My Japanese Life of Whaling and Spending

The protagonist's surname is so offensive that he wants to be removed from the market on the spot.

I thought this book was quite good, but suddenly a boy appeared, who also traveled through time, and had the same system as the main character, and liked the same woman. It poisoned me to death.

Indeed, the second time traveler is very disgusting. You can also write an original love rival or competitor, but the second time traveler is written, which makes people feel very uncomfortable. Is it still my brother-in-law? The key is to kill the protagonist, this. . . The plot is messed up, bye bye. The most disgusting thing about this kind of book is the villain.

You are in the Department of Entertainment, and you are writing about double-crossing and brain-showing, horror and suspense, which is okay. The selling point is the confrontation between double-crossing and multi-crossing, which is like infinite horror! You can write this way for both science fiction and crime dramas. Are you writing a double penetration or a rivalry drama in entertainment? What is the difference between this and the workplace struggle disguised as time travel? It's all competition on an equal level. What's the difference between time-traveling and non-time-traveling? Even if you flip it around, the protagonist is an ordinary aborigine and the opponent is a time traveler. Although rising against the trend, there is something to watch. You might as well remove the time travel element and go to a female channel to write workplace contention articles. There, you can change the gender and add some cheats, and the two parties will fight, in order to be more popular.

Your operation is a bit arrogant. Did you change the protagonist's name in the second chapter?

It can be said that the literary youth's double penetration is the poisonous point of Qidian. This does not mean that you cannot write it, but you must understand that the readers who read Qidian are the poisonous point here. If you write, you must be prepared to entertain yourself.

The NC setting of more than ten years ago, double penetration in the city? ? ?

Everything else is actually okay, that is, the system releases tasks, which are not very popular now. The protagonist will be more watchable if he takes the initiative. After all, the feeling of the system promoting the plot and the protagonist promoting the plot are different...

After changing her name, the protagonist's sister Hei Dao Shahe becomes particularly powerful, the protagonist be careful

It's quite nice to look at, Come on, author💪.