Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Returns from Sekiro

A brief review of this book After tasting it myself, this book is indeed a fairy grass. 1. The depiction of Lu Mingfei's changing character is natural and vivid, making people believe that this poor boy who fell into the quagmire has the courage to run in the rain. Weeds survive in the quagmire, and every time they absorb sunlight, they drift with the surroundings. Such a chaotic life! After going through wind and rain, I feel a little sad that I can grow up proudly on my own without the shade of trees and the company of flowers. 2. Some of the plots in the book are innovative and interesting. For example, the road painting encounter that happened several years earlier turned into a short umbrella story, which made people feel warm. It was like one day when it was raining. You went to pick up an umbrella to avoid the rain. You found a beautiful, wet miko girl squatting on the side, covering her body and shaking. You felt pity for her, so you held an umbrella with her to protect her from the rain. You try to ask the miko to go home, but the miko doesn't move, as if she's crazy. You gritted your teeth and felt that you couldn't ignore her, so you stayed with her as if you had lost your mind until her family came to find you. Two strangers became connected because of a reckless heavy rain. Even though they could not understand each other, they still cuddled with each other in the rain... 3. The development of this Black Swan Harbor copy is something I have never heard of. It is like a random event that suddenly pops up when running a group. It can be seen that the author should try a three-line narrative, a new Herzog, a new road Mingfei, and a new Renata. The latter Mingfei line first merges with Renata, and finally merges with the Herzog line. To be honest, I am really looking forward to the next story. Disagreements 1. Regarding the senior sister: I have always had a good impression of this character. After all, judging from the original work, Nono takes good care of Lu Mingfei and is willing to care about his mental health and protect him (the Three Gorges Incident). Most such elder sisters are good. As for Green Tea, I don't feel it. How could Nono's psychological profiling ability be proof that she was hanging on to Lu Mingfei? She never showed any sign of liking Lu Mingfei from the beginning to the end. Lu Mingfei also knew it, and he just secretly (even though everyone knew it) had a crush on his senior sister. What happened to the mutual agreement between you and me? 2. For the uncle's family: That is the real family. It is an objective fact that Lu Mingfei has been showing off before. Lu Mingze is his aunt's biological son. It is normal to have preferences. Besides, the uncle has always been very good to Lu Mingfei. In Long San, they mistakenly thought that something happened to Lu Mingfei. Wouldn't they also go on TV to ask the government for help? Real family members are the ones who are willing to help you when something happens to you. I don't understand why some people have such strong opinions on this? My uncle's family is an ordinary family, right? 3. For the author: The author himself should not pay too much attention to those negative reviews. There are always people who don't like them. Just think of it as screening readers. Just like the guy next door who wrote about the emperor's death angel, it is very important to determine his own audience. As for whether the queen is a harem? Who cares, just write it smoothly. It depends on whether the harem is read in the brain. This question is not very important. There is also the one about a free day. It is indeed a bit stiff and the plot logic is weird. I know that the author was in a state of mind at the time. I will ignore it for now, but I still hope to fix it. Finally, cheers to the author↖(^ω^)↗

