Swallowed Star: Beginning with Great Axe's Life-and-Death Battle

I almost vomited when I saw the beginning of the Earth. The process is exactly the same. First, I will pass the martial arts test, then practice combat, then spawn monsters, then become the number one on Earth, then fly to the Horned Dragon, with a few years in between, win the first place in the genius battle, then 30 years in Chaos City, then go to get the Blood Crystal, and then the Territory Lord will go to the universe. Country, then the world lord goes to the battlefield outside the territory, then breaks through immortality, and then gets a little more awesome, lays the foundation of the law of time and space before immortality, the Lord of the Universe does not need to wait, directly becomes the Lord of the Universe in one step, then brushes the original star, brushes the universe sea, and then finishes, the outline is almost the same 😅

The protagonist is too independent. He doesn't want to join a big force for the sake of freedom. If you have such a good talent, you can definitely join a force and realize it. It doesn't have to be a virtual universe company, even if you, the author, make up a big force. In Devouring, you can't get far without some background. No matter how talented the protagonist is, he is just a realm master. If he encounters a more powerful lord, he will still die. To put it bluntly, if the protagonist's 10,000-fold gene is unlucky enough to be discovered by the master of the alien universe, then the protagonist will be just a consumable. If you don't click on the background, you won't be able to shake it if you want to. There is also the talented Hunyuan Battle Body. He only needs resources, but he still wants to rely on himself. From ten thousand times the gene to one hundred thousand times the protagonist, how long can he earn by himself? It is better to rely on power. There is also the issue of knowledge. The protagonist is just a country bumpkin. Does he know which secret realm to go to to earn what resources? Joining Hongmeng will give you an additional trading platform. In terms of experience, you must be the master of the universe who has lived for who knows how long. Why don't you find a golden thigh to hug you? No matter how talented you are, you are just a person on the roadside before you grow up. The Hunyuan Battle Body and Xiaosi, two resource-eating golden fingers, are simply not suitable for the protagonist's wild development route.

The writing is okay, but there is a problem with the setting, so I should change it to something more reasonable. 1. The Giant Ax Battle Arena will not let others pick up the trophies. The purpose of the competition is to stimulate the potential of the contestants and hope that they will break through in battle, but material guarantees such as trophies are also indispensable. 2. How can a slave, not even a citizen, sign up to participate in foreign battlefields? Do you really think you can go there if you don't even have a registered permanent residence?

Such an awesome boss is bound to you by life and death. Wouldn't he want to break it off??? Goldfinger's biggest failure is that he is wise. This is to screen readers!!!

As long as it's not Earth, the genius battle route is worth a try.

A bit hasty! The heroine shouldn't be made so strong! You have to know that you have a thousand times more genes to reach this level! Why should she? Why bother writing 19 layers? I reached the top after writing to level 18! She is not even the number one master of the original secret realm! Except for monsters like Cody, the average world leader is at level 18 at most! That's just the beginning of hundreds of thousands of years of cultivation! How could someone who was not even the number one world lord improve so much with a venerable enlightenment? Being able to reach the 18th level so quickly is enough to offset the Venerable's enlightenment! Devouring has no special requirements for the heroine, so whether the heroine is strong or not has no impact on the readers! Author, please stop your death-seeking behavior! It's rare that I come across a book that I'm willing to spend money to read!

The inexplicable underground slave story line, as long as it has some effect on the protagonist, I don't understand what it has any effect other than the word count and bad money. What a good book.

It's very well written. It's about rising from the bottom slowly and don't upgrade too quickly. It's wonderfully written.

If you look at how Nuo Lanshan died in the original book, you will feel that the introduction of this book is nonsense. Unless you are a wanted criminal of the human race, you will go to the battlefield outside the territory.

The beginning of this book is very similar to that of Holy Lord Qinglian, but the subsequent development is different. Each has written its own story. The advantage is that the plot of this book is completely deviated from the original work. The disadvantage is that some settings are also deviated from the original work.