Traveling at the Same Time: People Are in the Wilderness, and Free Prostitution Is Welcome!

To be honest, the current situation of Xiaoao fandom is that only newbies can watch it, and even old bookworms will find it boring.

You can skip some wordy places, and don't add up the number of times. Making money is based on the number of words, but you have to have people reading it to make money.

I don't write about prehistoric times, I write about low-level martial arts, which are usually works for writing practice.

After reading the first five chapters, I feel a little embarrassed. They are all so immortal. I also use the origin of the evil sword manual to highlight the strong MD. Just don't eat beef.

The protagonist of Cultivation to Immortality made people shine when he first came out, but when the protagonist of Swordsman came out, he was so angry. After he appeared, he started to talk all over the place, and tried to persuade people to quit.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. From the world you choose, you can see that this book is destined to be a hit.

It is indeed too wordy to write. It makes people speechless. They are already real immortals in front of them, but when they come down, they can't even beat a mortal. That fairy's eyes. Can ordinary people compare? It takes so much fucking effort to play a side character. What a nonsense.

You can still take a look at the prehistoric ones. I can't read the others. I've already read thousands of them. I'm so damn tired of them.

To be honest, there are 99 of them. Either the combat power collapses and they are cut off in the end, or they are invincible and recorded one by one. I feel that there are too many, and a few in single digits is enough. For good fan fiction, it is enough to focus on one or two worlds.

Some of the details in it are a bit wrong. For example, the protagonist's master and brothers are about to ascend to the fairy world. The protagonist says that his disciples are separated 😒

After reading a few chapters, I beat Yu Canghai and he ran away. I can only say that he is a garbage immortal 😭

It's a pity that the protagonist has no money and is so stupid, and his background is not that impressive either.

Brother, please rewrite it. Don't go into too much detail about other worlds, just concentrate on writing about the prehistoric times.

666 Xiaoao actually writes so much

Author, when you practice writing, you should perfect yourself with the purpose of writing, instead of just making bad jokes in every chapter. If you keep writing like this, the next book will still be bad.

Sharing is not even 1/100 million.

Didn't you start talking about it in the third chapter? 🤮Vomited

How about the boss accepts Meizhen and Welcoming as the heroine?

Update every two days? Is this author a human being?

To be honest, if I had the True Immortal Dao Fruit, I would be invincible in the world of Xiaoao. Use the True Immortal Soul to understand the martial arts system that is proud of the world and create the Human Immortal Martial Arts. If you are stronger, you can travel across the long river of time to understand the creation of the sages and realize how to replace the Heavenly Heart with your own heart and communicate with the original body. . . The protagonist of such a powerful golden finger can't even use it. He has lived in vain for so long. He is stupider than a pig. .

It's the Great Desolation again, saying that the Great Desolation is the cornerstone of all realms, and that all kinds of talismans and gods can govern across realms. It's so funny. The Supreme Thunder Dao covering the world is Huangtian Emperor. All the relevant authority of Thunder Dao is in his hands. Can your talisman be used without his seal? Besides, during the Zhetian period, there were still ten weird ancestors at the pseudo-sage level watching over you. You are not afraid of being beaten to death if you are here to enforce the law across borders! In addition, creating a law does not require a law-creating tribulation? You can just repair it yourself. There are 99 cheats superimposed on it, so it's not like you can't handle it. But it is another matter if you let others practice. Can Li Xiaoman withstand the calamity of creating magic or Weiwei? Both of them can't even prove to be the great emperor of the world. You want them to prove to be the ancestor of Taoism? Immortal ancient magic can only be carried by a group of people. You let these two people carry it separately? Do you look down on the Quasi-Immortal Emperor or the Heavenly Tribulation? ———————————————————— Why do other people, Qing Emperor, want to practice your way of ghosts and immortals? He's not dead? It's just a dismemberment of the body. It's easy for the Heaven-shattering Man to be reborn with blood. He has not even killed himself yet and can directly retrieve the Great Emperor's Dao Fruit. After cultivating your ghost-immortal method and beheading your own Great Emperor's body, that would be a loss. What is the difference from the people who abandoned their bodies and went to jail in the dark cage in the ancient times? Your prehistoric immortal way is very powerful, and you can practice it even if you become a ghost, but what is wrong with the method of covering the sky? Others cultivate both the soul and the Tao body, which is equivalent to cultivating both gods and human immortals in ancient times. If others go crazy and give up the Tao body to accompany you, what kind of ghost immortality can you cultivate? Besides, is it necessary to distinguish between superiors and inferiors in practicing the Dharma? It's all for the sake of longevity, so your prehistoric immortal way must be better than the method of covering the sky? Brother, would you please respect the basic sentiments of the world? In the prehistoric world, as long as you become an immortal, you can live for one or two Yuanhui, and if you practice it, it will take a long time to reincarnate and reincarnate. You think that Zhetianren's life is short, but Zhetianren still thinks that you can't carry it out! Learn more about the Dharma Ending Tribulation. How many of you prehistoric immortals can withstand the Dharma Ending Era? Learn about strange pollution? How many of you in the Ancient Immortal Way can withstand saint-level corruption and pollution? Understand the human calamity in practice. You said you live forever, so if I beat you to death, can you still live that long? In Zhetian-Perfect Mix, how long can you live to care about your eggs? Did the immortal kings from the Immortal Ancient and Luangu eras live long? If the fighting power is not good enough, wouldn't everyone have to do it all over again if the world changes drastically? Moreover, winning the resurrection match does not necessarily mean that the true self has returned, such as the Endless Immortal King