Some people may think that Nono's character looks uncomfortable and weird at first. In fact, that's how it is. In this novel, the Lu Mingfei whom Nono saw and chased at the beginning was a lone wolf. Lu Mingfei, who had been baptized by a wolf, gave Nono a completely different look. In the original work, it is only written that Nono picked up this poor abandoned wild dog named Lu Mingfei at the door of the toilet. Nono must have observed and tested him (personal guess is that the original work did not write it after all, and Nono has the ability to profile). However, Lu Mingfei in the original work was completely unaware of it, so Nono gave up the idea of ​​taking action. What would you do if you found an abandoned puppy? Either buy some food to comfort him or make up your mind to take him away. And Nono chose to take Luming Fei with him. Many people may think that Nono is very green tea and a bitch because he keeps hanging on to Lu Mingfei. I don't deny that Nono did have a bit of a crush on Lu Mingfei but did not reject him firmly. Based on Nono's profile and IQ, he would not have realized that Lu Mingfei liked her, but maybe as described in the original work, there were too many people who liked Nono. Now it is impossible for Nono to reject them all. In Nono's understanding, it is natural to like her and there is no need to refuse the question. Lu Mingfei fell in love with Nono. Nono regarded him as a younger brother, a brother, and a friend, but he would not fall in love with him just because he pitied Lu Mingfei. What's more, the old Jiangnan thief kept Nuonuo in the dark in the previous films (Lu Mingfei, a bad guy, didn't dare to take the first step to pursue Nuonuo without telling the truth. He didn't even have this courage, how could Nuonuo like him? ), If you look at it from Nono's perspective in the previous movies, it's actually that Nono has been helping Lu Mingfei, the bad boy, and Caesar was chasing her and saving her. From Nono's perspective, Lu Mingfei is just an admirer of hers, a bad boy who doesn't have the courage to confess. (Sorry for any differences. It has been a long time since I reviewed the original work. There may be discrepancies.) Discuss rationally and do not argue.

I hope the author can still think about my suggestions. I am not slanderous or boastful, and I can express my own opinions. To be honest, the plot logic and character characterization in the following chapters are really not as good as the first ten chapters And how about going through fire and water for Old Tang? For rr because the little boy was rescued by the big sister and was rescued from the unchanging world, so he fell in love, yearning and worship (original work Don't Die), for Old Tang? What kind of companionship does a gay person get angry about (Narusa? Nazusa has been through life and death no matter what) Furthermore, there is no portrayal of supporting characters at all (the supporting characters just have names and then disappear) What the original party hates most is Lu Mingfei's wavering, not having the courage to face his own feelings (my Eri), which has caused many tragedies. What's the use of waiting for Lu Mingfei to grow up and the person is no longer there. You start with a mature Lu Mingfei. I just clicked in to watch it. Later in the plot, I didn't see Lu Mingfei being really cold-hearted and mature. The battle scenes are so ruined that I really can't stand it. If you want to write that you can kill with endurance in seconds, forget about it. I really don't care if you have fancy skills. To sum up, the first chapters are really interesting and well-written, but the later chapters are really unbearable. The plot logic, structure, characters, and arrangement are not very good. I really don't have the desire to continue reading until the latest chapter.

Come on, author! It's really great to see lovers finally get married and Eriki live happily. What's even more surprising is that there is a big boss who can seamlessly connect Sekiro and Dragon. As a fan of both wolves and dragons, I'm really excited to be a double chef! It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic that made me feel so comfortable, especially the part where it was stated that Hanbei had to be sent to become a Buddha, which really moved me. I just gave a reward of 30 yuan of starting coins, so I can give the author the first cup of milk tea in autumn. Seeing that it is coming to an end, I beg the author to give Kuro a happy ending, so that he can go to school normally like an ordinary child under the warm sunshine of modern society, and open a small snack shop and live a leisurely life after graduation. Mingfei often brings his wife and friends over to play. At this time, Jiulang always makes them a pot of wheat tea and puts out two plates of freshly made peony cakes. Everyone eats tea and chats together. Mingfei touches Jiulang's head while eating the peony cakes. The peony cakes still have the same taste. Jiulang also laughed. In order to help me realize my wish to never die, you didn't even have time to cook the rice, and even ate the rice grains raw. At that time, I was thinking that if everything is over and we are all alive, we must make you a lot of peony cakes for you to eat every day. I didn't expect that this wish came true. Ming Feixiao, don't just make peony cakes, cherry blossom cakes are also good, and there are also some from Xu Fuji of Daoxiang Village. Your sister-in-law and I both love sweets. Seeing the heated chat between Jiulang and Mingfei, Lu Mingze got jealous and came out to duel with Jiulang. Don't steal your brother from me. Jiulang quickly comforted Lu Mingze. Mingfei (Wolf) is my ninja. In my opinion, we are all a family. I will not steal my brother from you. Narusawa refused to comply and insisted on dueling with him. In the end, Mingfei, who almost broke out in laughter, stopped him and stuffed his mouth with peony cakes. Everyone was laughing and living like this day by day. The dragon clan, dragon blood, and dragon Yin would never appear in their world again. They would live happily as ordinary people in this beautiful modern society.

