From Raising Elephants to Immortality

If a martial artist can't even calculate the strength of a single person, yet can throw a stone weighing tens of thousands of pounds, then his martial arts training has been in vain.

The logic is a bit off from the start. The Zhu family are just ordinary wealthy people, raising a money-devouring beast they can't control at all, and it doesn't even become a fighting force. At best, they'll be ruined and forced to surrender to the enemy. And yet, they still have to bleed the elephant and the protagonist dry. Are these completely brainless tools, solely dedicated to serving the protagonist?

Have you ever raised an elephant? You just write random, nonsensical things, based on assumptions.

The protagonist is like a rat in the gutter; what's the use of leveling up for so long? A piece of trash in the eyes of outsiders.

The elephant is the protagonist's father. Give all the good stuff to the elephants. Including True Spirit Blood, Fourth-Rank Heavenly Seal, and so on. It really disgusted me.

Generally speaking, it's a bit of a classic trope. The whole world seems peaceful, except for the protagonist, who constantly radiates a faint aura of mockery. Coupled with his meddlesome nature and lack of perspective, he lives and dies in a small, isolated place.

Why not learn long weapons? Elephant riders are riders too! They just stand there watching elephants kill people every day; you could at least shoot an arrow!

The author could at least consult an AI. Mammoths live in cold environments, feed on grass and moss, dislike water, and don't eat fruit. The most likely explanation is that they didn't recognize the fruit being offered. If the author is going to write about mammoths, they should at least make sense of the narrative. Writing this off the top of their head results in incoherent and disjointed writing.

The novel actually gets more and more exciting as it goes on. But that cheat code has basically disappeared now, right? Previously, players relied on grinding various professions to gain experience points and unlock powerful martial arts skills. But are there any new professions now? The golden finger has almost disappeared, hasn't it?

Not bad, not bad. The beginning gave me the feeling that even protagonists can rely on their connections and power. 😁