After the Night!

The author wrote a very well-written, frustrating story. My blood pressure was 30, but after reading it, it jumped to 180. 😍

They practice an eighteen-form body-strengthening method from the textbook, but they still encounter problems because of it, without asking their teacher or a martial arts sister for help. The key issue is that he doesn't even bother to check if the book explains it, nor does he try to understand the situation himself. He just sits there working hard, "as if" he's about to master it. He's still hiding it and refusing to find out anything. I'm truly impressed.

Too many pitfalls, starting with a high school student strategy.

You can tell from the first dozen or so chapters that the protagonist is incredibly stupid. A novel's protagonist can be stupid, but he can't make the reader feel that he's stupid!

Shennong is here Food supplies are undoubtedly plentiful.

It's clearly a progression-based story, but the writing is utterly unexciting, the pacing is slow, and the conflicts are poorly crafted. Forget the progression-based genre, stop trying to be pretentious; the style is completely disjointed.

The previous book, before the world changed, was really good.

Damn, it was cut off as soon as it was released, that's really impressive.

The protagonist is a time traveler with a mature soul, but you've portrayed his behavior and thoughts like those of a native boy, constantly fearful, shy, and embarrassed. The biggest characteristic of modern people is shamelessness.

The guy next door, Gou Zai Wudao Shijie Chengsheng, has already reached 20,000 average subscriptions, and that's his first book on a small account. You have 90% of his skill level. If you write well, you can easily reach 10,000 or 20,000 subscriptions!