Returning Again and Again from the Cosmic Locust Plague

Breeding at its peak period·Global locust plague: When you think about 1+1 and get the result of 2, bugs will come out of your brain. The screws produced in the production workshop will be bugs, even the data added in the computer will be bugs, etc.

First of all, you are the first person I have seen who writes Star Iron and can write "traces". Most Star Iron fans have basically given up on these unique settings, which is good. Although the trajectories and star souls are game-based designs, they also closely fit the plot design. It is really good to be able to restore them. Especially the term "fertility", I don't know whether the author intentionally used it or picked it up casually. If it was intentional, then it really fits Star Iron, because the physical strength we usually use to make various materials and instruments is "pioneering power". But you were too hasty and casual in choosing the name of your journey, right? I thought I would use an allusion, or call it something like a parasitic spore, but I didn't expect to just call it blood-sucking. I think it would be better to extract a more "breeding" name from the simulated universe blessing. In addition, I think we can also design a set of deeds similar to the general attack record talent ending notes in the game to make the output method more clear. In addition, regarding the Star Soul, this thing is a collapse of possibilities in the design and can also be used as a source of ability. I also read your last book, but I only read most of it, and I didn't read much after I got to Big Infrastructure. The protagonist can design a weapon for himself, or get a weapon, and the Destiny Walkers also have a special space for weapons. The protagonist can use his basic attack to summon a small insect from space to fly towards the enemy. His combat skill is to use weapons to attack and then the insects to attack in succession (Insect Emperor Different Dimension 🙂 is actually an insect swarm attack). Weapons can be designed more freely, such as an insect-shaped floating cannon, and his ultimate move can be to summon a "giant silverfish" to counter waves. The last thing is about ability. The ability to reproduce can be reflected in all aspects. As I typed, I thought of a "no lower limit", which is Gojo Satoru's. The principle is "when the enemy attacks close, use the reproductive power to 'breed' more space between the attack and the body, making the opponent unable to attack. The protagonist types the word "worm" on the computer, and the typed word becomes a "memetic insect swarm", which controls the expansion of memetic insects on the Internet.

Your book... Sam Armor, an advanced warfare weapon of an interstellar civilization with a range of tens of thousands of light years, is written to be as expressive as a real-life exoskeleton armor. I can't say anything. If you really can't write it, just go to the factory and screw it in as soon as possible.

From the current point of view, the previous part The Star Iron part is very good, it is this 👍 The reality part is this 👎 It is so low-key, even the protagonist is low-key, I would rather you use the part where the protagonist is embarrassing others, and others are embarrassing him.

Since you choose to intersperse, reality must be pretentious. Without pretense, improvement is useless. You can pretend when the iron collapses, but you will be submissive when it comes to reality. In this way, how to become a great god? What about dreams? Nowadays, a major core of online articles is pretentiousness. Readers cannot pretend to be pretentious in reality, and they cannot substitute pretentiousness when reading novels. Didn't I read this novel in vain?

It's really better to cut it back and write about Genshin Impact. At least Genshin Impact won't have a situation where the protagonist develops for a long time and is no longer as good as mass-produced weapons. How much is Bengtie's Star Destroyer worth? The limited edition Star Destroyer that Esta bought for 200 million is already a premium of 10 or 20 times. I can't hold back when I think that the protagonist who has been developed for so long is not as powerful as the toy Esta bought with her one-day pocket money.

How to put it this way, I always feel that there is a kind of routine, especially in combat. It is obvious that you can appear in seconds, but you have to describe someone else's first chapter, then pinch them, then draw an A, and then open a big one. Well, this is the routine.

The description of the real world is a bit cliched, and even feels a bit uncomfortable to watch. It is not as good as Iron Breaking World.

I think when writing fan fiction, try not to write about the real world.

1. The Superpower Management Bureau is really rubbish. It only has a red mist elemental superpower. It gives me the feeling that the official can't do anything about it. I meet him on the road, chat with him for a while, and then leave. Knowing that he was going to cause trouble, the place and time of the trouble were almost determined, the protagonist notified the specific location, carried out a sneak attack to grab the core, and then chatted for a while with others leaving again. Then transport the core and it can still be robbed. This is just an elemental fog ability, I can't stand it anymore. Later in the plot, it is estimated that it was the protagonist who was detected, leading to the core being robbed, and then looking for the protagonist, and then being killed 2. I really don't understand the setting of going to school. Others awaken their powers and go to school because they are afraid of being exposed or being sliced. You have registered it with the official. What is the purpose of going to school? Can what you learn in school be used in this world of great changes? Or should you go up and tell him about the periodic table of elements after the alien god comes? It also slows down my own development time. If you go to a school arranged by the Superpower Management Bureau, study, and communicate with other people with special abilities, that's no problem. If I go to an ordinary school, I'll probably write a story about pretending to slap people in the face.