High Martial: The Age of Species Mutation

The bullying scene at the beginning of the book is very jarring, and the handling makes it seem like the protagonist is very useless The protagonist progresses too fast in two or three days, and he does not take the elixir The timeline advances too slowly There are some chapters where the plot of passers-by and classmates is unnecessary There are many advantages, please rewrite it

Genius flow, no cheats. There is also the school bullying that has been dealt with for a whole 7 chapters, which feels not satisfying enough. You can take a look if you like.

Hope it sticks. There is no monthly pass yet, it's still early to put it on the shelves. Because the last book is free, I will reward you directly.

The new book I opened is very good. The three golden chapters are particularly good, especially the one that starts with bullying. There are many truths that many parents still don't understand, but the author writes them very clearly. The subsequent world view is also very detailed. The writing and plot are better than the previous one. I like this kind of book very much. It's just that the author spends too much time on his brain, and the details will be slow to update.

From the previous book. The previous version of Game of Thrones was very innovative. The author has his own understanding of dragons and magic, and the writing is very to my liking. When watching Game of Thrones, I also like the author to add his own details to form a fuller worldview.

The article is good, but I feel like there are too many descriptions.

I've read a very good book called Deinosuchus of the Cretaceous before, but the author doesn't know if it's out of stock, and I haven't read anything of this type since it was discontinued