It can be seen that the author writes seriously and the writing is good. Compared with others, it is already very good. But because I haven't read Dragons, I read this novel after seeing it was related to Sekiro. Regarding the fragments of the original Dragon Clan in the article, I personally don't like it. It's a bit like the sentimental literature from more than ten years ago, and the protagonist's younger brother feels a bit gay when getting along with the protagonist. If you like Dragon Clan, you can read it. I prefer the more passionate ones, so I will withdraw them first👀 Finally, cheers for the author

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Please support it first. I like Dragon Clan fanfics, but I read one before and returned from blacksmithing. The early part is the best fanfic in my mind. I hope the author can surpass it.

A novel with no flaws, you can look forward to reading it

The Current Situation of the Dragon Clan: The fanfic is better than the original work It can be called a tauren in the novel world After reading the original work, I just felt very tired, and I wanted to read it but didn't dare to read it Sure enough, the fanfic is still comfortable. Currently, the only Dragon Clan fanfics that give me a good impression are this one and the C-level hybrid one. However, C-level updates are too slow. I hope the author of this one will work hard. I am satisfied with two updates a day, but I hope the writing will not collapse. PS: I will definitely support you after it is released.

I am also a writer, but I am not writing books at the starting point. Whether from the perspective of an online writer or a reader, this book you wrote is the best Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever read on any novel website! Not one of them! Although the pace is a little slow, the writing style is quite comfortable, and even some bland plots are still attractive to watch. Some suggestions from the perspective of a writer: 1. The market for online articles is huge, and the reader groups are also diverse, among which novice readers are the most numerous. It can be seen that I wrote this book out of some emotion or feeling in my heart. Some readers who are too novice are not your target group. Just delete some of their meaningless comments. 2. If you want to make more money, you should indeed write fast-paced short stories, but you will lose the loyal readers who have been screened out. Moreover, with your current writing style, the change may not be thankless. 3. If you want to work part-time, stabilize the current base of readers and study on the basis of adhering to the current writing style. It may not be a bad idea to wait until the quality of the book is stable and there are more loyal readers before trying to transform. Finally, I would like to say that I am far inferior to you in terms of talent and potential, but when I saw you saying that you only posted articles on forums before, I couldn't help but want to contribute a little experience as an online article writer in the hope that you would avoid making detours. After all, I really really like the Dragon Clan fanfic you wrote, and I very much hope that you can write higher-quality books in the future! This is the ardent expectation from Lao Bai's picky readers! Come on, come on, come on!

