Overpowering the Martial World: Starting with Foresight

1. The details of this "golden finger" feature are not clearly explained. It's said that you can only use it after 8 years of reckless action. After 8 years, it has the effect of eating stones. Does that mean you have to be extremely careful when using it afterward, in case you get stuck for another 8 years? What's the point then?

The protagonist's mother's constant nagging about marriage is really annoying; it's irritating to read. The author writes it very realistically, making me genuinely feel her frustration. 😎

The book has been criticized extensively since its release, so the author should probably take a look and start writing a new book. 1. Too many relatives, and he just randomly picked a wife and had children. The author's thought process is truly unbelievable.

The book is good. The first few dozen chapters are a bit immature, but starting from chapter 49, "The Handsome Young Man," I felt like the author had changed completely. The fight scenes and the protagonist's behavior were like a completely different person, elevating the novel to a whole new level. Anyway, it's very good. Keep it up!

The character background settings are truly toxic. It's one thing to transmigrate, but why give the protagonist so many relatives? His father is dead, his mother is still alive, his eldest sister is married, his second sister is missing, and his third sister is still young. Seriously, even after his father's death, he still causes trouble for the protagonist.

The very first chapter sets up a cliffhanger: the third sister is missing, the father is injured by a powerful figure, and the eldest sister is disliked in her husband's family. These kinds of settings are all too common on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), and readers are easily discouraged from starting a story. If the premise becomes a trap and the writing isn't particularly engaging, it easily falls into clichés, which also discourages readers from reading further.

The inspiration for this book actually came from the Investiture of the Gods. For example, regarding bloodlines, I took those strangely shaped characters in the Investiture of the Gods as bloodlines, such as the Giant Spirit General at the beginning and the protagonist's third eye... Anyone interested can use their imagination and post something they find interesting.

You could have written that the protagonist had just transmigrated, but you insisted on writing that the protagonist had transmigrated eight years ago. As a result, you didn't know how to use the cheat ability and got stuck for eight years. Isn't that just setting yourself up for trouble?

I don't know why you wrote about characters with parents. Chapter 20 is just constant pressure to get married; what else can you do now that you've made your own decisions? Hiding things and all that... Ha! Are you trying to disgust the readers? I can't read any more...

It's a talent that the protagonist, despite having cheat codes, can still be so ordinary.