The Wind of Martial Arts Rises from Qingping

It's a rare martial arts fanfic. In fact, Doupo fanfiction is much more popular than Wudong fanfiction. I think your writing is very detailed, but the fanfic really doesn't pay much attention to this. Of course, this is not a shortcoming. Secondly, the protagonist is half-aboriginal and half-traveler. I have never seen this kind of thing become popular. There are audiences for both indigenous people and time-travelers. Generally speaking, there are more time-travelers. Is such a protagonist really appropriate?

Hurry up, if you want to be an adopted son, just be neat and tidy, you're not like Lu Bu

If the protagonist wants to save the world by himself, the heroine must add Ling Qingzhu, because only Ling Qingzhu can understand the Supreme Being. If it is still Lin Dong, it doesn't matter, but Lin Dong saves the world, isn't the protagonist Lin Dong?

Let's start another Siheyuan drama honestly, and don't involve young people in the emotional drama. This abandoned therapy, stop struggling, what has happened to it?

Two heroines, on the protagonist card? ?

Author, your hint is too bad. Just tell me who the heroine is.

By the way, who is the heroine of the author?

You can still take a look at what you wrote, please update more often.

A small suggestion to the author, create a character label to write about the heroine, and now I see that Aya Qingzhu Niu has been taken away, but this problem is not too big, because Lin Dong is a complete accident, there is no surprise. What about Ying Huanhuan? Even if you don't dismantle the cp, you'll still be awesome? In the case of the latter, I would run away first. It's not a bad thing, but I personally can't bear to see such a cp that has a strong relationship and runs through the main plot being taken away by the protagonist. (Just like if you write a story about Dou Po, it's okay to have a little medical fairy as the heroine, but if you set it as Xiao Xun'er, the book will probably collapse) (It can't be because the author later planned to kill Ying Huanhuan, so he just doesn't say anything now, so that readers who don't like to watch this kind of plot will run away in advance? 🙂)

In fact, there is no need to skip too many plots. Lin Mo's own adventure can be written in more detail. When Lin Dong's plot is separated, don't write it in a single chapter. You can mention one or two sentences between the lines and bring it out through the conversations of passers-by. I think it will be a lot better. Now that I have seen the War of Hundred Dynasties, I feel that it jumps too fast. My emotions are intermittent and I have no desire to watch it all the time, let alone someone who is following the update. I am just suggesting that I hope the author will update more.

The writing is okay, but it feels more everyday. I suggest you consider the daily and warm ones such as Fairy Tail. Then there is the setting issue. The setting of the protagonist should be a reincarnation, a time traveler, but the setting of this domestic servant is really a bit frustrating. If it is a pure reincarnation, it will be okay after all, the trend of the times is there, but there is one more Being a time traveler feels a bit oppressive. Who in the modern world can bear this arrogance? After all, if you are an adopted son, forget it, but you are just a domestic servant who was almost beaten to death. Even if you are fully compensated afterwards, you should understand the truth. They are never your family. You are just an outsider. Forget it, let's just say this.

Are there Lin Qingzhu and Ying Huanhuan?

Why do you feel like everything in the back is a copy of the original work?

A new work by a newbie, a wudong fan, please rate it.