From Playing the Erhu at Full Health to a Martial Arts Legend

In Fengyun, you don't have Yan Ying, a strong mount. Who knew you were a master? 🤓🤓🤓 Fire Qilin has been withdrawn from the version.

The setting of interference degree is very unpleasant. It is recommended to use it as a plot collapse indicator. A world with destiny can be used as a danger detector. In an ordinary world without destiny, don't add plot closure without authorization. The biggest attraction of traveling through different worlds is the change. I am reminded of a novel next door. The protagonist has no choice but to practice the art of lowering his head (the author thinks he is right), and then does good deeds in all worlds, but is he targeted in every world? ? ? None of the evil characters in the original work were targeted in this way, and the protagonist who came to do good things was made things difficult for him at every turn, which made people feel uncomfortable.

The novel version of Love in a Fallen City is simply amazing. The sword of the martial saint Guan Yu exceeds the speed of light.

What's the biggest failure? The experience card makes the protagonist's strength uncertain and I can't understand it at all. It's very confusing and I can't understand anything about the main world. The same goes for the seeds.

The protagonist is still being hunted. As a result, she went into trouble and became filled with compassion and compassion. Let the Leshan Giant Buddha stand up and sit down! ! ! It's really disgusting to watch.

The worlds chosen by Swordsman are too weak Especially in the first world, Fengyun was chosen from high to low.

The Dugu Nine Swords are on the same level as the Holy Spirit Sword Technique. Isn't it a bit outrageous?

The author didn't say anything and suddenly stopped updating. It's probably because something happened. I hope he just went in and will come out one day.

Look at what you've written. I still don't know what to do with the main plot. The martial arts system in the main world is now only exposed a little bit, and what is revealed is either loud and clear, or it is completely incompatible with the protagonist who is still unable to participate, and then it involves another problem The protagonist is now what you wrote These are completely cannon fodder, and their main achievements are all achieved by plug-ins, and then there is another issue: You write a clearly layered realm, and then you give a plug-in that allows the protagonist to ignore this realm. How can people judge the protagonist's combat power? Not counting plug-ins, there is one on the roadside, including plug-ins, the combat power is unknown The protagonist in the main world has become a dog, and he has no control over his life and death. The copy is fighting life and death, and he has finally mastered the Holy Spirit Sword Technique. When I go back and take a look, it is an ordinary thing, and the protagonist is just like a cow The last question, if you want to write about rivers and lakes, write about rivers and lakes, and if you want to write about temples, just write about temples. Write about temples, two people write together. You don't have the ability. If you really want to write about it, it's just a matter of one stroke. Writing about unlimited flow will either be enjoyable to the end or suppressed to the end. There are audiences on both sides. It's enjoyable for you, but it's not easy for you. If you don't suppress it, it will be more enjoyable.,,,, Why don't you just re-open a new book. In my opinion, this book is half-impaired by now.

After reading the beginning, I feel like this book has no beginning at all.