Overpowering the Martial World: Starting with Foresight

1. It's not clear what this cheat is about. It is said that it can only be used after 8 years of death. After 8 years, the effect is like eating a stone. Then don't you have to be careful when using it in the future? If it is stuck for another 8 years, it will be useless. It takes 8 years to search 30 kilometers, and only 10 days to find a sister across the country. You don't even understand this setting. 2. Write a mother, and the character you portray is annoying. Forced to marry, favoring sons over daughters, etc. Why, those little gangsters like married women. The protagonist, a modern person, has no explanation. He married a wife when he was oppressed. Whether he can afford to support her or not, the child is definitely not yours 3. The brother-in-law's eldest brother found a gangster to molest the protagonist's sister. In the previous article, I wrote that my brother-in-law is a love brain and has better martial arts talent than his elder brother. The little gangster really fell in love with the protagonist's sister. Not only did the brother-in-law kill the gangster, he also had to go back and tell his elder brother: The way to death. The big family is embarrassed and has no brains? Isn't this kind of plot without brain?

The main character's mother is always urging her to get married, which makes me annoyed when I read it. The author's writing is very real, which makes me feel the real irritability 😎

After being put on the shelves, there are many poisonous points. The author should just sort it out and prepare to write a new book. 1. There are too many relatives, and he randomly found a wife and gave birth to children. The author's brain circuit is really invincible 2. The warriors transformed in 2 and 3 are all over the place in the second and third parts of the demon-slaying part. You can't see any of them in the front. The protagonist is so mysterious that he becomes weak 3. A protagonist who is decisive in killing often makes some witty quotes, which is very funny to watch.

The book is a good book. The first few dozen chapters are still very immature. From Chapter 49 onwards, I always feel that the author of the book has changed to a different person. The fighting scenes and the behavior of the pig's feet have completely changed. This has caused the novel to go up a level. Anyway, it is very interesting. Come on.

The background setting of the characters is really bad. Time travel means time travel. I have to deal with so many relatives for the protagonist. The father is dead and the mother is still there. The eldest sister is married, the second sister is missing and the third sister is still young. I am convinced. The father is dead and still causes trouble for the protagonist. People from the big family beat people in the street. Then The protagonist's father couldn't stand it, went to fight with him, was injured, and then died within a few years. He was really speechless. The protagonist's golden finger searched for a thing for eight years before it was completed. In the end, the thing was found in the protagonist's house. It was really speechless and extremely poisonous.

It digs a hole in the first chapter. The third sister disappears, the father is injured by a powerful man, and the eldest sister is not welcomed in her husband's family. There are too many settings at the starting point. Readers read too much, and it is easy to persuade them to quit at the beginning. The setting becomes a trap, and the writing is not brilliant, so it is easy to fall into the cliché and persuade them to quit.

My inspiration for writing this book actually came from the Romance of the Gods, such as bloodlines. I regarded the weird ones in the list of gods as bloodlines, such as the giant spirit general at the beginning, the protagonist's sky eye... If you are interested, you can use your imagination and post some interesting ones.

You can obviously write that the protagonist has just traveled to the past, but you have to write that the protagonist has traveled eight years ago. As a result, the golden finger cannot be used, and it is stuck for eight years. Isn't this setting a trap for yourself? The protagonist, Goldfinger, is a search engine. The shorter the terms you search, the wider the scope, and the more results you will get. The protagonist comes up and defines bloodline and safety for himself. You can choose either of these two words without being stuck for eight years. It took eight years to finally unlock the Goldfinger. Without using your brain, you searched for your sister directly for the second time. Can you find him or save him? Let's not talk about whether you can search for me, just assume that you can go there if you have found me? Can you save it? To sum up, there is only one definition for this protagonist - he is so ambitious and has no brains.

I don't know why you have to write about parents. Seeing that Chapter 20 has been urging marriage, what else can I do if I have the final say. . . Hiding something or something. . . Hehe. Disgusting readers? I can't stand it anymore. . .

I can only say that it is a talent for the protagonist to be so ordinary when cheating.