America, 1853: I'm Really Not a Troublemaker

1. The protagonist is already the governor, and the original owner of this body and his three main assistants are all German, but the book consistently refers to him as "Boss." This is neither in line with German cultural tradition nor is it very jarring.

Oh, you update so infrequently. I think I should kick your lazy ass hard with my big leather shoes so you'll know what the authority of the reader is.

The writing is too idealistic; it's a bit nauseating to read. The protagonist's saintly nature is excessive; he puts on a show to the point that he even believes it himself.

This book is a pity; it's already starting to fall apart. It was alright in the early stages when there was a detailed outline, but it's riddled with errors later on. The author clearly doesn't understand this era, let alone America at that time. He probably wrote it while researching. Actually, the author does have the ability to craft a plot. If historical accuracy isn't an option, they could write alternate history; there are quite a few alternate history novels set in similar eras.

The Civil War was a war between the Union and the Confederacy, but here the South is described as the Confederacy—what kind of nonsense is this? And they keep getting it wrong, calling the North the Confederacy instead. Couldn't they just write the South as the Union? It makes you want to stab the author!

In nine years, California's population grew from 110,000 to nearly 10 million. This wasn't during World War II; in the 19th century, an industrial population of 3-4 million was already incredibly powerful. And the protagonist didn't even have a base vehicle like in Red Alert. 😢😢😢

The more I write, the more boring it gets! The premise of pretending to be weak to deceive others is not to pretend for too long. Your updates are already not very good, and you keep dragging your feet. The more I read, the more boring it gets.

This kind of plot is so ridiculous! I hide all the good stuff, nobody knows, I clearly have the strength but pretend I don't, I can solve things with my own strength but I have to resort to scheming. Everyone thinks they've seen my underwear, but they've only seen the underpants. I'm absolutely fed up with this kind of thing. Basically, all farming-themed stories do this.

Has one of the author's books been banned?

The pacing is a bit off. The story of killing the rancher took over ten chapters, and the jeans story also had some content, albeit slowly. Then suddenly, guns are invented, the San Francisco government is overthrown, and immigration and colonization of Japan are all over the place. First of all, there's no reasonable reward and punishment system.