Mortal: Starting from Luan Xinghai's Acquaintance with Yuan Yao

Let me explain to you book friends that the protagonist of this book is Awakening Su Hui. There are two reasons why I don't write about soul-travelers. First, the author hates the act of seizing a body, and thinks there is not much difference between soul-traveling and body-seizing. Secondly, the outline already has more than 100,000 words, and I really don't have that much energy to re-layout the plot. I have read the book "The Story of Mortals Cultivating Immortality" three times, absorbing a lot of information from Tieba, Douyin, etc., And integrating it into the plot. Try to present the unfinished plot of the original work with personal ideas. Among them, if the protagonist is a pure time traveler with a God's perspective, I personally feel that he will have a strong sense of purpose and do almost the same thing as the protagonist of the original work. It will be too repetitive and a waste of book friends' time. I just want to write the whole story of the original work as closed-loop as possible. Of course, this is just a family opinion and a personal understanding. Looking for book friends to spray lightly.

Please stop recommending this book to me! Thanks again! After getting up tomorrow morning, I will publish a new book "Strive to Let Luan Xinghai Fight Tiannan"... Statement: The plot line starts from Luan Xinghai. Although it is a harem novel, it is mainly based on the plot. Everyone is welcome to taste it and ask for recommendations and reading in advance. If you don't like harems, don't criticize me. After all, the original novels are all about harems. Warning in advance, because the plot line starts from Chaos Xinghai, the heroine does not include Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin, Chen Qiaoqian, etc. I hope all book friends will keep this in mind. Writing a book is not easy, I hope you will support me. The logic and plot writing are not good, so I can just criticize it.

Author, can you write a novel that reviews mortal animation?

The writing is okay, but it would be unwise to give the Geng Gold directly to Hu Yue. Even if a third-level monk doesn't understand what it is, he can't just give it to him directly.

It's pretty good even if you don't know the plot. I've watched a lot of Mortals and I've had enough of it. I don't know how long you can hold on to this.

Amitabha Buddha can be mentioned in one month of update. Thanks to Su Hui, can you see for yourself if there is anyone who writes well like this?

This is my first time writing a mortal fanfic, so I have no experience. To summarize, there are the following questions. First, judging from the voting, the editor and book friends prefer the perspective of a time traveler. Maybe my writing skills are limited and I cannot control the indigenous people. Secondly, the writing was too slow in the early stage, trying to lay out multiple plots, but ended up dying before the start. The level is still lacking. I would like to apologize to the book friends who have collected, read, and voted for recommendations. I can only start a new book again, and I want to start writing the next one from Chaotic Star Sea. As for this book, there seems to be no point in publishing the remaining drafts. I'm so sorry, I bow to you all! Feel sorry! If there are readers who think the author's writing is acceptable, please leave a message. If more than ten people want to read the rest, I will continue to post some. I'm so sorry!

I don't know what kind of fanfic to write about the plot -_-||

Mortal fans like whether the protagonist written by the author is aboriginal or a time traveler