In Douluo Dalu, My Martial Soul Is Aatrox
人在斗罗，武魂亚托克斯
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 466k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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191Chapters
544Recommendations
38.1kFans
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Holy crap, when I saw that the female lead was Aatrox, my cerebellum shrank.
Attention! I came to see the Sword Demon, not those three love-obsessed guys.
Just reading the description makes it seem incredibly difficult. Is Mount Targon really that easy to climb? Are you a physical education student? How could you climb Mount Targon while being chased by the Sword Demon?
The fact that Qian Renxue used the Sacred Flame to attack the protagonist is a major flaw. In Douluo Continent, the acquisition of a Soul Ring requires the protagonist to kill the target. Qian Renxue must have been aware of the power of the Sacred Flame. For the righteous Angel Clan, there must be restrictions on the use of the Sacred Flame by non-evil Soul Masters.
Generally speaking, it at least does not match the book title.
It's not about disparaging, but the title includes Aatrox, then there's no real description of him. That just doesn't make sense. Douluo Continent fanfiction is overdone. If you're going to do something, highlight Aatrox; otherwise, it's just a waste of time.
If you want to write in the old, pretentious style, change the title. Make the Sword Demon your only appealing element, then all the readers will find is you showing off and such, like a WBG story without the Sword Demon. Without the Sword Demon, it's just a pure wish-fulfillment novel, right? And why portray the Sword Demon as such an idiot to disgust whoever you're trying to be funny?
This is absolutely awful! The first dozen or so chapters were fine, but it got worse and worse as it went on, just spouting my own values the whole time. It's like I've lost my ability to write anything else. What is this garbage? Did you hire a studio to write the beginning?
Dude, did I pay to watch you spout your values?
I can't say for sure. None of the elements of the Sword Demon are shown at all. They keep saying it's essentially the same as the Sword Demon, but all I can say is that you're just plain disgusting the readers.
Ugh! Poisonous! The author keeps spouting his brainless "what's it to me?" Values! Disgusting! It's all just trivial stuff! It's disgusting! Can't you use a different word? All you ever say is "fart" or "shit"?