Hogwarts: When Dumbledore Learns the Script

Even if Dumbledore knew the subsequent plot, I don't think he would choose to change anything.

The writing is good, but the relationship between the protagonist and Zhang Qiu is too rigid, and it feels very dramatic. The protagonist uses the physical condition of a child and the psychological perspective of an adult to fall in love with a little girl under fourteen. Is the protagonist a pedophile? ! ! I have never understood why people who write Harry Potter fan stories have to start dating at the age of twelve or thirteen when their emotional cognition is not yet complete. They must be at least fifteen or sixteen. Can they tell the difference between twelve and thirteen? Let me complain, I have seen too many cases of minors being sexually assaulted recently, and I feel tired.

The writing is not very good, but it feels like the simplest wish of a Harry Potter fan, to save everyone who sacrifices for others.

Good idea but feels a bit bland

This is the kind of Harry Potter fanfic I look forward to. Tell Dumbledore that the plot will not be like that. On the contrary, professional matters should be left to professionals, and dealing with Voldemort should be left to Dumbledore. In those fanfics, the protagonist has to deal with Voldemort or join the Death Eaters despite insufficient abilities, or else just walk away and leave because it has nothing to do with him. I don't know what he thinks.

The idea of ​​giving Lao Deng direct answers to all the puzzles in the past seven years is quite attractive. However, the author's writing style needs to be improved. After reading the first ten chapters so far, the content is too streamlined, the information density is a bit low, and the part about meeting Lao Deng lacks some plot tension. The daily life I have seen so far is not interesting enough, which makes the narrative of the daily part seem extremely long. You can know what is happening at a glance on each page.

How does Harry Potter solve it? Harry is Voldemort's living Horcrux. Their souls are intertwined. There is no way to solve it. In the original book, Dumbledore really planned to ask Harry to die, but it was only because of a series of coincidences (Voldemort was resurrected using Harry's blood) that Harry had the leverage to make a comeback. So, how does Harry Potter solve it? It is known that even if Harry Potter does not die, Voldemort will not die either. If Voldemort does not use Harry's blood to resurrect and becomes Harry Potter's blood vessel (horcrux), Harry will not have a chance to avoid death. In the original work, Harry Potter was not killed by Voldemort, not because of the Resurrection Stone. But Voldemort used Harry's blood to resurrect, and was passively infected with Lily's protective magic of love (Harry Potter will not be harmed by Voldemort) Voldemort thought that by using Harry's blood to resurrect, he could bypass the protective magic, but he did not know that in this way, his existence itself was included in this magic. This creates a paradoxical situation where Harry Potter will not die unless Voldemort dies. So, after knowing the plot, other Horcruxes are easy to talk about, what should Harry Potter do? You can't press Voldemort's head, force him to absorb Harry Potter's blood, and then force him to use the killing curse on Harry 😰 Huh? Wait a minute, I remember there is another particularly interesting scene in the original work. During the final battle, Harry, who knew everything, spread the magic of love to others. Voldemort could not use magic to directly harm anyone, he could only rage in powerless rage. This setting seems interesting. Destroy all of Voldemort's other Horcruxes, leaving only Harry Potter, and then use his blood to resurrect Voldemort. Voldemort: "Hahaha, I will not die until Harry Potter dies. Dumbledore, how are you going to fight me?" Dumbledore: "Harry, block his magic." Harry: "Okay, Professor." Voldemort Demon: "..." Voldemort: "You've gone too far, old thief Deng. At worst, we'll all end up together. Death Eaters, kill Harry Potter!" Dumbledore: "If you don't die, Harry won't die." Voldemort:? ? ? Dumbledore: "Don't think about committing suicide, Tom. If Harry doesn't die, you can't die either." Voldemort: "What's wrong with you and me?" Dumbledore: "I'm helpless too, but this is the situation. It's your choice, Tom." Voldemort: "I'm so angry. Potter, stand up and let me give you a hard blow. I'm going to die." Dumbledore: "Harry, you don't have to pay attention to him. He can't even beat a first year now."

For outline essays, the author should practice more writing skills.

I only read 10 pictures, it's a running account, there are no ups and downs, I don't know what will happen next, please come on, author.

The work "The Elder Scrolls: The Witch's Strategy Guide" visited and used the treasure to promote it. The author's writing is very good, it has been added to favorites and likes 👍.