I almost died laughing

I suddenly had an idea "Lu Mingfei returned from Warhammer" Lu Mingfei's soul traveled through Warhammer 40K and was enslaved by Orks in a world occupied by orcs. After going through pain, he was finally rescued by the Weeper of the Holy Blood Group, but because the Weeper was single, he could not save all the human slaves. Witnessed countless human slaves being killed by orcs, and a Lamenter warrior named Gallo who died tragically in battle to save him. He narrowly escaped holding the warrior's last relic, a skull amulet symbolizing human purity. We also witnessed the weepers who fought to the death with the orcs and shed blood because they did not want to abandon the human slaves. We also witnessed the human slaves who did not want these noble warriors to be buried with them and collectively knelt down and begged them to take their children and evacuate the slaughterhouse quickly. After experiencing all this, the Weepers managed to escape from the planet. This series of events completely changed him. In painful regret, he began to ask for self-abuse to train himself. "You are all a bunch of big fools to save a waste like me from dying..." All the way to Mingfei In an accident, he was fatefully spotted by the leader of the Weeper Chapter, and he fought against reconsideration and secretly recruited Lu Mingfei in private The Space Marine who was transformed into a Lamenter was renamed Garro Katos, replacing the name and identity of the Lamenter warrior who died in the battle to save him, as well as his glory (because Lamenters cannot replenish their troop supply during the Atonement Crusade). "Why choose me... A loser like me" - Jialuo Katos (Lu) "Perhaps because of fate or because of your eyes, I saw the shadow of Jialuo in your eyes. I want to try to let you inherit his gene seeds and let our brothers return in another way." The Chapter Master of the Weepers, one thing he had never revealed to anyone, perhaps because of the Emperor's divine inspiration or the talent inherited from their Primarch, was that he saw part of this child's future. Although the future was unclear, there was one image that impressed him. He would become one of them, their blood brother. After undergoing rigorous training, he followed the Weeper on the Atonement Expedition. Due to the Weeper's cursed luck, he participated in countless brutal bloody battles and quickly grew up, becoming the best melee master in the war group. After serving for more than a hundred years, he has become an outstanding warrior who has experienced hundreds of battles. He has become a champion warrior who fought out of the mountains of corpses and seas of blood, and became the champion of the Weeper Chapter. Together with his brothers, he experienced the torture of blood thirst and black rage, but he never lost himself with his lofty faith and firm will. In order to ensure the evacuation of tens of billions of humans, the Lamenters and a Hive Fleet launched a brutal and desperate ground and space battle. In the end, in order to protect their brothers and human refugees, they left behind with a tactical team. They faced a high-level Hive Tyrant and its elite Hive Guards. In the brutal killing, they watched their brothers who had fought alongside them for hundreds of years fall one after another. In their rage, they actively embraced the Black Fury and repeated the experience over and over again in the psychic hallucinations of the Black Fury. Experiencing the scene of their genetic ancestor dying in battle, on his deathbed and before he was completely lost in the dark fury, he asked himself whether this life was worth it. Holding his most precious treasure, the skull amulet, he once again strengthened his faith in the memories of his brothers and comrades in the past, because all their comrades were proud of him, the youngest brother among them. "To protect the cherished things" As he was dying, accompanied by the war cry of the wailer, his eyes suddenly filled with a layer of golden spiritual light from small to large. In the chat, his brothers who had fought side by side with the Black Templars mentioned that there was such an otherworldly existence in the Black Templars, the "Emperor's Champion". With the blessing of golden spiritual energy, he returned to form the Emperor's Chosen, dragging his seriously injured and dying body, and died of exhaustion with all the enemies in front of him. When he fell, under his feet was an endless mountain of corpses piled up by Tyranid corpses, including a Hive Tyrant and even a Hive Titan who died at his hands. He completed his mission perfectly, holding the skull amulet soaked in Tyranid blood and reaching into the gloomy sky. Countless dark dots and huge shadows appeared in the sky, which were the boundless shadows of the Great Devourer. "Priest... Chief, battle... Leader, brothers... I have completed my... Mission..." After saying this, his superhuman body completely collapsed and could no longer be supported. The skull amulet in his hand fell in front of his eyes, and he closed his eyes weakly. As he lay dying, he began to chant the prayer taught to him by the Chapter Chaplain. At the last moment when consciousness completely disappeared, a soft golden light flashed past, and he seemed to see a golden figure staring at him... ... When Lu Mingfei thought he was completely dead, he opened his eyes again. But he found that he had returned to his former hometown, and at this time he was just in the third grade of junior high school......

This is what I summarized based on the original Dragon Clan novel, Dragon Clan fan fiction (I had no choice but to slay dragons because I had no money to go to college), and Baidu Encyclopedia. The empty parts are the words and spirits that have not appeared at all, so the author can play freely. Some parts can be freely borrowed and modified. Some of them can clearly see the evolution of upper and lower classes, some are second evolution, and some are third evolution. A few of them were named after me reading the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Finally, I wish you to write better and better, and realize your dream of the Dragon Clan~

I've read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics, and this one is really good. I hope I'm not an eunuch, it'll definitely be popular.

Also, I don't think there's a need to be in such a hurry to end it. Hey, I also want to see the beautiful life of Lu Mingfei and Hui Liyi in school. I feel like there is a lot to write about. There is no need to rush to finish all the Dragon Kings. I think most of the most impressive things about the dragon clan are not that they are always slaying dragons.

