Fulilian: the Little Master Who Doesn't Understand Love

It doesn't look good. The author's forced plot ruins the original style of painting.

Are you cuckolding the guy in front again and again?

To be honest, the protagonist really doesn't look like a time traveler. The first thought of other time travelers when they travel to a transcendent world is immortality. The protagonist's goal is to pass on his magic to the descendants. At present, there is no idea of ​​achieving immortality at all.

Have you ever been an elf? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

It deviates from the world and also deviates from the original work. . The sword is not important, the important thing is the person. In the original work, there is only one holy sword that destroys the world. The one does not respond but is very powerful. The other lucky girl still annihilated the demon king without the sword, and she was forced to do it at once. . . You have repeatedly created several so-called "holy swords". A thousand years have passed, and you still rely on three holy swords, and now you have one more. . . To be honest, I feel like I've lost all my power, the magician doesn't look like a magician, and I'm not lucky with my sister's stats. The more I read it, the more I wonder if it was written by AI. . .

The male protagonist is starting to feel weak. He has lived for thousands of years and is still not as strong as a new demon king. He can even defeat gods. He cannot defeat the demon king. He also exploded and ran away. It's disgusting to watch.

Over 190 chapters, the plot about the Holy Sword is so shitty, and the subsequent treatment of the Demon King is also disgusting. An invincible novel should be invincible, and it has to deal with such disgusting plots. When I read about one hundred and forty pictures of this book, I thought it was over, but the rest of it was really boring.

The author has no idea what the reader wants to see. We are here to see people meet and fall in love in another world, not to see the protagonist suffer from stress every day.

Why is the writing getting more and more stupid? The characters are becoming more and more imbecile. The plot is also becoming more and more stupid. Isn't it embarrassing to watch?

Regarding the question of whether to be green or not, I can only say that there is no need to write this setting. You might as well let the protagonist stay with the master forever and let her slowly feel the love. This way there is no controversy and can be different from Fulilian. If you want to reproduce Fulilian's sadness based on lifespan, the setting of reincarnation is redundant. It is better to let the protagonist live directly and only live. In my memory, that might really work. But now it can only be said that the two sides are not human beings. When passers-by see the problem of self-greening in the comment area, they will not study it carefully and just read the next one. There are many online articles, and if you have shortcomings, people will read elsewhere. This is not a problem of unreasonable settings, but a problem of losing readers. The author should think about it.

I remember the comics said magic is an imaginary world. . Why is this article described in terms of faith. . Imagination and belief are two different things, right?

This book is not a fan of Fuli Lian. The author has sewn some settings from other anime and also changed the settings of the original work. It feels a bit like selling a sheep's head to a dog's meat.

Celie and Florian

This book is very good

Isn't the protagonist's greatest weakness his creativity? At the beginning, I didn't have enough values, so I relied on my partners and the Holy Sword, and used my creativity to defeat the enemy. Later, when my values ​​were enough, my creativity disappeared, and I just used the Holy Sword to compare my values. After thousands of years, I really didn't make any progress, and if I want to inherit magic and defeat the demons, I should have my own force. It's really frustrating to be hidden behind the scenes and finally forced to come out to wipe my butt.

Seriai

The protagonist has lost his humanity. In the current plot, he has turned into a creature that I don't know how to describe. This is the real dragon slayer who will eventually become an evil dragon, not to mention that Celia has completely become a pendant in the back. I wonder if the author has changed the character? Or was it directly generated by AI? This style difference is too big, right? The good hand of Dragon Rider was played like this. I talked about several swords back and forth, and now I have 5 swords. If you ask me to say, it can be over long ago. If it insists on this messy plot, there are already signs of unfinishing.

Fulilian's original plot has been bad recently. The empire chapter is bad and the demons are bad. The master's combat power has reached 🤡. He can't go up or down. Anyone can step on it wherever he is stuck The demons and the empire are even more abstract, and the combat power system has basically collapsed, which is confusing So how does the author plan to solve the impact of the original plot?

It's best not to read novels that stress your ability to fight. Because the pressure was so far-fetched that it ruined all the previous plots.

When everyone in the world knows that the magic of immortality exists, why is the protagonist not prepared to do it? Well, he is waiting for people to unite and plan carefully to attack the people around him. Is this a human being? They also put a demon disguised as a human in front of the world, and have been active for five hundred years without concealment, just to fish for fear that people will not take action, right? It is better to write this kind of SB plot than to write about those people who seek immortality who plan to succeed, kill all the above Fulilian, Flame, and Celia, and let the mentally retarded protagonist live forever alone. Isn't this more exciting than what you wrote? Seeing this, the protagonist gives the impression that he is either a person with Down syndrome who drools and disgusts readers, or he is a disguised anti-human who deliberately creates conflicts to make those around him and those who pursue immortality fight each other and enjoy it. In addition to the current chapter, has the author connected the previous chapters? Don't write it like this on purpose and still hum like that?

It feels like the book has burned out and the bonfire has burned out, leaving only the remaining warmth.

Dude, you're done. . . Now it's seen as "history"

The author has published a new book, this one is probably unfinished

The author and fellow readers, if you have time, please read my book. It is also a Fulian fanfic. It tells the story of Fulian and the brave team embarking on an adventure journey again in the second week. It is a road novel written according to the route of the original book. Thank you for your support——

The main character is mindless and bland.

It's OK if the author updates faster. 😘😘

Happy New Year's Eve

This is the Celie Kouya I've been looking for

I feel like it's time to push the plot, Volamei's resurrection, the defeat of the Demon King, and what happened after the Death of Xin

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