Young Master, You Said You Don't Know Martial Arts?

It looks very awkward. The county captain is the county captain, and the Taiwei belongs to the Three Lords. The official title of the County Lieutenant in the article is Taiwei. This low-level mistake will not be changed 🙂

Writing historical texts in the name of martial arts

It is the first time for a new author to write a book, and the content framework is also conceived by himself, so there must be many questions. I have received a lot of comments in the past few days, including encouragement, advice, and abuse. As an author, I reply with gratitude. Even if it is criticism, it at least shows that I am not alone. After watching fantasy and martial arts for more than ten years, I wanted to try to write a story in my heart, so after learning the conflict opening, I started telling stories according to my own ideas. Because there was no reference book, I was crossing the river by feeling the stones in many settings and writing methods. There were also many things that I couldn't grasp the scale. For example, would it be too boring to seduce and fight? Is the protagonist feeling overwhelmed and unhappy? Should cheats be displayed using the commonly used system or should they be gradually reflected in the plot? This story is still very long in my framework. The story of the rivers and lakes after leaving Qingzhou, the temple battle when entering the capital... I am opening this post today because I hope that readers can leave their own opinions and suggestions if it is convenient. I also hope to continue to make progress and finish telling this story so that more people can see it.

How about the author refer to the nine-level Zhongzheng system and reorganize the official position system 🙂 If you innovate all official positions, I have nothing to say; but you write a long history (from ancient times to the present, you are either a senior staff member, or a senior military attache, the second-in-command military officer at the state level) (Hand) became a low-ranking official in the Wu Wei Mansion who did not know his rank,, "How can there be an emperor for fifty years in the world? I want to be a prince!" I saw some book friends said that martial arts should not care so much about official positions. I want to say that since you have written it, you should write it well. What do you think?

The writing is really good. Most of the current martial arts fantasy novels have the shadow of mixed martial arts fans. There are very few original martial arts novels that can be written so smoothly and carefully. The plot is clear and the writing is neat. It is much better than the procrastinating and literary novels of the same type on the list. This novel deserves to be more popular.

Update quickly to attract popularity! The story is really well written!

Can the protagonist become a god? I still have a low-level world view. Is there a boundary diagram?