Life in the Courtyard

The downfall of this book is that the author talks too much. He keeps putting aside the main text, which makes me lose my temper after reading it for a while. I can't stand this kind of thing after reading it for more than ten chapters. How can the author, who is not a newbie, mix in so much self-talk?

I generally don't choose books. I've read all the millions of words of chronicles in the previous chapter. However, I really couldn't hold on to this book. I read more than 240 chapters and had an uncomfortable headache. The main character didn't look like the main character at all. The more I went on, the weaker the main character became. There were more than 200 chapters describing it. The heroine's story does not exceed 500 words, and it cannot leave any impression on readers. The powerful abilities that the protagonist initially possesses are not reflected at all. Not to mention disappearing from everyone, she is almost like a small character in a courtyard. She has no main idea, and it is uncomfortable to watch. The author is quite good, and I can see that he has written it carefully. I suggest you talk to the editor more and find ways to capture the main idea. Don't let the supporting characters cover up the protagonist, and avoid writing a running account. Also, the psychological activities should be reduced appropriately so that readers can understand it. There is no need to explain everything clearly. It would be better to give readers a space to think and take in.

You're going to kill me at the beginning, right?

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Fortunately, there were reviews. I saw that the apprenticeship of a master was so poisonous that I immediately gave up the book. You are a time traveler, you have a golden finger, and the layout is too small. Even if you run every day and increase your agility, it will be better than this. If you have the talent, you can go directly to study medicine and be respected by others. In those days, if you wanted to make money, you would go to Hong Kong. If you didn't want to make money and experience life, you would just live in a courtyard, watch movies and eat melons. In that era, even if you earned 10,000 yuan a month and 50 yuan a month, your life was the same.

I wonder if the author has any misunderstanding about the real master-disciple relationship! If the first master really had 16 true disciples, he wouldn't worry about his old age, let alone having no one to support him until his death! !

Hehe, this is the first time I have seen a courtyard house with this idea. It is really fresh. If the author can maintain the update speed, full subscription will not be a problem. Most of the courtyard houses use forced intelligence, which makes people feel like they are a kindergarten, which is called a pain. What we want to see is not to use the IQ and moral character of modern people to spend that time that cannot be forgotten. Author bacteria, come on

Do you still need to take Yi Zhonghai as your teacher? If he hadn't failed, it would have been okay to take Yi Zhonghai as his disciple. God is so diligent, you actually use it to learn fitter? Wouldn't reading make you more promising? To be honest, fitter is a very useless skill compared to the talent of Tiandao Yinqin. Don't think too much about fitter. In fact, it is a dirty and tiring job.

The writing is very good. It is bland and refreshing. The most important thing is that it is logical. The characters have flesh and blood. Many Siheyuan fans just blindly trample on the Jia family. The whole hospital is angry. But this book not only writes the origin of the conflicts between the characters in an orderly manner. Jia Dong Xu is arrogant and has insufficient IQ, Qin Huai is hypocritical and calculating, etc. These are all reasonable and have a historical background. I think this book is not suitable for people who simply want to read mindless and refreshing articles. This book is very realistic and logical. Small The smoothness of the characters and the integration of the times. There are not too many cheats. It is more about the interaction between the characters and neighborhood life. This is a period article. I hope the author insists. Finally, the author pays attention to the segmentation. It is too dense. Then the digressions about technology can be reduced a bit. There are too many interactions between the secondary actors in the courtyard. Li Shouliang does not have enough roles, but his character is such a salty fish. You can write his other roles appropriately.

The apprenticeship ceremony at the beginning is too vicious! 2 Cartons of cigarettes, 2 boxes of cakes, 2 cans of tea, 6 pounds of fruit, is the author living in modern society? ? ? Where did you, a common man, get the tickets from when your mother just passed away and you just joined the factory to take over? ? ? ? This is what apprenticeship is like in modern society

After reading the beginning, a time-traveler with a hook wants to recognize someone as his father? Tell me what are you planning? Please quit the group, you are too embarrassing for the bad guys.

This book can be renamed →Siheyuan: The Years When I Became Yi Zhonghai's Dog with the System and the Golden Finger

Too licking the deaf old lady! A time traveler comes with his own system, and there are such good resources in it, and he even kowtows to become his disciple! Give people old age care, tsk tsk tsk! It's so poisonous!

