
In Douluo Dalu, My Martial Soul Is Aatrox
人在斗罗,武魂亚托克斯
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- Completed
- Length
- 466k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I went, and when I saw that the heroine was Aatrox, my cerebellum shrank.
Notice! I came here to see Sword Demon, not those three love brains.
Just reading the introduction, it's incredible. Is Mount Targon so easy to climb? Are you a sports student who can climb Mount Targon while being chased by a sword demon?
Qian Renxue's use of sacred fire to hit the protagonist is a poisonous point in itself. Douluo hunts for soul rings and has to kill them himself. Qian Renxue must be familiar with the power of sacred fire. For the righteous angel clan, there must be restrictions on the use of sacred fire by non-evil soul masters. Looking at the writing, who is the protagonist who can make people mad and use sacred fire with just a few words? This is a means of killing. It is very unreasonable to be used so casually. The moment Qian Renxue used the sacred fire, the nature of the matter was different. It was like a person shooting at you with a gun. Whether she did it intentionally or not was one thing. Whether you had the ability to survive was another thing. After it was clear that the other party threatened your life, this was revenge. He who thinks it is a misunderstanding and laughs it off is a saint. Douluo Quality Ceiling Qiandaoliu I don't even want to talk about Qian Renxue's use of sacred fire. Bibi Dong has been his apprentice for decades and was locked up in a secret room for ten months. Isn't he still unfamiliar with this method? Whether the author has read the original work or not, Bibi Dong's perception of Qian Renxue changed towards the end. During this period, her feelings for Qian Renxue were inherited from her father's feelings, and she wanted to eat his flesh and drink his blood. When it comes to attacking the protagonist who is in a swing position, Qian Renxue cannot be attacked because Qian Daoliu is around, but stopping it is not a matter of words. How can Qian Renxue refuse without Qian Daoliu's signal? However, her inaction and even smiling and standing aside are really brainless. It's just a poisonous point in itself, but it has to be brought out repeatedly. If the author just randomly pushes the plot without thinking, it would be better to shorten the plot by a few thousand words and organize the plot.
Generally speaking, at least it doesn't fit the title of the book.
It's not a joke. The title of the book is Aatrox, and then there is no ink. It can't be justified. Douluo fans can say that the writing is bad. If you want to make it, highlight Aatrox, otherwise it will be useless.
If you want to write a pretentious book, just change the title of the book. Sword Demon becomes your only attractive point, and then you click on it and you are all pretentious. It is like wbg without TS. Without Sword Demon, wouldn't it be just a cool book? Who else is disgusting by writing the sword demon as an idiot?
It's really like shit. The first dozen chapters are well written, but the further they go, the worse they get. They keep exporting their own values, as if they can't write anything else. What the hell, you didn't ask a studio to write the beginning, did you?
Dude, am I paying to see you export your own values?
I can't say, the elements of Sword Demon are not reflected at all. I keep saying that it is essentially the same as Sword Demon. I can only say that you are just disgusting readers.
Well! Poison! The author keeps exporting his mindless values of "none of my business"! How disgusting! It's always bullshit, bullshit, bullshit, bullshit! It's so disgusting, why don't you change the word? Nothing but shit?