Everyone, please don't quarrel. If you have any suggestions, you can post them below this post. I will read them. Any posts you see arguing outside will be deleted. Also, please don't make excessive remarks. If you see them, they will be deleted. Thank you. It is everyone's responsibility to purify the harmonious book review area.

I have never played Sekiro, but what I didn't expect was that the author's writing style could be so good that it gave me a feeling as if I had been in that world for a long time and returned to reality. The entire order has been handed in, and the rewards have been given. The author doesn't need to worry about the words of those anti-fans, and just follow his own ideas and keep going!

It's a pity that I came here for the Dragon Clan and Sekiro, but I ended up seeing Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi. There are so many things in Sekiro, and I just wrote about the sword-shaking technique, and there is basically no space for anything else.

Do you have any recommendations for Dark Dragon Clan novels? It's about being decisive and decisive in killing people. I've read a lot of them and I'm very impressed. Even my uncle and aunt didn't dare to kill him, especially the Ying family.

Those who want to see Lu Mingfei grow can go. Other than the fact that there is a wolf in the background, Lu Mingfei is no different from the one in the original work. The introduction says that Lu Mingfei has experienced so much, but in fact, in this book, Lu Mingfei is still the same as an unlucky fart who had his toes stepped on. He smiles playfully with women and scratches his head when encountering things. It is completely impossible to tell that he has experienced the baptism of the wolf world.

If the author had started the book half a year later, he would have looked like Lu Mingfei who had returned from the old ring.

From the first time Lu Mingfei was "bought" for $100,000, I knew that this book would collapse badly. How to write that plot, come on, author, let me teach you, first counterpress Nono and put a knife on her neck. Nono said 100,000, you bargain for 500,000 or 1 million, and then when you get the money, find a corner and kill her. Understand, this may not be the optimal solution, but it is definitely much better than your thing.

