Myriad Worlds: Beginning on Chu Renmei's Seventh Night

Is it useful to delete my comments? Readers won't read it themselves. If you don't let people comment after you write it, then what I said is wrong.

Let me tell the author, in fact, Chu Renmei did not kill everyone in the village, he just watched it happen. Otherwise, Xiaoqiang would not have said that many people died in the village and had to follow Chu Renmei's troupe leader, and then temporarily sealed the resentment with a bracelet. Therefore, the protagonist can actually leave as long as he does not commit suicide to protect the servant Wan Tian and some people involved, and the protagonist leaves immediately after completing the ritual.

It's so watery and there's so much nonsense.

It's a good idea to write about Taoism in a more realistic way, but it's difficult. Most people simply don't understand. If you write about some cultivation content or some explanations of terms, you will be said to be weak. Because the integration is not good, it looks like a bunch of settings are thrown out at once. So how to make people accept it easily is the most important thing. The author can read "The Taoist Wuxin" written by Yan Leisheng. Some of his teachings are well integrated.

I can't understand what's written, it's very confusing, and I have no desire to follow it. I'll just throw it on the bookshelf first. I suggest the author go through the outline to see if his writing is fluent. The current plot feels like a mess to me, and I can't understand what is being written at all.

Fighting on the street means fighting on the street. There are so many criticisms.

Do you have to recall it every now and then? TV drama??

After the first eunuch, did you become less and less able to write?

Those who use the system are all mentally retarded children.

I don't know if the author reads the book circle, but what I want to say is that the first book you wrote attracted everyone and what everyone wanted to read was obviously the protagonist showing off in the live broadcast barrage. Forget it if you wrote it crookedly, just write a new one. If you have to open up new ideas, it's not surprising that you jumped on it.