Hogwarts: Gou Becomes a God by Farming in Badger Yard

The Badger Court is the most united. As a Badger Court, you don't care about the life or death of your fellow members?

As the title states, I have read more than 100 chapters, about 117 of them. I skipped some of the unpaid chapters and some of the paid ones. I have read about 90 chapters in total. But we can still have a certain understanding of the overall plot. I haven't watched any Harry Potter, and I don't understand the setting of Harry Potter. So there was a conflict on the train to the academy. The villain was described as being Japanese. The inexplicable conflict was incomprehensible. There was also an inexplicable look down on the protagonist and Hermione. There was also a supporting character (the name of a foreigner was too difficult to remember), which gave him a little devil feeling. There are also people who want to see tree planting or daily writing, but it is not very good. After reading more than a hundred chapters of the plot, I feel (I have read the novel for more than ten years, and I still feel it has a certain degree of accuracy), which is that an all-around person is growing up (with many branch lines, many and complex abilities), and there is a feeling of personal heroism. The title of the book has Tree Planting, but the current plot has little to do with Planting Trees (the title of the book is Planting Trees, but the plot is about the Academy Cup or some competition), and occasionally overwhelms the protagonist (a legendary life, whose body with legendary power is not worthy of platinum-level magic strength?). The college where the protagonist is in feels like a background board. It is said that various people support the protagonist and how popular the protagonist is. However, there is no specific plot describing the specific classmates or characters in the college who support the protagonist (there may be, because I skipped some chapters). Instead, there are various plots of intrigue. There are still some flaws. Some large chapters are half full of useless descriptions. In short, they describe how awesome the protagonist's abilities are, but they are not reflected in concrete terms. It feels fake and empty. The good thing is that the process and development of the story can be written in a more interesting way, and it is not so routine. The most important thing is that the same routine is not used all the time, and the plot is a bit delayed. Overall it's pretty good, it can be considered a second-rate grass. (Because it is an old book, flaws are more sensitive and easy to magnify, which affects the sense of reading.) The most important thing is that I am a fan of yakuza-ryu, farming literature and daily literature. I can read more than a hundred chapters. Normally, I can't stand it after reading five, six or ten chapters.

Brother, you are a peddler, even if farming is not a formality, even if it is just an upgrade method, please respect the settings, okay? The character OOC is so serious that the whole book is the protagonist and plot waiter. Does it have to be written in such a way that everyone is dissatisfied?

I think this introduction on the cover can persuade a lot of people to quit. A distant relative of Professor Sprout who plants trees. He sounds like a badgerman, and it's really not a badgerman if he doesn't try to save Hufflepuff's light. It's more like a refined egoist, which is suitable for Slytherin. I suggest changing it. Although the rescue routine is a bit old, if you want to write about Badger Yard, you can't be beautiful alone.

At the beginning, you took the initiative to deepen the conflict. You could make him speechless, but you took action. You said you wouldn't take the lead but you didn't win over Malfoy at once. He was just a child. Is it so difficult to clean up? The crazy emphasis is that the protagonist saves people because of profit, but the profit he gets is not much?

To be honest, author, if you write a protagonist who enters the Badger Academy, he must meet the qualities required to enter the Badger Academy. If you don't have the qualities of unity and friendliness, if you have the ability, just write a story about the growth of an ordinary person who is not wanted by other academies. If you want to enter the Badger Academy and talk to yourself, isn't it just selling yourself like a sheep's head?

When you plant a tree, plant a tree honestly. I'm writing about my daily life. Don't win the House Cup and the Quidditch Cup.

Such a weak person actually dares to get involved with Harry Potter. Once he comes into the sight of the Death Eaters, he may not survive the finale, especially the Badger House. In the final battle, all members of the Badger House will participate.

After reading the first ten chapters, the author deliberately lowered the protagonist's IQ. As a time traveler, I feel that his brain is as slow as that of Na Weiyou. His mind is full of "burying his head in planting". I guess he must be a nanny in the future and sew the "burying his head in planting" weirdos into the original plot. Have you seen Shennong in the back and told me if it was "burying your head in planting" + following the plot?

I feel like the professors' personality has collapsed a bit.

The protagonist knows that Dolokhov is his enemy, and speculates that he will escape from prison four years later, and then vows to take revenge. However, the protagonist is still practicing the fluorescent spell after forty or fifty chapters. Although it is to enhance your magic perception, since you have upgraded, you should be able to practice other magic spells.