This article is reprinted from Tieba brother Mo Hua and Zhihu author: @Just the heart is cold, invaded and deleted. First of all, make sure that in the dragon world view, all myths are dragon history. So, what is the most influential myth in the world? "Bible". At the same time, based on Jiangnan's study abroad experience, we can also be sure that he has been exposed to, or has a certain understanding of, Christianity. Looking back then In the Bible, God is a trinity, namely the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit, and the same is true in "Dragon". They are Nidhogg, Lu Mingze, and Lu Mingfei. Nidhogg controls the past, and Lu Mingze controls the present and the future, because he said that he can change anything that has not happened, and Lu Mingfei should correspond to the "Holy Spirit" , the Holy Spirit is the least noticeable of the three gods but has always existed. He is the "Paraclete" of mankind, guiding mankind to distinguish between good and evil in the heart (this is probably the origin of Mingfei's name, "Ming" represents good and "Fei" represents evil). The Holy Spirit is also the only God who can give life and regenerate people (the reason why Mingfei can use "Don't die"). PS: The boss (Narusawa) in Dragon Clan 5 is about to die. The original text is as follows: The boss gently touched Shutoku Mai's face, "I'm not injured, but I'm going to die." Shutoku Mai looked at him blankly, and Su Enxi also stood up in surprise. "There is really nothing that will not die in this world. It has been very hard for me to survive until now." The boss smiled gently, "Before I die, I must send Lu Mingfei to that throne. My dear girls, hurry up, and hurry up." So, here, we have reason to believe that Dragons is a novel set with the structure of Nordic mythology as the skin and biblical stories as the bones. In the Bible, on the 40th day after resurrection, Jesus (the Son) ascended to heaven in public (Lu Mingze died), and the Holy Spirit descended on Pentecost (Lu Mingfei stepped on the throne). In the Bible: God created angels before he created man. Among them, an angel named Satan won the favor of God. God gave him glory and status higher than other angels, and even gave him the authority to rule the angels. As a result, Satan grew bigger and bigger, and wanted to be on an equal footing with his creator God. In "Dragon Clan": The White King launched the largest rebellion in the history of the Dragon Clan, and one-third of the Dragon Clan became rebels. In the end, the Black King used his supreme power to destroy the White King, nailed her to the sky-high copper pillar and threw her into the depths of the roaring ice sea. In the Bible: There are four archangels standing in front of the throne of God, Uriel, Raphael, Gabriel and Michael. They represent earth, wind, water and fire respectively. In "Dragon Clan": There are four kings, who control the four elements. In the Bible: The first era is the Age of Law (Old Testament). God personally formulated a code for mankind and punished mankind with great power. God calls himself a shepherd and shepherds his people as lambs. Anyone who violates the code and despises God's will will be killed by God with lightning, fire from heaven, and plague. Human beings fear and obey God's majesty and wrath. In "Dragon Clan": There was a peaceful and glorious era in the history of the Dragon Clan. At that time, the Black King became the leader of the dragons as the ancestor, and the White King assisted it as a priest. In this era of co-rule by the two kings, even the violent dragons did not dare to easily provoke a war. The majesty radiated from the black and white throne in the north of the earth, and the Dragon Clan nobles crawled under the high pressure of power. The Black King regards himself as a god and humans as herds. The counterpart of God among the dragons is the Black King Nidhogg, and the Age of Law corresponds to the era when the Black King Nidhogg ruled. The birth of Jesus Christ symbolizes the end of the Old Covenant (the Age of Law) and the beginning of the New Covenant. From then on, God's authority has hardly been demonstrated in the world. The prophets found the newly born Jesus according to the guidance of the stars in the sky, and called him the "King of Kings" and "Lord of Lords", which meant that he would inevitably become the monarch of mankind in the future. When Jesus grew up, he began to preach to all directions and use his own ability to help the people. The emperor at that time heard the words of the prophets and believed that Jesus threatened his dominance. The priests and elders believed that there is only one God and that Jesus had blasphemed the majesty of God, so they put Xu He was falsely accused of many crimes, incited the people, arrested Jesus, and made him parade through the streets carrying a cross. Along the way, the people who were incited by the authorities spit on him, slapped him, threw garbage, and other humiliations. In the end, he was sentenced to the cruelest punishment - nailing Jesus to the cross with iron nails. After Jesus' death, a soldier who came to collect the body pierced Jesus' chest with a spear. The spear stained with Jesus' blood was later called the "holy spear Longinus." From beginning to end, only one of Jesus' disciples, Peter, always defended him, and Peter also received the salvation of his soul promised by Jesus. In fact, regardless of the New Testament or the Old Testament, the main actions of God are among the Jews, and the Jews are favored by God. In "Dragon": There is a scene in which he walked into the ruined church and walked along the long aisle into the deepest darkness of the church. There he saw a white cross, where the golden holy spear pierced Lu Mingze. The little devil was covered in bruises, and the lower half of the cross was stained red with blood. His black clothes were torn, and the mark of humiliation was carved on his body. Jesus corresponds to Narusawa, and the emperor at that time should correspond to the Black King Nidhogg. He was the main cause of Narusawa's death. This should be the reason why Narusawa said: "I am the person who wants to kill Nidhogg the most in the world." The priests and elders correspond to the four kings. This is why Narusawa said, "When I return to the world, all rebels should die." The disciple Peter corresponds to Narusawa's pet black snake. The black snake did not betray Naruse, so Naruse later rescued him from the deep sea. Narusawa was supposed to succeed Nidhogg as the new Black King, but he was framed by Nidhogg and the four kings and died of humiliation. The Dead Maid, Norton, and Jormungandr in the prequels all repeatedly called the Dragon Clan "the Abandoned Clan" because they killed Narusawa and their own king during the time when Narusawa was supposed to be ruling. As a result, the Dragon Clan's civilization was cut off. The Dragon Clan's country was invaded by humans, and the remaining dragons were also hunted and killed by humans. The Dragon Clan became an "Abandoned Clan". "When did the history of the Dragon Clan end? Why did the Dragon Clan's civilization decline so quickly after the death of the Black King?" This was the question Chu Zihang asked after landing on the stone island, and it is explained here. In fact, when Ryuichi Shutoku Mai and others first appeared, Caesar asked them what their purpose was. There, Narusawa's true wish was mentioned for the first and only time - "A new era," Mai said softly, and a mist-like haze suddenly flowed in her beautiful eyes, but behind the mist was a shocking magnificence. "Looking at the yearning for that era flowing in a pair of beautiful eyes, one can't help but look forward to it." Caesar lowered his head. Finally, let's boldly speculate that the possible final ending of the Dragon Clan (or perhaps the originally planned ending) is similar to the final Revelation in the Bible.

