The Peninsula’s Countdown King

I can only say that the first three chapters are poisonous. A Korean entertainment article has to contain so many personal things. Three chapters describe the protagonist's experiences ten years after time travel. It's already 2025 and you're still writing this way. I'm convinced.

Coming from a chaebol background, I hope to be able to write in a style. Even for system tasks, I want to develop in the direction of a musician, not the entertainment industry, especially the Korean entertainment industry.

In order to become an idol and break up with the family, you have to fight. This plot is a little bit toxic, so I suggest you skip it.

The character descriptions feel overly labored and awkward to watch.

What about Gidle? Zhao Meiyan is not the heroine. It seems that the author is a fan of Rabbit.

The chaebol will allow you to be a boy band even if they don't let you debut?

But why is it a female supporting role? It must be the heroine.

The writing is pretty good, but I read it with too much force, which made me feel a little embarrassed.

Brother, if you add Lin Yoona, it would be best to be the first heroine. Because this time period is Do you have a reply?

Chapter 3: Poison to death, the end of Shahua