Everlasting Life

Have you ever been a lamp? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted 😅

In Chapter 10, the author probably originally wanted to write about Jiang Zhu's story about good and evil in people's hearts. Evil people have evil hearts, so they can't seek immortality. But unfortunately, Ayan's writing was off-kilter. It didn't reflect goodness, but was more about greed. In the end, painting a tiger would not turn out to be an anti-dog.

The protagonist is an elf, who is suspected of being reborn. He is born with knowledge, has no desires and desires, is not "persistent", and has a compassionate heart that is high-minded but down-to-earth. The first two temple owners sacrificed everything just to seek immortality. After the protagonist woke up and saw the tomb on the mountain behind, he imagined the evil deeds of the temple owners and believed that these two people had done many evil things. These two people make the protagonist disgusted, and the protagonist looks on with cold eyes. Every time he wakes up, he discovers the evil consequences of the two, and then he feels evil in his heart. Unfortunately, the protagonist has no ability to interfere. Every time the viewer does evil, he is asleep, and there is really nothing he can do. When the first viewer was about to die, the protagonist felt pity and revealed his true body to tell him why he could not seek immortality. Later, the second viewer also touched the protagonist just before death. The protagonist was so compassionate that he revealed his true body again and took the initiative to tell him why he could not seek immortality. The strange thing is that both of them died with regrets, and there is no subsequent description. However, the miraculous experiences of the two temple masters before their death were known to a third person, and spread to the temple master's family. The next step is that the protagonist saves a little girl. After the little girl grows up, he helps the little girl with a knife when encountering injustice. While rescuing the distressed, he is also studying how to live forever and keep his beauty forever. When she dies, the protagonist inadvertently picks the "fruit" that the girl has spent her life condensing. In the end, the protagonist gets the benefit. The main character wandered outside and was rescued by a greedy old couple. The main character felt pity for the two when he saw them, and once again helped them get through the current difficulties. Later, he learned that they were a farmer and a snake, so he no longer had mercy and watched them carry out their conspiracy, and saved the poor people at the critical moment. The poor man is a truly kind person, always generous to others, sending money door to door, even if he sees through the scheme of the old couple, he just hides it obediently, allowing their grandson to spread rumors to smear him in the outside world. The villagers repay kindness with hatred and cannot understand the good deeds of the truly kind man, and are greedy and want more. The truly kind man feels uncomfortable but continues to do good deeds. Later, the emperor accidentally learned of the existence of immortals, and deliberately planned the protagonist. The protagonist had to go through difficult times and pass through them easily. Isn't it a disaster? It's so exciting, but what finally falls in front of the protagonist is just a speck of dust, even if the protagonist is still a young elf, this kind of plot is simply outrageous. After that, the protagonist wandered around again, woke up and felt pity and saved a girl. This girl was even more greedy. She was innocent and childlike. She wanted everyone on the island to be immortal, and she wanted her relatives to be with her forever. Not only did the protagonist not resent this, but he asked the girl with deep eyes. Not only was he not afraid that the girl would set her sights on him, but he also believed that the girl was kind in nature. He thought it was caused by the girl being too naive. Her intentions were pure, how could she be evil? Later, the girl abandoned her mother and finally found her father after leaving home for a long time. She also had a younger brother who was not related by blood. The girl loved her new brother deeply and gave him whatever he asked for. Mortals have to die one day, and her father is about to die. The girl is looking for longevity and life-extending medicinal materials everywhere, intending to refine elixirs to extend the life of her father. As a result, the girl's luck is against the will of heaven, and her wish comes true. For such a greedy person, the protagonist is filled with joy, compassion and continuous support. Not surprisingly, after the girl died, all her "fruits" were obtained by the protagonist. The protagonist only needs to be aloof, pity him and pity her, have no desires, no demands, no persistence, rush to deliver the benefits to the door, take the benefits and give away compassion, the cycle is endless. This is a holy scripture, let's call it good, the protagonist is not pure, call it evil, the protagonist does not do evil, the protagonist has a smooth journey and gets one benefit after another, and the good elf setting is neither fish nor fowl.

