Don't Panic, Peasants! The Great Lord Is Here!

Actually, you wrote the early part of Earth Players really well, it was at its peak. There was no need to change the script and character settings. It's just that the transition to interstellar travel in the later part was a bit of a mess, the leap was too big. Just write the foreshadowing about the Japanese Prime Minister properly, and keep the pacing steady with the various main characters.

This is not a sequel; it's a new book based on a new idea. A high-ranking monk predicted a high opening followed by a sharp decline and a mindless reversal, only to be relentlessly criticized by the formula until the story was abandoned.

I really enjoyed reading the book "Earth Players," mainly because it's about players who, in a daze, arrive in reality and then show off and get humiliated. Especially the part about the rich second-generation heir being bullied by the son of an official, leading his family to rise to prominence, and challenging the second-generation immortal to a duel.

Actually, I think you could just copy "Earth Players" back to the original. Let's call it "Blue Star Players." Refine the details and plot. Since you've basically written about all the main characters instead of a single protagonist, the plot and pacing can be slower; don't rush it. Refine each character's story.

I only found out today that this is the sequel to Earth, but some people say it isn't. Author, stop this! Why can't you continue writing from the college competition?

The Goblin King laughed loudly: "My first laugh was at Xi Ye's utter incompetence, the protagonist ran away and a new commander was hastily appointed; my second laugh was at the AI's incompetence, the unstable foundation and poorly concealed main base were completely exposed; my third laugh was at Pu Yunchuan's incompetence in failing to plug the loopholes in time. Now, with my strong army of 300,000 against a thousand, I will take over the base and capture Little Cabbage alive!"

I suggest rewriting it. The Demon King has been resurrected four or five times already, while you've only resurrected him once. Ensemble characters are difficult to write and the story is slow-paced. It's better to revise it, increase the protagonist's importance, and decrease the presence of his best friend. Don't include the CCP in the Earth setting; it's too sensitive.

Is this a reboot of Earth Players? No way! Where's my Xiye? He died at the very beginning? I still quite like Xiye. Wasn't Wang Gou Dan supposed to be Wang Xiaojia? Wasn't Li Gou Dan supposed to be Li Jiayi? Oh my god, I felt that Earth Players was pretty good, it's just that some plot points were left unfinished.

To be honest, I didn't enjoy these chapters very much. At least a dozen names appeared in these three chapters: five players' names and IDs, plus some scattered supporting characters. It was impossible to tell who was who. And Xi Ye's departure was way too early.

So you cut it? Actually, I think it's pretty good.