Begin Enlightenment and Become an Immortal from Mount Zhongnan

As time goes by, I will carry the cross of life and walk at the next crossroads of life. When I meet you again, I will hold you in my arms, love you to the core, and protect you. No matter whether you guess this person is me or not, I will tell you that I am just your biological child. I am a passer-by in life, but I will give you all the most beautiful things in my life, because the first love is a surprise and a long time, and it is also stunned. When you are in front of me, you are everything. When you are not in front of me, the sky is blue, the sea is vast, the stars in the world, everything is you...

Since it is to observe nature to understand the technique. Have you watched nothing but clouds for a year? And how could the Han Dynasty be a secular dynasty, cultivating luck?

The content does not match the introduction

It was inexplicable and the plot twist was very confusing. It is recommended to sort out the introduction and plot, and the big map Kawen will upgrade the small map.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style and foreshadowing are poor. The events are too blunt. Take the appearance of your wolf as an example. There is no foreshadowing and it goes against the habits of living things. It is not recommended to use any dialect.

If I write poorly, I will admit my mistakes and get beaten, and I will never run away. So I learned from the experience and made major changes, from beginning to end, with a new plot and a new setting. However, due to my limited abilities, the changes I have made so far are already to my maximum ability as a newcomer. If there are any shortcomings, I hope you will forgive me. Of course, I will listen carefully to your suggestions and make modifications. This post will never be deleted as a warning