Douluo: Black Dragon Martial Soul, I Am the Lord of All Gods

The writing is okay, but if you keep abusing it like this, you will be trash.

It's called "Douluo Succubus, watch how I abuse myself and find someone to be my mother"

The advantage is that the protagonist is relatively strong, but the disadvantage is that the protagonist can't even control his own Gou Ba martial arts at present, which is a bit uncomfortable. When will he go to Yuanyang Guo to eat that big fairy grass, and then control those stinky people ruthlessly?

The character of the protagonist, Sima, makes people angry just by looking at it. Aren't they often made by themselves? He still looks like he is being persecuted, which is disgusting. He still looks like this after hundreds of chapters. It's hard to imagine that this person looks like a time traveler. He might as well write about aborigines.

Now that my martial soul has been damaged again, I won't encounter someone of the same level as me in the future and it will take a long time to win. But the writing is quite reasonable. I hope that the later writing will be more domineering and not overpowering.

How to say it? I was very confused while reading this book, and it felt like it was hard to explain in one sentence. The author repeatedly emphasized the character of the protagonist, and then the emotional lines were very messy. Starting from Bibi Dong and Tang Yuehua, I couldn't stand it anymore. It felt like you planted a flower and it grew into a dog's tail grass. . . . In fact, if the author doesn't know how to write emotional lines, he can write less, more action scenes, more plots, and more laughs. Instead of looking very depressing, with messy emotional lines, and not many laughs, the protagonist gives me a feeling of being both real and independent. . . . 😭, when the author first opened the book, I really liked reading it, but now. . . .

In fact, if you want to be happy, you can always be happy. There is no need to give him such a dark history! The author has made Hei Longtian's character lower and lower!

Is the author male or female? Why does it feel like it's like a female video, it's grinding and the plot advances too slowly.

Don't spend money to see it. It's not worth it. Look outside.

If other people like the protagonist just because of their sympathy, then I really have nothing to say, it sucks