Everyone has a dragon in their heart, everyone is Lu Mingfei, but everyone's heart is different. What would you do if you replaced Lu Mingfei? What would you change about the plot that you feel most regretful about? Welcome to leave your own dreams

When I was young I'd listen to the radio Waiting for my favorite songs When they played I'd sing along It made me smile Those were such happy times And not so long ago How I wondered where they'd gone How I wonder where they went But they're back againBut they're back again Just like a long-lost friendLike a long-lost friend All the songs I love so well shing-a-ling-a-ling shing-a-ling-a-ling That they're starting to singSo fine when they get to the part Where he's breaking her heart It can really make me cry Just like before It's yesterday once moreShoobie do lang lang) (Shoobie do lang lang) Looking back on how it was in years gone by And the good times that I had Makes today seem rather sad So much has changed It was songs of love that I'd sing to then And I memorize each wordEvery word I remember Those old melodiesThose old melodies Still sound so good to meAs they melt the years awayEvery Sha-la-la-laSha-la-la-la Every Wo-o-wo-oWo-o-wo-o Still shines Every shing-a-ling-a-ling shing-a-ling-a-ling That they're starting to sing So fine So fine All my best memories Come back clearly to me Some can even make me cry Just like before It's yesterday once more Shoobie do lang lang Every Sha-la-la-la Sha-la-la-la Every Wo-o-wo-oWo-o-wo-o Still shines Every shing-a-ling-a-ling shing-a-ling-a-ling That they're starting to singSo fine Every Sha-la-la-laSha-la-la-la Every Wo-o-wo-o every sound Wo-o-wo-o

The opening chapter is quite amazing, the plug-in setting is good, and the character of Ming Fei is also well positioned. The feeling of being indifferent to the scenery and being unfazed is quite good. But after Cassel appeared on the scene, the character portrayal in all aspects was indeed a bit different. One is that although Nono is indeed a little green tea, it does not conflict with her sense of loyalty (Long Si can be said to have wandered around the world with Ming Fei), and as a player who is proficient in profiling and has no words, Nono is generally a think tank character, and the writing is a bit irritable and brainless. And Susie, an ice beauty is written like she is about to pee with fear, which is really unnecessary. Then the Free Day Ming Fei instantly crushed everyone, which was a bit over the top. I personally feel that the upper limit of the Wolf's system is not higher than that of the Dragon Clan. What's more, after all, Ming Fei has just returned, and her physical fitness is just that, so she is not that strong. The above are all minor problems. The main reason is that after entering Kassel, the concubine who put down the knife was described as a weak child. She emphasized "chicken coop head", "confused" and "like a child with a runny nose" many times. Isn't this too conflicting with the description at the beginning? ? Didn't the author assume that Concubine Ming had gone through those years? She didn't suddenly gain those memories, and her original personality should have completely disappeared. I saw in other posts that the author replied that someone wanted to mess with Ming Fei, but this has nothing to do with him becoming stupid. Shouldn't he be able to quickly detect something wrong and then fight back? The above, I hope it is another excellent dragon novel

