Film Variety: White Morning

Chinese Apartment is not just a copy of The Big Bang Theory It is a copy of Friends, Mommy, Madman, Joey, and a lot of American TV series, so its plot is very fragmented, and only the fifth season is considered original. The plot is coherent. You can see that the characters of other domestic sitcoms are from beginning to end, but its characters will change from episode to episode because it has copied several characters. It is not suitable for being a fan at all.

I feel like the author didn't do very well in high school and had outrageous fantasies about high school and even college.

When I saw the third picture, this is 💩, it's totally a nine-leaf fish.

This book was very fun to write! Then how did you, Yiren, write that piece of shit?

I feel like the author is quite weird, but it's quite interesting

Who is the protagonist? Lin Miaomiao? What is it written about? This is, I can only say The 12th book lv4 eunuch author😅

The three golden chapters are written inexplicably, with a lot of stitches, and the writing is too white. Considering that the previous few books, The Eunuch, were unfinished, they slipped away.

Lin Miaomiao was too poisonous. She ran away and was ruined later.

It's too confusing, and one or two of them can awaken their memories, so what's the point of looking at this thing? Lin Miaomiao, let it go, Qian Sanyi will come too, don't do this all the time, just forget it, the two of them think that anyone can touch anyone with a JB golden finger, and does Qian Sanyi have a good relationship with the protagonist? Do you have to choose him?

And it also allows Lin Miaomiao to have memories. So who is the protagonist?

The top scorer in this year's high school entrance examination, and then the 18-year-old will be a senior in high school? What a mess

Chapter 10: Being forced to be a eunuch is disgusting

I was attracted by your introduction, but I've read Chapter 8 of you. What are you writing?

The author is obviously a newbie and doesn't know the logic of the novel. Moreover, the writing is too dense and the story structure is too compact. In short, I didn't understand what was being written. I read Chapters 3 and 4, and apart from the background introduction, I couldn't understand anything else. Author, why don't you stop writing? Don't waste time.

It's too confusing, the transitions are too fast and there are too many characters. Not sewn properly either. Rely on defense

What kind of mess is this? I don't know anything about it.

It's so annoying, this author has written several books

The male protagonist changes his body and abilities every day. Then what? Is the neighbor the original body after the male protagonist takes over his body? It's too confusing. The author explains so much, but none of it is the key point.

I know all the Chinese characters, but putting them all together is a bit brain-burning.

I just don't understand. Your way of writing is just flashback, and it's still confusing. First of all, the first few chapters are about the plot of Youth Pi. If you haven't read the plot, how do you know what Lin Miaomiao's father does? It's baffling. It's better to explain it in the next chapter. Generally, those who don't understand it will just leave it. Others will take it step by step. It's better for you to leave questions and explain it later. Like in the first chapter, he inexplicably turned into something strange. The subsequent plot has nothing to do with this. The specific abilities will be discussed in the next chapter. Are readers happy? I can't even read your explanation at the end The same goes for this chapter. It didn't say what you did on the bus. It was all Lin Miaomiao's bragging. Then she suddenly said that you asked the driver if he had a daughter. I also took a note and said that none of the drivers were married. I don't know who is used to writing like this. You don't really think it's good to write like this? Novel is like watching a movie. Reading words can form pictures. Others are narrated frame by frame, step by step, unobtrusive and smooth, and the transitions are also natural. And yours not only drops frames, but is also very abrupt. What I am talking about is the problem with the few points I marked. If those points are excluded, the plot will be okay and smooth. Logically speaking, the author should not have such problems with your writing skills.

When will the author release an update? My monthly ticket is hungry.

It's pretty good-looking and a bit fun. Come on for more.

Did the chief eunuch sell his account?

With so many people eating it💩, I have to take a few bites.