Madam, Let's Break Off the Engagement

I have caught up to Chapter 34. Generally speaking, it can be regarded as the infancy of a fairy tale. The writing is good, and the plot arrangement is a bit immature. It can be seen that the author is a newcomer. Just a quick question, the first ten chapters are not very good. The heroine's design is a bit complicated. You can put a label on it first. However, looking back, the heroine's design has been emphasized. It can be seen that the author is carefully designing the character. In fact, due to the novelty of the ideas, some people can read it slowly, and can see that the author is slowly improving, and the plot and writing are getting stronger and stronger. This is already rare for a newcomer, and it is the kind that becomes more and more beautiful. It is recommended that you have time to polish the front, otherwise you will lose many readers, come on

Ask the author if he doesn't write anymore?

Have you ever practiced immortality? You just write about cultivating immortals? Write without basis! V I am 50, I will teach you how to write! Get rid of the red hair and become the starting point brother!

I am Xiao Chunan, I like to watch 🤓

It's so well written, the writing is sophisticated, the plot is smooth, and the plot is unconventional! Awesome, awesome!

Xiao Pujie has begun to shamelessly seek to read it. Although the writing is not good, I insist on feeding it to everyone, striving for more updates while maintaining the quality. I love you all, hehe.

I originally wanted to reward a golden alliance, but it's okay if I don't sign a contract.

I originally wanted to watch it, but I'm not Xiao Chunan, so I stopped watching it.

I didn't sign a contract, so forget it.

I wanted to reward a gold alliance, but I found that I only had three points left. Unfortunately, unfortunately...🙄

One question in Soul Travel is whether the feelings of the heroine's family, relatives and friends towards the hero are based on the previous life or based on the present. Another question is whether the body with which the identity is identified is yours.

Dear author, where did you make this cover? It's so beautiful. Why do all I see on Pinxixi be ai😭

I originally wanted to watch it, but suddenly I saw that Xiao Chunan was required to watch it. Forget it, I didn't meet the requirements so I stopped watching 😰

It was good and stable at the beginning, but later in the state examination, Xinghua Village, and Taixuanzong, the setting kept changing and the pace accelerated. The setting should be gradually reflected in the plot rather than thrown out all at once. In this way, there is no sense of substitution and there are less things you can write. Lu Yao has problems, she has a temper, and she has some opinions about the protagonist. This is normal, but her temper is too big, as if she has been fed by gunpowder. No matter what, the protagonist is still trying to save her. Come on, keep the pace steady, focus on the plot, don't rush to throw away the settings, pay attention to the characters, and don't give up.

When the hero has a telepathic connection, shouldn't he immediately know it's the system when he hears the panel?

? ? Why did I finish the book before I even read it?

I wasted half a day watching it, only to find that it was only suitable for Xiao Chu Nan, so goodbye!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~