Have you read the original work? I became a disciple of Yi Zhonghai, and I'm convinced. It's okay to start traveling through time and find a father first. Well, you don't have much background as a father, and it will do more harm than good. What are you trying to do to have less of a father? Let's talk about the situation first. The Jia family is the first caregiver for Yi, the He family is the second caregiver, and you are the third caregiver at most. This means that if the first two are not dead, you will not get much benefit and have to bear the burden of being the number one person to fight for Yi in the courtyard and factory. Do you still think about it if you offend so many people? In the original novel, if you look at how bad the reputations of Jia and He are, and how many people they have offended, do you think they want to do this? The saying "once a teacher, always a father" was made at that time. Did they dare not listen to Yi's words? For such a small thing as not being filial to your master, your reputation will immediately fall into disrepute if word spreads about it. No good things will happen to you in the future, and you will have to wait until the 1980s to get ahead. No one is asking for trouble. Think about it, after Jia is gone, your blood will be 100% absorbed by the Jia family. Just like He, you will be the number one in special funds. The starting price is 5 yuan. Do you dare to say no if Yi allows you to specialize? Reputation will tie you to death, unless you are determined to be independent, then what did you want to do as a disciple in the first place? You would be a better loser to become the deputy director of Li in the factory than this apprentice.

The emotional line of this book, which the author may think is very good, is actually just a piece of cake. The original heroine was broken up for an inexplicable reason, and then she lost her temper at all. She felt that she was tall and mature, right? In fact, it is a typical dog licking. It is recommended that the author enter the factory.

It took less than 100,000 words to create an original female protagonist, but it took about a million words to break up the story, and then a blind date was created because the protagonist's academic qualifications were not appreciated. As for these protagonists, they were calm and energetic throughout the whole process and went home to cry silently... I can only say that the protagonists are really awesome. I am afraid that the author did not directly write down his own personal experience.

I can't stand it. The first thing you do when you return to this era is to become a disciple and recognize your father. You are simply mentally ill.

I don't think it's a disadvantage to support Yi Zhonghai in his old age. You have money, a house, savings, and a monthly income of hundreds. The aunt makes you worry-free, and the uncle has high prestige in the courtyard. When they are gone, the house in this courtyard will be yours, and that is a Beijing courtyard. The house in the courtyard, how much does it cost? If we can send the second uncle and the third uncle away together, there are only three houses. Three houses. We can directly become a tenant. It would be even better if we want to time travel to Shazhu. Think about his own situation, that of the deaf old lady. , He Yuyu's, plus three uncles, that's six houses. If it weren't for the Jia family, Shazhu would be the winner in life. The protagonist wants to travel to Shazhu and wants to drive away the Jia family. The stick will be sent in to be eaten by peanuts, and Xiaozhu will find someone to marry. Go out, Mrs. Jia and Zhang sent her to her hometown in the countryside early to stop causing trouble. Widow Qin is holding her arms, living in a big house, and eating meat from a small stove. How beautiful it is. Why can't you think about it and don't want to provide for the old man? Just holding the old man in your hand is very arrogant.

Is the heroine a saleswoman? It's neither beautiful nor distinctive, so I gave it up.

Yi Buqun is too controlling, and he is the kind of person who wants you to support him in his old age without giving anything. Once the protagonist agrees, he basically has no personal freedom and will undoubtedly be kidnapped by morality. Once he disobeys his moral sword, he will strike at the protagonist and he will be punished by thousands of people. Don't underestimate the influence of an eighth-level worker in that era. When the protagonist worships him as his disciple, he will just kill the protagonist with just one sentence of being unfilial, unfaithful, and unjust. I'm afraid he won't be able to wash away this reputation for the rest of his life. Therefore, the protagonist's direct apprenticeship with Yi Buqun is definitely a sign of mental retardation. Of course, if you don't have a golden finger, apprenticeship is a good way, but why would you, a loser, step forward to be someone else's son? If it were just a master and not a master, it would be easier to get rid of it later, but the reputation of the protagonist will definitely be ruined, and if you fall out with him, you will definitely lose your job and reputation.

