Black Sky Book

Hey hey

There is a female protagonist, let me take a look first😍😍😍

It depends on whether the author can grasp the way the immortal points the way.

There is a female protagonist who chases her 😍😍😍

It's only 18 chapters, which is ridiculous. If the author takes advantage of the situation and writes ten chapters in a row to thank the Silver Alliance, he can really keep this wave of popularity.

I generally don't read books with the Sanguanzheng label.

The writing method of film and television dramas, is it for adaptation? The writing is pretty good

The plot is really boring and I don't see where the writing is at all.

It's a pity. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into the conception and writing, but did not elaborate on the writing, which leads to a contradictory problem. The skeleton of the book is bright and beautiful, and the skin on the outside is full of holes. The story that has been built with great efforts is like a fault code. It can run, but it can only run away. The characters cannot stand. The author thought they were standing, but you stand outside the box and write a small story. It is said that the characters are created by you, the world is created by you personally, you know the profile of each character, everything is logical and natural in your eyes, but for readers, this is a very cheating problem. Readers who do not have a God's perspective read this novel as if their brains are derailed, and there is a sense of drunken fragmentation 😥

Can being masters and slaves of each other suddenly penetrate the hidden and visible, and have unlimited inner strength?😁

You've been a demon before, so you just write randomly. You take it for granted.

The writing style is okay, but the style is like the martial arts of thirty or forty years ago. But I came here to read the online article. I don't have the patience to read it slowly, and I hate having a younger sister the most. There is no biological sister in this book, so I have to force one into the book.

It seems that this was adapted into a TV series after it became a hit, but you seem to have gone to the wrong channel. The plot of the male channel was 18 years ago

It's so confusing. I can accept it if it's shown through a camera. But I can't understand the novel at all. It's too abstract.

I have just started a book called Silver Alliance. The author is very confident in what he has written. But to be honest, the writing is on point but the plot is really messy. In other words, maybe the author's clues and foreshadowing haven't been developed yet. Maybe it would be much better with a longer word count. However, there is really no connection between the first chapter, which focuses on the power of cultivating immortals in the city, and the rest of it. Besides, despite the attraction of the first chapter, the plot behind it is too obvious, so we still have to pay attention to the plot. I originally thought that the original story content would be derived from the development of film and television drama shooting, but it seems that I thought too much.

Don't write anymore? You've already made a silver alliance for yourself, why don't you break it?

To be honest, the first three chapters can't keep people going ... It's a pity that you are not a master. Who else but fans will have the patience to read on?

It only took 14 hours to catch up to 30... Silver League attracted dead collections, which is of no use.

There are about 5 new terms on every page of the mobile phone that I can't understand. It's about the plot. I can't see what the protagonist has solved or gained. It's irritating.

The publication writing method is suitable for direct publishing, but Qidian serialization may not be suitable.

Book quality: Gray. The writing style was written more than ten years ago, which is not suitable for reading now. It feels like a lot of words can't explain anything. There are even no details, and the jumping sequences are confusing to watch.

I'm very literary and young, and it doesn't look good if I pretend to be cool.

After reading Chapter 20, the plot was so foggy that I couldn't understand it. The writing is not bad, but the words and sentences are a bit too gorgeous and deliberate. Wait for a Shen Nong to tell me if it looks good in the back.

Why do you still write if your investment fails?

I read it and found that the author's writing is very good, better than many Qidian novels.

Why hasn't there been an update in two days? Can I still start watching?

The writing style is good and comfortable Finally, it is no longer a pretentious literary style.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~