Version update This update is as follows: Word spirit changes: 95. Polar Region - Mirror Pupil (as in the original work) 108. Sea of ​​Clouds - Yunmengze: A series of the King of Sky and Wind, the user can cast the kingdom of God on the ground in an instant, and after it is fully released, it can cover a city with clouds and mist that will never dissipate. After the domain is deployed, the effect will last forever, and wind, rain, thunder and lightning will be generated by itself. After being released, the user himself will become the center of the domain and cannot leave. But domains can slowly expand over time. 52. Power of the Mountain - Qianjun: Word Spirit • Onishatsu's upper-level Word Spirit, the owner can strengthen his own vitality, forcefully release some restrictions on the body, and ignore pain to a certain extent. Will fall into a weakened state after release, but has no side effects. The powerful vitality bonus is proof that it is a superior ghost. 87. Seal - Yunzhongjun: Word Spirit • Storm Horn's superior word spirit. Its powers are to control buoyancy, create strong winds (can form storms under certain circumstances), control clouds (control but cannot create clouds and mist) New word spirits: 7. Whale Song : It can emit sound waves by itself (depending on the concentration of the bloodline, the higher the bloodline, the stronger the sound waves it emits can be freely controlled) 9. Painting the ground as a prison: the upper-level word spirit of the Fudo Order, by interfering with the surrounding natural field, has the effect of forcibly controlling the opponent 15. Tengu: the lower-level word spirit of the burning sun, can be in a Instantly deprives all light within the realm of the word spirit (depending on the concentration of the bloodline, the higher the bloodline, it can even distort the sense of light and artificially create a mirage) 22. Synchronicity: Word Spirit • The lower word spirit of the Crested Bailing can achieve symbiosis with other life forms, and can transfer its own fatal damage to the symbiosis in a crisis situation 39. Vision of Medusa: A series of speaking spirits from the King of Earth, with spiritual attributes, forcing opponents to freeze, and the effect on high bloodline gradually decreases until it is non-existent 54. Seventh Sense: Strengthens the six senses, strengthens intuition, ignores bloodline suppression to a certain extent, strengthens one's own spiritual attributes, blurs some bloodline restrictions, and exceeds limit induction. The strength of the speaking spirit varies depending on the bloodline level. 58. Financial Fire: The exclusive word spirit of the Bronze King series, strengthens metal manipulation, strengthens flame control, and is a cheating tool for alchemy 66. Destiny: Word Spirit • The upper-level word spirit of the seventh sense, interferes with destiny (because this version is too powerful, the strategy It is planned to install a CD on the word spirit, depending on the intensity of the user's interference with the destiny. The stronger the interference, the longer the CD. It may even be used once in a lifetime, and if the word spirit is forcibly released again during the CD, it will be reversed, and fate will backfire, and life will be worse than death.) (PS: Because we are afraid that cutting too hard will cause dissatisfaction among some mixed-race species, we decided to use the bloodline level as the threshold. If the bloodline of the affected life after release is lower than itself, there will be no effect and no CD. If it is higher than the own, the CD will be very long or even a fate backlash warning. If If the blood is similar to your own, there is a CD, and the CD is always limited to the interference intensity) 58. Thousand-forged Divine Machine: Word Spirit • The upper-level Word Spirit of Financial Fire, exclusive to the King of Bronze, can also be regarded as the ultimate embodiment of alchemy, and can naturally kill all metals. It has strengthened the control of metal, but compared to financial fire, it has slightly weakened the intensity range of the flame, but strengthened the control of flame temperature The above is the entire content of this version update. The new version strengthens some speech spirits and weakens some speech spirits. Please understand carefully

When I first started watching it, Free Day was a mess, and the patching was not very good, but the rest of it was very comfortable to watch, much better than most other Dragon Clan fandoms, but this part of Free Day really made me feel uncomfortable watching it, Jun Yito.

I gave you the monthly pass. I have never seen such a good dragon novel. I have also written novels, but I am a street writer. Seeing that you insist on writing this book, I am quite touched. I have written many books one after another. It's 600,000 words, and the reading volume is pitiful. When I left, I also said that I hope you can finish this book, and I will give you all the monthly tickets in the future.

But I think the Dragon Clan is not good-looking, and fanficing about the Dragon Clan actually lowers the overall impression. After Sekiro, any other world is more interesting than this world. When I saw that the school said that the ultimate goal is to slay dragons, I felt stupid. It was as stupid as if it was a great move. It was just like seeing some fantasy novels that defy the sky for no reason.