My Japanese Life of Whaling and Spending

The protagonist's surname is so ridiculous, I want to take it down on the spot.

I thought this book was pretty good, but then a second male lead appeared, who was also a time traveler and had the same system as the protagonist, and he liked the same woman. It practically killed me!

Indeed, the second time traveler is nauseating. You could have just written an original character as a love rival or competitor, but instead, you added a second time traveler, which is incredibly frustrating to read. And the brother-in-law, in particular, wants to kill the protagonist... This... The plot is messed up. Goodbye. This kind of book is the most nauseating, especially when it involves the villain.

You're writing a brain-dead, horror/suspense novel about time travel within the entertainment industry. It might be okay to use the dual-time travel/multiple-time travel conflict as a selling point, like in *Infinite Terror* or sci-fi crime dramas. But you're writing a dual-time travel story in the entertainment industry, and it's even a story of two protagonists fighting each other!

That's a pretty sneaky move of yours, changing the main character's name in the second chapter?

The author's attempt to create a dual transmigration story is a major flaw on Qidian. It's not that it's impossible to write, but you have to understand that this is a major flaw for Qidian readers. If you write it, you have to be prepared to entertain yourself.

A ridiculous premise from over a decade ago: urban fantasy with dual transmigration?

Everything else is alright, but the system-generated tasks aren't as popular these days. A protagonist-driven plot is more engaging, since the feeling of a system-driven plot versus a protagonist-driven plot is different.

After changing her name, the protagonist's younger sister, Kuroshima Sahe, becomes incredibly powerful. The protagonist should be careful!

It's actually quite nice to look at. Keep it up, author! 💪