The Red Godfather of the Old Days

The idea is good, but the writing is messy and not refreshing enough.

Just call him David Day.

Or is it just that the relevant settings have been moved? In addition, the protagonist's past description is very similar to Roland. Is he replacing Roland or not at all? Will Roland appear as a character?

The idea is good, but the writing is really poor, but having ideas is the most important. After all, writing can be practiced, but inspiration cannot be connected. Author, not only is your writing poor, but your writing is also messy. It will be difficult to achieve any results later. I hope you don't get discouraged. You can consider changing the account and writing again in the future. And I remember that you can't make updates before it is put on the shelf. It seems to have something to do with the recommendation. Remember to ask the editor for the next book. Come on.

The author of squatting one hand explodes QwQ

% The setting is really attractive to me, but there is a sense of inconsistency. You can see it after reading a few paragraphs. It is an essential difference. It should be a relatively basic thing, maybe the writing style or sentence fragmentation?

If you have any questions, please point it out!

I haven't read this book yet, but it sends me update reminders every day. Why did I turn it off?