Pirates: from 100 Bounty to World's Richest Man

It's a pity. If I write about pirates in the next book, I can open the setting up a bit. This watery fruit is a bit too watery, and the system is a bit less interesting. Also in the later period of One Piece, everyone becomes a clown, and the settings in the early and later stages have nothing to do with it. It's quite difficult to write.

I have read Chapter 22 so far, and I have read a lot of pirate articles, so this one is considered normal. The built-in panel hanging is quite simple, and I personally think that there are no major logical flaws in the development of the plot. The environment and atmosphere of the entire East China Sea are also well created (there are some classic scenes with rough lines, a relatively mild village atmosphere, and a classic image of being stupid, bad, or bad), and the self-awareness of the protagonist is also very clear. However, I think the foreshadowing of the protagonist's mysterious father's identity in Chapter 21 is not a good solution, because first of all, you will not have a short time to fulfill the foreshadowing; secondly, how can you write the marriage recognition scene brilliantly? Not to mention the current portrayal of the protagonist, the time traveler's cognition is greater than the indigenous cognition. So I think the setting of this wild father (refers to not raising children) is very screwed up. There is another point in the same chapter, which is that there are sun marks on the body, but whether it is a former slave or not is not mentioned specifically, and the author did not expand it and wrote that he was hanging there. I think this is quite awkward as a clue to the plot and the protagonist's image.

I personally feel that picture 1 is more suitable 😁

I helped you get the male lead, it feels pretty good

The characters are really well developed, and I haven't read a book so much in a long time.

Come on, come on, it's been a long time since I met a pirate fan that I can watch

Ryuru Fruit goes well with Murloc Karate and Jujitsu

The time is not right. Luffy went to sea when he was 17 years old. The time should be May 5, 1520 in the Hainan calendar.

When I saw the author writing about Bogart, I couldn't help but complain. This guy played Rocks with Garp decades ago. Decades have passed and Garp has changed from a young man to an old man. He has not changed at all🙂. He is the hidden king of the navy.

The first - the richest man in the world is not suitable for pirates. It is better to form a hunter's guild, similar to the mage tower. Second - Try not to make your character younger, because people are not young enough to read novels. You can refer to the First One Piece: The Pirate Code

Since it is flowing, why should it be the same as water?

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I wonder if I can learn fishman karate

Furnaeus Watt. Why not change the name to Furnaeus Vaughan?

Haha, it feels like a pirate when I write it, keep up the good work! Three monthly votes have been cast

It's okay, but it's just too little. How will the fruit be developed by then? The frequency of golden fingers will be relatively small.

It also suits my taste. I wonder what the follow-up will be? Looking forward to it

After reading ten chapters, is this the same funny style throughout?

It's okay, updates are slow, if you don't care, at least I'll subscribe to you