Weird Cultivation of Immortality: I Became a Saint by Breaking the Rules

You can't write about things that are always dangerous. If there is danger, how many people are left? Will there be order in society? After all, the extraordinary power in novels must have a foundation, and when there are more ordinary people, more powerful people can be born. For example, if there are 100 people or 1,000 people, a warrior will be born. Warriors must eat meat, so there will always be people at the bottom who farm and breed. The social environment you wrote about is so bad, why do warriors farm? If warriors don't farm, then ordinary people are used as slaves to farm, and ordinary people are used as consumables? . .

It's not good to sell the house deed to anyone. If you have to sell it to your uncles and aunts who are taking over your pharmacy, they can take away your pharmacy, but they can't take away the house deed from you?

The story design should have great potential, but the writing is too poor, and many of the dialogues are really awkward... And the protagonist is quite stupid...

In Chapter 1, the selection process begins. The uncle and aunt seize the family property left by the original owner's parents and drive the original owner out of their home. Is this some girl's novel?

The golden finger is a bit big, it's already awesome if you can just see through the rules, and you can add unlimited points, so it doesn't have that scary, weird and tense feeling, it's just a fun read

For the sake of plot, I forced myself to change into half-human and half-demon, the logic is completely messed up. Which level will you watch with gusto🙂

The whole story is about danger coming, why don't you take a break?

In this weird world, why is the official agency's ability to kill weird people not shown? Can humanity survive with the protagonist alone?

The training secrets were released so early, but the results are still changing blood four. Speed ​​up and collect them as soon as possible.

Oh, it's been two days since I updated. Is it getting cold?

Didn't you say red hair and red eyes? You can shave off your hair, but what about your glasses?

Chapter 103 has 230,000 words. The male protagonist has always encountered enemies, slashing people and killing ghosts, and then... He is not crazy. What I don't understand the most is that at the beginning, there are strange rules for killing people, such as the upside-down ghost, such as the trading ghost with a bug, and then... Nothing happens anymore, he keeps slashing and killing. Where is the main line of the title of your novel? The ones that were found dormant were just to create something like 18 levels of hell in their bodies. They were always in Novice Village and could not stop for a moment!

To sum up, the potential is good, but the writing skills still need to be trained.

The writing is pretty good, keep it up.

Can the word "er" be omitted?

It's quite novel to watch this kind of thing for the first time, but the protagonist seems to lack a background now. It would be more convenient to study the resources systematically if you have a background.

Seeing the word "ER" makes me want to hiccup.

I can recommend some books to you. A good book with a soul. Your reading will rise to a new level after reading it. The path of Xuanchen. Records of mountains and seas.

After using the beauty mask, you must sleep with a female ghost. You can make up 108 beauties to make 36 Tiangang and 72 earth evil spirits.

Looking at the name, I thought this book was plagiarized. Then I looked at the introduction and asked, "Hey guys, are you sure it's not plagiarized?"

My writing is becoming more and more mindless and irrelevant.