Skeleton's Road to Become a King

The writing is good, but the problem is that it is too wordy; the character of the protagonist doing things silently is very good, but the author always writes down various ideas several times, and the overall situation becomes that the protagonist does not speak but the author is crazy and rambling Another problem is the writing method of group portraits; it is understandable that after a few books about group portraits become popular, everyone wants a piece of the pie, but group portraits are not written by every passerby? Take the first plot as an example. When the author cut to the perspective of the first pirate, I was a little surprised and thought it was well written. But then it became very irritating to have a flashback kill a random passerby before he was killed. Who could stand it after almost twenty chapters of sneak attack on an inferior pirate group? Overall, I can accept that the pace is super slow. If the protagonist and even the sidekick's psychological journey has to be written in detail, I can barely read it.

After reading the latest chapter, I feel the body is warm

First of all, let's look at the place names. Tannia is obviously a variant of Britannia, while Alvador is located in the north, presumably the location of Scotland, and Scotland's ancient name was Alva. From the above content, combined with the history of the Viking invasion of Britain, we can infer that the protagonist is in ancient Britain. It's nothing here. Anyone who is familiar with history can guess it. Next, let's look at the dress of the Silver Moon Elf. The author mentioned that she wore a Celtic-style dress, and that her tribe has been extinct and cannot return to her hometown. We start with these clues, Celts, elves, and unreachable hometown. When these words are combined, it is easy to think of a place, which is Avalon and Utopia! From this we can infer that the wasteland where the protagonist is located is Avalon. So it is speculated that Avalon is over? No, not yet! The author repeatedly mentions the words king, knight, and virtue in the book. Combined with Avalon, it can clearly point to a legendary story [King Arthur]! Hey author, I have seen through your foreshadowing!

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I don't even know what you are doing internally. Many people support you and say that you write well, but you complain every day that this is not handled well and that the writing is not good, making you act like a resentful woman. Is there any perfect novel in this world? The rhythm has indeed collapsed in the middle period, but to be honest, many readers do not have such high demands on you. Adjust well and remember to notify you when a new book is released.

The first few books have done well, and the one about Dragon Clan has almost 10,000 orders, but I ended up saying that I don't know how to write novels... I only started at level 5.

Where is Shennong? How would you rate this book?

The author's writing style is pretty good, but he's just not a eunuch.

The protagonist is an ordinary person with normal outlook on life Because he is already dead, he has very little fear of death Not a Virgin, but he has normal morals, because I see, because I happen to have the ability, and because my heart tells me I want to do this, so I will do it In reality, everyone often has normal outlook on life and morality , but due to various realistic factors, people tend to suppress themselves and become indifferent But the protagonist of this book is not affected by real factors, because he is a dead person, and his actions are just an incarnation, so he can practice his own three views and morals The whole story also has an epic feel, in line with the theme of the road to becoming a king Looking forward to the author's support

Looking at the name, I thought it was very upright, but it turned out that the literary youth had a stream of consciousness.

The results of this book are so bad. Will the author finish it? 🙂 If you want to write, I will follow it. It is very comfortable to read the light daily life.

It's a pity. The pirate chapter and the necromancer chapter were very exciting. I thought the legend had kicked off, but it fell into a cliche from the beginning of the dragon man chapter.

It's hard to comment now. The plots of the pirate chapter and the necromancer are very good. Maybe the author felt that the data was bleak and sped up the plot. However, the adventure that readers were most looking forward to ended early, causing the current plot problems to be very old and cliche. It is also very troublesome to write it myself.

It's too watery. I thought you were the king of creativity, but it turned out that your writing style is very good. It's just one word, water. The author's thinking has gone astray.

Have you ever been a skeleton? Some things are written nonsense, I take it for granted.

WC, what are you doing? What you wrote before is so good, now you are a eunuch? This is the first time I have read books to death.

This book is really a pity. It really touched me at the beginning. The last time I felt this way was when I read the comic Frillian. I thought I could witness a new great god, but it's a pity. I hope the author can calm down and think about it again.

What did the eunuch's testimonial say last time? Oh, the iceberg theory. Oh, what works did I read and what did I think? If you are such a literary youth, can you stop writing your bi articles?

Have you ever been a dead person? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Wasteland Drifting, the eternal god, can you write some short literature or highways?😭

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You may be a eunuch at every turn, but perhaps only you know in your heart what is really hindering you. Even if you know it, it's not easy to make up your mind to change. Even if you make up your mind to change, it may not be effective immediately. In short, it is rare. If you are too demanding on yourself, try lowering your standards and fooling around a bit. Those who continue to read hope that the story will have an ending, even if the quality is poor. Don't let the eunuch get used to it too much, he will never be able to climb out

Xiao Dai Zhao also cuts the books as soon as they are put on the shelves. I don't know what they are posting about.

No, are you raising yourself to death? How is it finished? ?

I am really interested in this story, I really like the plot, I want to know the follow-up development, I want to continue this adventure, I want to see the entanglement of love and hate! Why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why! ! ! ! ! Author, I will curse you forever!

If the author finds his own position and feels that long stories are not easy to write, he will write short stories for a while, and then the number of words will gradually increase.

Are there any new books? The author 😥 has excellent works. If you doubt what you are doing, this is what you do. Come back quickly.

I still want to encourage the author: when writing a book, it is normal to not be able to finish it well. For example, the princes in Fenghuo Opera are also the general managers, and Jiangnan's "Jiuzhou" and "Dragon Tribe" are still big pits. Therefore, when talent and inspiration are not yet natural, the criterion for distinguishing whether an author has the ability and room for improvement is: whether he can practice deliberately. To this end, efforts need to be made from many aspects: The meta-question of online writing-where does the reader's happiness in reading come from? (Common starting points include: pretending to be a slap in the face, developing farming, making up for regrets, building a world, and falling in love) In terms of plot arrangement, how can the story develop so that the author is willing to write it and the readers are willing to read it? (Maybe the author still needs to improve in this area - so maybe continuing to write fan fiction can make up for the problems in story line design and character setting). The last chapter makes sense. Being able to read does not mean being able to write, because it is necessary to learn some creative theories. It can not be limited to literature, but can be extended to other literary forms such as movies and games. For example, the plot and character creation can refer to the "Hero's Journey" that often appears in Hollywood movies, and the worldview structure can refer to design elements. In any case, since the author has the will to write a good book, and if he cannot write well, he will suffer from internal friction, then there is salvation. I look forward to your new work 🤓

Nnd messed with whoever he was, he raised three books, and his early results were good, but now he's all pissed off 😭

What a waste of money. I don't want to say anything else.