Waltz of the Vast Sky

If you get tired of moving bombs in the game, you can move bombs in the novel. If you feel tired of moving bombs in the novel, you can move bombs in the game. This is also a virtuous circle.

You should change the name to something like "Starting World War II Air Force, Ace Pilot"

I made a dream come true for me

Stop writing about everyday feelings, okay? An air combat novel contains a lot of daily life and emotional drama. You virgin authors just like to write about beautiful bosses, beautiful teammates and the like. As the main storyline, air combat has completely become a tool for you to fall in love. Why don't you write a female channel?

[One-sentence conclusion] "Waltz in the Sky" belongs to the [medium-to-upper] category (if you are not interested in aerial combat tactics, it will be below). The description of aerial combat is full, but the plot rhythm and character creation drag down the overall experience. Please consider whether to update/replenish your votes. [Panel & Value] Air combat details: The first echelon of online articles, detailed and realistic descriptions of various classic aircraft models and air combat rhythms Plot rhythm: The main line advances slowly, and poisonous points are difficult to deal with (referring to the survival of war criminals and the fact that the protagonist is deflated except for fighting). The foreshadowing description and recycling are poor, which does not improve the reading experience much and is too confusing at the same time. Characterization: The protagonist is a pure tool (although he has the characteristics of a hero). There are too many group portraits, a lot of descriptions of enemies that make readers hypertensive, and the protagonist has no countermeasures. The reading experience is in the form of [open high and go low/split/refreshing (doubtful) with congestion in the middle]. [Versatility & Countermeasures] Versatility: Not recommended for most readers, some readers who like slow reading and have requirements for group portrait descriptions Countermeasures: Highly recommended for World War II air combat enthusiasts, both in terms of equipment details and tactics and strategies. Worth trying [Extract Suggestions] Recommended to: Air Combat Details Party, Technical Control Party Not Recommended: Shuangwen Party [Summary] In short, "Waltz in the Sky" is a "raw jade". It would be better if the author spends more energy to carve out the group portraits and military details of the land battle. The following is a personal subjective complaint: The author's hook for the protagonist is too difficult, and it has little meaning except to help the protagonist transform from a rookie to an ace tool person and to explain the plot. Enemies that should be killed cannot be killed, and further promotion of the development of air force doctrine has not yet been reflected (as of 2025/8/14). It would be better if other war mine systems (such as accessories, member group levels, creeps, etc.) Are introduced and the protagonist is transferred from the role of air superiority tool man to the air force farming stream (unfortunately, the weapons test squadron establishment has disappeared with the transfer to Egypt, sad). When there are not enough updates, wasting pen and ink on a small character (a certain unlucky infantry platoon leader) who appears in a few chapters is even more disastrous for the reading experience, not to mention that the description of the enemy's ace takes up space for the protagonist group.

It can be renamed "Hungry Author Satisfies Sexual Fantasy Female Character Xiangxiang"

If you like Kurt so much, why don't you just make him the protagonist, and get it back from Chapter 1 to Chapter 136?

Immersed in your art? If you don't read readers' suggestions, you should bear the consequences yourself. I have nothing to say.

It's still the same sentence When a person is right, it is to distinguish between the noble qualities and the ugliness of the enemy. Soldiers and kindness do not conflict But decisiveness in killing is not indecision. Even if you really don't want to write to kill him from the parachute, at least you have to write something equivalent that can be accepted by readers, right? Forcibly breaking out of PTSD, a brother in the comment area put it well: Will someone overcome PTSD and break through themselves? There are very few articles on the market that write about the history of World War II but also intuitively and deeply reflect a certain country. The author has laid a good foundation in the early stage, and it can be seen that the author has a certain foundation. In light novels and two-dimensional, what everyone hopes to read is not just blindly deflated, as long as the plot of deflated is enough, It's just reasonable and in line with the development of the plot With such a good female elf teammate, a Scottish girl, a brother who grew up together, and a cute little witch, why not write about comradeship, the glory of humanity in war, and the two-dimensional pure love story that everyone loves to see based on the historical line? Personally, I don't want to give up the book at the moment, because I think this book may have a turning point, but others won't hold a wait-and-see attitude after reading it for a long time. I hope the author will consider it carefully after reading it!

First of all, I said that the female pilot looks like an elf. I didn't realize it until Lianmeng🤣 I tasted it and realized that it didn't taste right.