There are creative ideas, but the characters are really a bit flat. The characters created have no characteristics or even advantages and disadvantages. Good guys and bad guys are like this. It just feels like it has flaws. If it settles a bit, it feels like it could be a masterpiece.

Although her daughter's life is short-lived, at least she is still the same person as she was before. But if you give her a Nirvana memory and then rebirth, there is no difference between this and extinguishing her soul and replacing her with a new one. You can change the way to make her disease better. After all, you are the author, so it's up to you to do it with your hands.

I just signed the contract. Author, are you selling your lies?

. It's a pity that the author can't grasp it after all.

Downcast eyes are used too much. Even the main character is indifferent to fame and wealth. He keeps using this word. Even the main character himself says this sentence. It seems very hypocritical to be so condescending. Also, does everyone in this area care about Drooping Eyes? It cannot be because of being favored, favored or favored by immortals, or having deep blessings. When everyone says the same thing at the same time, it makes me feel weird. Also, I never knew that the author didn't have the writing skills, so the "small" plot was easier to write. In fact, it's good to have more supporting characters appear. The protagonist appeared less in the front, but after it was released, the number of appearances was very large. It is equivalent to temporarily changing the protagonist, from a group portrait to a one-man show in which the protagonist appears in a large space.

The writing is quite good, but the portrayal of the latest protagonist Yaoyao is a bit strange. I read the author's reply that he wanted to write about an ordinary person, but I feel that it was written too much, or that Yaoyao asked for too much. For this kind of device logistics, the protagonists change very quickly, and there are not enough words to describe it. The simpler it is written, the more likable it is, but if it is written too much, it seems too thin. I have read a book on similar artifacts from an external website (I have a magic sword). The book contains almost 100 or 200 pictures of a sword master. Some of the characters portrayed in it are still impressive to me even after three or four years. I hope the lamp holders will change more slowly after the candles lead people to the immortal path. Characters are more attractive when there is enough text to describe them. Otherwise, creating a slightly more complex character like now would cause a lot of controversy. It's caused by the lack of text and the thin characters. There is not enough text to support your character.

It's all riddles. This book is going to be scrapped.

These two girls are greedier than the other

He's still a eunuch, double opening is a bad premonition, there's no need to chase him!

I'm very curious about the so-called non-karma. When I first watched it, I thought it was pretty good, but I had to raise a daughter. After raising a few, they all turned to the male protagonist. Then when the first male protagonist, Li Qingchen, had to do a lot of trouble and get married, what are the consequences? Concubine demon, do you want this? Do we have to go to West Kunlun later? Half clear, half turbid but not turbid, this is the author's protagonist It is better to have a big dream, go to sleep directly, and let everything return to dust. A journey, to that temple, to Baiyun Temple, a complete return. This journey should be over. It should not involve the protagonist's past, jade pendants, or this or that.

The conversation between the protagonist and the two viewers before they were dying was too out of character 🙂

How can I put it, the distant and ethereal atmosphere has been portrayed, it is not similar to other texts, it is really rare The biggest problem is that the Chinese charm of the text is lacking, mixed with some translation style restraint, not pure enough

I finished reading it, and it was a bit unfinished. The ending was neither good nor bad, and it was empty. What the female protagonist doesn't have is that Yun Meng is dead, Jiu Meng is half a Taoist couple, and he is gone. The lonely male protagonist is alone in the end after living his whole life In general, the first two generations are struggling elites, and there should be several generations in between. The last one is just like a salted fish lying flat, waking up and looking at the world. There is nothing you can do to keep others. Eternal to myself.

It gets more and more mysterious later on and it's a bit hard to watch...

It's very creative and makes me want to read on. It's well written. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The character creation is a little bit poor and the plot develops too fast. Some parts look like a simulator. The author should polish the plot and character creation more carefully. There are also some contradictions and loopholes in the plot, but these are minor problems. I suggest the author read more of both sides. The last point is that the plot is too fast, or it is due to the writing style. The feeling of time passing through the vicissitudes of life is not described, and there is no sense of time when reading, it is dry.