How should I put it? The first part is pretty good, but the second part is just shit. Sorry, it's a bit insulting. Maybe someone else wrote it. If you focus on technology, then do technology to lead the daily life. If you have to write about intrigues and officialdom struggles, just write about it. The writing is so bad. He's not a chess player, just a chess piece. I've never seen such a protagonist, and he's just like this? The protagonist of the web article? The multi-line narrative was written in a mess, and the heroine was also messed up by you. You also made it clear that the length of the story was very dark. In the end, they even broke up. They had no temper at all. Sometimes the temper comes out of nowhere, and sometimes you laugh when it gets the better of you. You don't even go back after it's over. Have you ever counted how many holes you've buried and haven't filled? Just because of the struggle of the people above, people know who you are. You signed up for the promotion exam and deliberately refused to take it. You still think that you are good at writing other books. Now you have to be a section chief instead of a division director. You have written 400 chapters and now you are a sixth-level fitter. After the next one or two hundred chapters, you will not be promoted at all. You will not sign up for the exam. You have no rights. The superiors can do whatever they want to do with you. You are still a fool.

The more I edited it, the worse it got. In order to make up the plot, I started making it up. Why keep a new machine tool secret and spy? That era was given away for free, and even developed countries didn't want it! At that time, domestic machine tools were regarded as substandard products in the eyes of the Czech Republic and East Germany. In the eyes of West Germany, Switzerland, Japan and the United States, it is scrap metal. Those who take on apprentices in the back are even worse. There is no such thing as taking on apprentices? Who wants a forced person like that labor camp prisoner or that engineer? You go into the factory, do the chores, and when you are good enough, you can find a master.

The love story of the protagonist is a bit outrageous. Dong Shan left the table for no apparent reason because the protagonist felt that he was too licking. He held the heroine up high and as a result, the heroine became distracted and ignored the hero. The hero became angry and ignored others. Emm, it's really hard to judge. People are pampered by themselves. They say they like it, accompany others, and care about the woman's parents and relatives. As a result, the heroine is a bit pampered and arrogant, because The male protagonist was not informed of the shift change in time, so the male protagonist became angry and felt humiliated. He didn't know what to say. The female protagonist must have done something wrong, but the person didn't come to the male protagonist the next day or the next day (I forgot, the time was very close). The male protagonist was being petty and ignored, and his tone and behavior revealed the feeling that they would never meet each other again, and they were strangers, Juezi! It is from the author's description that we can see that the male protagonist has already given up on the female protagonist! I was simply shocked. As someone who has read a lot of romance novels, I have never seen a conflict that ended up being described in the article. There was a strong rhythm of never seeing each other again and never seeing each other again! It gives people the impression that this CP is about to collapse and cannot be saved! As a result, I looked through the catalog and found that, sure enough, it collapsed. Not long after this conflict, the woman's family collapsed because of their unacceptable attitude. Hard to comment! There is also the inexplicable heroine who turns into He Yuyu. Uh, that's outrageous. The author's previous description clearly points out that the male protagonist knows that Yuyu is interested in him, but he has no feelings. He has a partner and keeps himself clean, haha! But then he forcefully said that the male protagonist didn't know Yuyu liked him, emm, he was so messed up, and complained late at night, I really couldn't help it, ahhh, I'm going crazy too, what the hell!

Writing books is poisonous. He dared to get close to Yi Zhonghai as soon as he got up. He also knew that Yi Zhonghai was good at assessment. Yi Zhonghai was the kind of person who would only give you benefits after you passed the assessment. The biggest reason for Jia Dongxu's poor study was Yi Zhonghai's ghost. Basically, intermediate-level technical workers can be found. Watching TV series, Jia Dongxu is at the level of a junior worker.

Whoever looks at someone is short-sighted and mentally retarded! When the protagonist came up, he knelt down and licked the deaf old lady. He didn't do anything he could do, and rushed out with good things for free. The protagonist's mother's heart is overflowing. After licking the old lady and the Jia family, Jia Dongxu has not yet reached the time of trouble, but he says that he must save Jia Dongxu no matter what. Isn't it disgusting?

I also stopped watching after seeing Yi Zhonghai.

It looked so frustrating. Afraid of this and that, he is tied up and has no ability. Xu Damao publicly spread rumors about you to ruin your reputation, but your countermeasure was to secretly report Xu Damao's sleeping with a woman. The problem was that you had no evidence, so in the end the matter was ignored. Xu Damao even married Lou Xiao'e. You might as well spread the rumors about him.

It's really rubbish. Since you're going to be a dog through time travel, why don't you set up some God's reward system and hang around the pension group, looking like a dog? It's really disgusting, I gave up after less than ten chapters.

🤮I recognized my grandma from the beginning, she lacks love.

Rebirth is already a great cheat. It's not necessary to add another system, but it will make people feel disgusted