Legend of Mir: Achievement Point System

Also, the title of your book attracts people who like to read cool stories, but you ended up writing a legend in a hurry.

Isn't it a bit too off topic? I didn't see much about strengthening myself. All I saw were games. I just saw money in more than 70 pictures. I think you should just change your name to "Legendary Road to Wealth"

Old ghost, I don't know if you noticed it or not. I think most readers have noticed it too. You obviously write about realistic themes much better than you write about ancient times and apocalypse. The plot is compact, the plot is tight, the plot is buried, the baggage is shaken, and the plot is smoother. If you haven't written about ancient times or the end of the world, these things will tie you down. From now on, just focus on this track and don't change it. This book hopes that you will combine what you did not write in the first book with your experience in writing these books and write out everything you want to write. Also, I found that you wrote very well in the early stages of each book, but the middle and later stages are not as detailed as in the early stage. Many things are just mentioned in one stroke. In fact, I personally feel that the content of legends still needs to be developed. It should not be limited to the current common model. Don't be constrained by the model of mage legends and have divergent ideas. Thinking, the psychological game of all parties in the mid-term siege, personnel scheduling, traps, open cards and hidden cards, wooing, dividing, alienating, and bribery. Every siege war should have surprises. Also, refer to the story of how Xiao Xiami managed to hold on for 6 years. There are many things that can be learned from it. Even if you don't have to write it in such detail, like business war writing, espionage war writing, or officialdom writing, you still have to explain something. At that time, there were many cool operations such as buying people to hack servers, and they should all be shown. We should not limit ourselves to the same old prayer routines. Some things from the first book are well set up and can be retained. Also, since it is a realistic subject, it is unavoidable to have content outside the game, so write what you need to write. Reality is not a game, and daily life must be interspersed, because you are writing a novel from the perspective of the protagonist. To put it into perspective, it is unrealistic to not have things outside the game. Don't let other people's ideas influence the original intention of your writing. It's a good reference, but I haven't seen the bad one. That's all I want to say. There are not many people born in the 1980s who have played Legend of the Official Server and can still read the novel. These people may not have the time and energy to read the novel in a few years. Please take a look and cherish it.

Games are fine, schools are fine too, but what do you want to do with so many chapters about fighting and fighting? Promote Young and Dangerous?

I believe that most people read this book because of the "legend" rather than anything else... I hope the author will keep his original intention and not be swayed by other people's opinions and put the cart before the horse. I hope he will continue to work hard and reach a higher level.

I just read Chapter 30, oh my god! A whole 30 chapters! Only 6 chapters are about reality, and the remaining 24 chapters are all about going to an Internet cafe with friends to play legends. I can't stand it anymore! I came to see the protagonist act cool in real life, not to watch you stay up all night at the Internet cafe! You don't need to tell me in such detail! Bye!

I have to write a Dota novel😁

I thought Liu Nong was here, the sniper who doesn't take any chances.

The first part of this book is okay, but the second part is full of games and too little reality. If there were half and half, more people would read it.

Overall excellent product. Some plots are unnecessary in reality. Who cares if you sing, dance or play football? The public chapter does not matter, the VIP chapter should reduce this part. We have our own choices when it comes to urban romance, you don't have to read romance novels. Talking back to the game, it is rare for the author to design a cheat that takes into account reality. The game is equivalent to a relatively abnormal experience explosion rate. On the whole, the author has paid attention to both fun and balance. The last sentence is the same. In the VIP chapter, write less about playing football, singing and falling in love. If you want to make a transition, compress the content and write it down in one go. Don't write in long length. I'm not happy to see you write a chapter about bidding and raising prices You write half a chapter about reality and show off. The author please continue to work hard. After all, there are not many high-quality legendary articles left.