fully inspired everyone's strength. The power of the Chinese emperor was not greatly restricted, and all officials, gentry and landlords were dependent on the imperial power. The freedom of civilians, who account for the vast majority of the country's population, is too low. This system inhibits innovation and hinders social development. China's Zhou Dynasty was a feudal system, and the central government could not control much of the local princes' affairs. The princes competed with each other. During this period, Chinese civilization truly allowed a hundred flowers to bloom. Most of the essence of Chinese civilization came from this period. During the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, the "Mo Jing" recorded the principles of optics and mechanics, and the germination of geometry had emerged; the "Gan Shi Xing Jing" recorded astronomical observation data. But from the Qin Dynasty to the Qing Dynasty, there was almost no progress! The institutional innovation of the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods stagnated after the Qin and Han Dynasties, lacking the ability to dynamically adjust. Since the Qin Dynasty, especially since the Han Dynasty deposed all schools of thought and only respected Confucianism, Chinese civilization has almost stood still and entered a dead end. The Zhou Dynasty and the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period were similar to the ancient systems of most European countries. They were all feudal systems. Even in successive years of war, less than 10% of the country's total population died directly or indirectly as a result of the war. But from the Qin Dynasty to the Qing Dynasty, every dynasty would kill half or more of the country's population due to war! What is even more tragic is that every time there is a change of dynasty, there is almost no progress in the system and culture! {"NickName":"Supervision and Restriction","UserId":406440657}

I wrote it before but forgot later, Lao Zhu put a bunch of Jinyiwei in the hospital, and someone made trouble and beat up the suspected emperor's eldest grandson. Are these nine Jinyiwei leeks? Can it grow back after being cut? ?

At the plague place, after seeing the disease, Zhu Ying and Ma Tian smiled alike, and then Ma Tian fed him small sugar pills. If you do that, aren't you afraid of infection? He also prides himself on being a medical student, and most doctors, especially infectious diseases doctors, are mysophobic. Isolating the plague at home, how to ensure the material supply for the people in the city? I saw a lot of epidemic prevention methods, but not a word about how the people would live after the isolation. Have you ever heard of finding a cockroach? There are hundreds of cockroaches in the house. Xu Miaojin can get sick, and he justifies it by saying that he discovered it early. The ghetto has long since fallen. The author's writing style is good, but his logic is poor.

The queen's biological father. Brother. Nephew. Nephew. Cousin. Cousin. Cousin. My dear cousin. Cousin. Grandson of the hall. You can write 99 articles. Novel

Let's not talk about how it is written. In ancient times, did anyone have a name called "Tian"? The emperor is the Son of Heaven, and your name is Ma Tian. . Why are you the emperor?

It's so tedious and you have to do things submissively!

It's wrong for you to write Zhu Biao like this! Zhu Biao is so imbecile!

I feel that the setting is not good, just make it more fun. At most, I can just write down the Lu family's problem according to my guess. Princess Qin is not favored at all, and the Mongolian conspiracy is brought in, which is boring.

Very ink, there is always a mysterious force that prevents the main line from advancing

I can read it, but I can't use it to think about it. In fact, the daily writing is quite good, but the rest is very unsatisfactory. Just stick to history and study the details and just go ahead.

This kind of online article feels like it doesn't even need an outline. Authors with or without academic qualifications on various online article platforms feel that the writing is poor and there is no new ideas, let alone the characters. It feels like a template set, and the other book Guojiu Feichen is the same. After watching the video, I think it's okay. There are no historical events or character traits in the back! Make up a fictional historical figure with the same name! I don't even think the author needs to look up the history of the Ming Dynasty, the actual records of the Ming Dynasty, and the National Questionnaire! Make it up however you want...

How can I say that I was jumping to watch it? I feel like I can see it, but it's messy

Not enough, not enough at all! ! !

I can't stand it any longer. It was quite exciting at first, but after about 200 pictures, there are no locals in the Ming Dynasty protagonist circle.

Why did Xu Miaojin not show up later? I thought she was an official matchmaker.

It feels like all the characters are NPCs in the game, with only one dialogue action

How lucky is the protagonist to be able to hang around under Lao Zhu's nose without being killed?

That's not the eldest nephew, that's the nephew.