Frieren: A Shadow Warrior Also Wants a Peaceful Life

... It's a huge taboo to write Frilian as the main female character in fanfiction... Take my advice, change her to a supporting female character...

Author, take my advice: if you write a book for shippers, you're doomed.

Here's a sketch, which I drew myself.

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Could this pure love story be about Xiao Chu Nan?

Everyone, please read on! (இдஇ; ) If I don't keep reading... The book is going to flop. ಥ_ಥ

Although Simmel is great, I seem to be allergic to romance 🙂. It's good that they broke up the pairings, it's a pity it didn't start from the 1000s. Personally, I feel that Simmel shouldn't have expressed "I love you" to Frilian from beginning to end, including giving her a ring at sunset, it was all unnecessary and only added to the sadness. Maintaining a friendship was fine.

Overall, it can still be used as food supplies. So far, there have been no out-of-character (OOC) characters. It's clear that they're trying their best to maintain the original plot. There was no deliberate attempt to drastically modify the design to attract attention. Your writing skills are good, but there's room for improvement.

I've invested, but I've used up all my votes. I'll vote for you again next time. Well written, keep it up!

To be fair, there are still some discrepancies in the timings in a few places. Although the problem isn't that big.