Wizard of the Star Sea: Beginning by Borrowing an Ancient Bloodline

Have you ever been a wizard? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

That's how Starsea Wizards are...

There's no way you're going to get any data from this. Dozens of pages with absolutely no progress, the advance payment is just a formality, and I haven't felt any satisfaction at all. How can this possibly increase the data?

This is too drawn out. I wanted to see a bloodline awakening, after so much preparation, suddenly break through peacefully, like letting out a fart, only the person in question knows 🙂 (the senior sister knows too, but can't show it off in front of others).

Your failure is justified. Writing a book is like a marathon. You just dropped out because you fell behind at the start, waiting for the next race to start ahead. But what if you only start ahead briefly next time and then get overtaken? Will you drop out again then? Ah, tell me, look my eyes!

One question is, the protagonist's bloodline is that of a dragon descendant with a long lifespan, but his lifespan is the same as other wizard apprentices, with a maximum of only two hundred years. Isn't that too short? Even if wizard apprentices don't have long lifespans, lifespans still depend on race, bloodline, and the type of magic they master, right?

Why didn't you just write that he directly became the supreme being in advance, and then pay it back later? That would have saved you a lot of trouble. Novels are supposed to be about fantasy, right? You just wrote it like this… "became the supreme being in another world in advance…" The readers can imagine. Congratulations on the ending!

I've been writing for ages, but the cheat code still hasn't worked.

Have you ever been a wizard? Some of this is just random speculation and assumptions! (🐶)

The author aimed to construct a grand and detailed world, thus introducing some new elements, but the lack of detailed explanations made the reading experience extremely disjointed and awkward.