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The author's setting for the protagonist seems to be that he has poor magic talent, so the magic spells he uses may have weak effects. And because of his poor magic perception, his progress is slow. If he didn't use it constantly every day, he would hardly feel any progress. It seems that he is not too stupid to learn it. After all, Professor Sprout taught the loosening spell and the pruning spell and learned it in one go. As a result, within a few months, I had learned 6 magic spells, and I kept struggling there. Every improvement was reflected by adding more talents to the system. The effect of his own practice is not as good as that of a genius who practices for just two days. It's been so long, and I haven't even learned some little magic spells in life. I don't know as much as Hermione did when she read books at home before school started. Based on the protagonist's situation, shouldn't he learn more knowledge and spells while waiting for the plants to mature? When the talent is added, you can gain some proficiency and your level will go up. The author wouldn't think that geniuses like Dumbledore and others would have to practice a spell thousands of times like the protagonist does to master it! ! ! This progress is too slow and the reader's patience will be worn out.

At first glance, the introduction is in an AI style, and the content of a few hundred words is bloated. I don't dare to think how much nonsense the main text should be, and I instantly lose interest.

The progress is very slow. The 200 chapters have just reached the second grade. At least 35% of the content is water word count, and each time it is "a sudden increase in strength". Then every battle was just a little clever, there was no direct confrontation, no one came forward to show off, and there was no pretending to be a slap in the face. You can skip 20-30 chapters at once and it won't affect your viewing. That's right, it won't affect your viewing at all.

Goldfinger who relies on plants to obtain abilities through farming should be able to harvest more novel abilities or magic in many aspects, but what you wrote is too simple. It would have been more fun to harvest various magics, but you have only obtained one or two of them so far. I might as well go to the library to learn various magics quickly...

This introduction really persuades me to quit, it doesn't matter, they are all from the same house, and they play Quidditch together. The protagonist has no concern, and the plot is also very strange. The professor does not say it OOC, but the protagonist: Herbal talent, hard work, huge strength, Quidditch talent There are so many things, but the professor's evaluation every time is: Alas, it would be better if the talent is better. He can only be an ordinary mediocrity, isn't it buddy? Now the protagonist is almost among the top young wizards of the same level. Why are you always arranging such suppressive plots?

Author, if you can change this introduction, please change it. It looks like an eagle and a snake. I would like to suggest that you delete the 17,000-word completed version if you can. Leaving it hanging makes me less confident in your ability.

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I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist said that Slytherin students are barking dogs, and the professors also echoed that they are barking dogs. It's true 🤔

The plot is stretched, and there is only one fluorescent spell in more than 40 chapters. I guess I won't be able to use attack spells for a hundred chapters. Really boring

The protagonist directly tells his aunt that he can get benefits from plants, so why not talk about the system? Anyway, it's probably due to blood.

After reading this book about magical animals, people ran away halfway through the book. The subject matter is very novel and the writing is okay. Why do you stick to the original book? When you write a fanfic, you just want to change the original work and expand it to write your own thing. I really don't understand.

Others are not the Holy Mother. When they see an old man, they help them. When they see someone suffering, they help them. That would have destroyed the hospital as early as the Dark Lord.

There is a little problem with the setting. The first-year students will not be called Severus, and Snape will not have too much trouble with other professors because of the House Cup. At most, he will add more points to his own house in private. There is also the looking glass that Malfoy took out. It has no monitoring function and will only remind you when you feel malicious. Even a double-sided mirror with a video function is very expensive. There is no double-sided mirror in the world, let alone a "looking glass" with a monitoring function.

This thing is not farming style at all! The male protagonist has a system where you can harvest experience and skills as long as you plant things. For example, if you grow cotton, you can harvest heat and lodging resistance skills and experience. Then you will see - the male protagonist keeps planting plants and harvesting experience, but after harvesting the experience, there is no follow-up at all! Nothing is written about how to use the grown plants! Whether it is dispensing medicines, creating new plants, or producing and operating, there is nothing exciting about farming. These plants just rot in the ground. The whole article is just about describing how hard-working the protagonist is, getting up early and staying up late at night to plant things, or practice magic, and people around him praise the protagonist for his hard work! How is this farming style? Pure practice flow! Practicing crazily to increase the experience bar, and practicing the next level of Kung Fu when it is full, is just a way of turning the practice into farming.

Author, do you think the Harry Potter fan writing has gone astray? In fact, it's not necessary. How many people still remember the plot of Harry Potter? After so many years, it has become very blurry, so it doesn't matter how innovative you are. Many authors' own original works are quite interesting. I think you can continue writing.

The content and writing are fine, come on✊

I think it's well written. Come on, the author, and write in your own style. Only you are a good friend to everyone in Badger Yard.

How long will it take for you to come back? Let me know from the author.