America, 1853: I'm Really Not a Troublemaker

1. The protagonist is already a governor, and he and his three main assistants are all Germans, but he is always called "Boss" in the book, which is not in line with German cultural traditions and is also very abrupt. A group of Germans in a Chinese novel call their leader "Boss" in English (according to the author's intention, they even say Boss in a German context). In fact, Germans generally call leaders "Führer" or Der Führer, or directly use the Chinese "leader" instead of inserting the strange word "Boss" into a bunch of Chinese characters. 2. Becoming a governor has taken up almost half of the total article, but there is no description of his governance structure at all. One chapter even describes California's members in the U. S. Senate, but what are these members called? How does the protagonist deal with it? Who do they answer to in Washington? There is no description at all, it is completely empty, and after all, this is not a cat or dog position. In reality, California has established a Senate, House of Representatives, courts, National Guard and other institutions since 1849, but in the book they are all empty. It is not known how the author handled this, nor who specifically held these positions. After all, this is a state, the 31st state in the United States. It is not an unimportant little village. The US government has troops stationed in California. 3. The author can compare the quality of your first ten chapters with the quality of your current article. But now the main content is almost entirely empty.

Oh, you have so few updates. I think I should kick your lazy ass with my big leather shoes so that you know what the authority of readers is.

The things written are too idealistic and a bit disgusting to read. The protagonist's mother's heart is too serious. It's so staged that you even believe it.

It's a pity that this book is a bit broken now. It was okay when there was a detailed outline in the early stage, but there are a lot of mistakes in the later part. The author doesn't understand this era at all, let alone the United States in this era. He probably wrote it while looking up information. In fact, the author still has the ability to arrange plots. If history is really not good, you can write fictional history. There are quite a few fictional novels similar to this era.

In the Civil War, the Union and the Union were fighting. What the hell is it that the South is written as the Confederacy? The North is always wrongly written as the Confederacy. Couldn't the South be properly written as the Union? This makes people want to slap the author twice.

In nine years, California's population has grown from 11 to 20,000 to nearly 10 million. It is not at the industrial level of World War II. The industrial strength of the 19th century, with a population of three to four million, is already a cheat among cheats, and the protagonist does not have a red alert base or a car to build 😢😢😢

The more I write, the more boring I get! The prerequisite for pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is not to pretend for too long. Your updates are not very good in the first place, and you keep procrastinating. The more you watch, the more boring you become.

Damn it, I hide all the good things so that no one knows about it. I obviously have the strength but I have to pretend to have no strength. I obviously have the strength to solve the problem, but I have to use conspiracy. Everyone thinks they saw my underwear, but in fact you saw my leggings. I am really tired of this kind of plot. This is basically what farming does, and I have no strength. What the hell, if I have the strength, I will still do this. I will almost reach the late stage when I wait, and then I will make a fierce appearance, and then the ending will be over. I am so tired of this operation. You said that the protagonist has no shortage of territory, strength, population, finance, and military. I have to engage in conspiracy, as if there is no such thing as a spy. Can secrecy really be achieved to this extent in that era? Anyway, when does the protagonist lead the world for hundreds of years and when does it feel like he can come out?

Did the author have a book that was banned?

There may be something wrong with this rhythm. I wrote more than ten chapters about Killing a Farmer, and I also wrote some chapters about Jeans. Although it is slow, it still has something to it. Then suddenly guns were created and the San Francisco regime was suddenly wiped out, and then immigrants and colonial Japan flew out. First of all, they did not write a reasonable reward and punishment system. They eliminated the political power so that everyone would not take corruption and bribery. They were afraid that they would not be satisfied with the municipal reform because they were afraid of the consequences. . . To be honest, it was a bit empty when I saw it before it was put on the shelves. Except for the salary status of the jeans on the front, there was no mention of various industries at the back. It looked like they were all selfless. In addition to the prophetic conditions given by the author, without any golden fingers, he is a bit like a humanoid succubus. Without rewards and punishments, does he not take bribes? Besides the police chief, who else is actually running errands? The organizational structure is in shambles. . .