I'm More Than Just Human!

Have you exercised? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The subject matter is good, the writing is decent, and the story is well told, but the plot and worldview are not very good. It feels like a child of luck. The protagonist is always upgraded inexplicably, and he doesn't know why. Then when he encounters difficulties, he just happens to have outside help, which always saves the day. For example, when the Silver Throne appears for the first time in the plot, the emperor or the church will actually know who it is as long as he checks it, but everyone seems to have ignored it. At the same time, everyone is kind to him, not malicious, and seems to want to make friends with this genius instead of destroying him. This is very wrong. Many of the subsequent plots seem to be clever and coherent, but in fact it is like the protagonist is being pushed away. Inexplicably, he is in crisis, inexplicably gets benefits, and inexplicably learns something. If you have read novels such as Xuanjian Xianzu, you should understand what I mean, or it feels like the whole book has been arranged by 008. What a coincidence. Furthermore, there are flaws in the social system and currency system. Many families should have ancestors from outside gods, rather than simply an internal game in the main world. There will also be games between the righteous gods and entities and outer gods. It is not just for a cleanser, and the protagonist's talent is constantly improving, but the resources must be provided by himself. Logically speaking, there will be no shortage of money from the first exposure of the Silver Throne. In recent chapters, the righteous gods will first throw away a few tons of sacred metal regardless of whether it is true or not. Speaking of the true gods, you can't tell the true from the false. Everyone talks about their own things, so how can you pray? Pray that if the opposite is fake and swallow you up, won't you explode? How do I feel about it? The protagonist lacks awe of mystery and relies on his background to wander around. [Doesn't take his own life seriously] This The biggest problem is that the protagonist is not like a person, but "regards himself as the protagonist", that is, he seems to know that he is the protagonist, and puts himself in the position of the "protagonist" to live his life, instead of treating himself as a time-traveler with a golden finger. This is very important. I wonder if you can understand it. In general, it is good, and can be rated as above average, but it is too thin and lacks complexity. Good people are good and bad people are bad. The protagonist also has a clear distinction between good and evil and hates evil. All characters lack complexity and the social structure is also very thin. The pretense routine is the same every time, and the mentality is childish, more like an 18-year-old boy. He is respectful to everyone he meets, and speaks of his seniors. When he meets bad people, he thinks about it. It is difficult for me to describe this feeling. In short, it is not like a mature person. Everyone is too clear-cut about good and evil.

Do you want to exercise? Writing hastily and rashly is also conjecture.

The protagonist of the King's Invincible style is similar to a combination of Saitama and King. He is the son of destiny. The blame can never be placed on him, and all incidents can be solved easily. Setting: 8 Plot: 8 Writing: 7 Appraisal: Liangcao+ Evaluation: Very pure flavor, it feels like I used to read Wangdao comics. The author has done a lot of sewing, and I can see the setting of One Punch, the world view of Cthulhu, the secret contract, not to mention the soul ring of Douluo. But the sewing is quite fun and worth a look tips: The author seems to be a very smart newcomer, and his writing style and worldview system are obviously different from those reincarnations of old TJs. I have always been tolerant of new authors. The author can add some ink to the behind-the-scenes or the front-facing cupping (the reaction of the supporting character contrasts the protagonist's forced cupping), which is essentially similar to the behind-the-scenes person who looks more holy in front of the person. As for taking risks, there is currently no sense of crisis and no sense of exhilaration in making a comeback. Regarding the money system and level system, it is recommended to refer to the master's work again next time, or simply omit it. According to the current daily update volume of tens of thousands and the writing method of slowly exploring and improving, the master can be expected.

The writing is good, it does not overemphasize the strength of the protagonist, there is no poisonous point, the world view is large and exciting, and the mystery is well written. The strength level in the book can keep up with the destructive power. This is a good comment. I'm afraid that the kind of strength is god-level. You punch me and I kick you to fight with mortals. The destructive power is still floor-level. The protagonist must not deliberately be defeated or deliberately abuse the protagonist. Just follow the pretense and cross-pushing feeling mentioned above. Don't be a literary youth or abuse the protagonist. I have been a bookworm for more than 20 years. It is too difficult to find a book that suits my appetite. Keep writing at this pace. Book it all! Come on author, don't be a eunuch! 🤓

In order to cope with the physical test, I once improved my long-distance running time by 1 minute in one week. It's a pity that I didn't stick with it after taking the exam, otherwise I would have exceeded the speed of light in one month. Next month we will break through the negative numbers and reverse time and space.

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I have read more than 400 chapters, let me share some personal insights. It just feels like the protagonist's status has been greatly improved. After turning from an extraordinary person to a god, it feels like the map has been changed and the description method of the other supporting characters has been changed. The sense of déjà vu is particularly strong. Even before I became a god, the descriptions of gods other than gods were somewhat mysterious. Now, the descriptions of other gods are too anthropomorphic.

Have you ever been a god? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Can the author turn off the anti-theft function?