Narrative writing, which style is very similar to Ya She? The author is a big 6

I just saw it released and I think it's good, so I subscribed to the next 20 chapters. However, I won't continue reading it tonight. After all, it's already very late. Let's briefly talk about my feelings after reading it so far before going to bed. It can be seen that the author of this book has his own thoughts. The novel is quite interesting. To give a rough overview, it is a group portrait of ancient cultivation that uses immortality as bones, the Classic of Mountains and Seas and other mythical creatures as anchors, and the various representative trajectories of human beings as meridians. I think the best thing to watch is the ups and downs of life at the beginning of practice. Next, let's talk about the characteristics of this article. First, the protagonist is the green lantern elf, who can care for the person holding the lantern and indirectly affect the world. But he cannot wake up all the time. Therefore, each lampholder retains his own subjectivity, and the arc of the character is more obvious. Secondly, this article uses the Spring and Autumn style of writing, which has quite a Western epic style. In addition to the author's good writing style, the portrayal of each lamp-holder is different. Although there is a little overlap in some places, the flaws are not concealed. Third, the author adds his own thinking. The life of every lamp holder has a certain degree of philosophy. Summary: People who like the plain style of group portraits and think about the philosophy of cultivating immortals can take a look. —————————————— The following are my views on the controversial issues among book friends (you can take a look if you are interested) Well, first of all, it is the issue of rhythm. Many book friends think this article is very good, but the disadvantage is that it is too fast. You can write slower and more detailed, but I think it is not necessary. The author uses the Spring and Autumn style of writing and pays attention to conciseness. Moreover, writing in detail is not necessarily better. It is precisely because it is quick and not detailed, and only focuses on describing the outstanding characteristics of the characters, that the response is good. If you really write in detail, it will not only easily conflict with the author's writing style, but also greatly increase the risk of refutation and collapse of the character. Secondly, some people think that Ayan, Yaoyao and others are too greedy, dislike them, and think that they are not worthy of the care of the protagonist. This situation ignores an important message. They are human beings and extremely complex animals. They are not like the protagonist who is not obsessed with anything. They must be greedy, and greed itself is one of the factors in the development of the story. And what are they greedy for? Isn't it a normal desire to pursue immortality and want the people around you to live forever? How many protagonists in fairy tales do not pursue immortality? Once the position of the main partner is changed, will it become a heinous thing? The author's writing of this kind of greed proves that he is indeed portraying a character seriously.

Originally, the lamp was wandering, from the perspective of a supporting character. After Yaoyao, the lamp became the central point, and it was very sudden and inexplicable. It gave me the feeling that the whole world was playing a game of chess around the lamp.

The author has published a new book? Readers who are half-hearted don't like you. You can write and save it quietly. I will publish a new book after you finish it. If you do this, I don't even want to support you with the official version. What are you thinking about?

I ordered it to 97, thinking about raising it first, and the latest writing is 150+... Already a eunuch?

Double opening? Or is this going to give up?

Isn't this plagiarism? I'll look for the original novel.

I found this work of yours. Has merit and karma. But cause and effect is missing. It's because there is no cause and effect. So public morality and flying around at night. Of course, you can also let character bring in the cause and effect later. Of course, you have to write clearly about cause and effect. A certain level is required. Of course I'm not talking about the writing level. And merit and karma are so easy to get stuck. It seems that Tiandao is very stupid. And I feel that the way of heaven in the novel is still too biased towards humans. What is more accurate is not the way of heaven, but merit and karma. The way of heaven is ruthless. Unless you are useful to the world. Otherwise, it doesn't matter how great or awesome you are. Tiandao doesn't even bother to look at you. Of course I know there is no such thing as the Way of Heaven in your novel. But if there are such things as merit and karma, there will definitely be the way of heaven.

This book is well written and worth taking the time to read. I hope the author can continue to polish and expand the content. In addition, I saw that the author has published a new book, and I hope it will not affect the update of this book. 🥲

This kind of spiritual cultivation article is indeed rare, but it is very touching, especially Lao Wang, who feels the ordinary and returns to the ordinary

... Has the author's mood improved recently? He has published a new book. The few chapters before and after "Fusheng" gave people a very depressing feeling. I thought I couldn't continue writing. It couldn't be because he was scolded like that... I hope the author can keep his original intention in writing this novel and not let some bad comments affect his creation. The style of this novel is so special, and it has the smell of immortality... . 😴

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