The Age of Feudal Lords

I read Lonely. Originally, I thought it was a story about Farming for Hegemony. It was just a tune-up with a little bit of filial piety and a brainless villain. But now it turns out that Farming for Hegemony is the tune-up.

Liu Yan is a failure I have always felt that this person is of little use. He has never had any great achievements in the past, and his character development is not good. Why give her Ma Chao? If you can't stand it, okay, just run away. Female Ma Chao just laughed

Author, have you really not reflected on yourself? Only by reflecting on yourself can you make progress, and listen to some good opinions so that you can write better and better. Now I don't know what I have written. Let's expand the article. We just want to see the slow development, slow expansion, and slow struggle for hegemony. What kind of arms do you write about all day long, cities, cynical parents, villains, no priority, plot advancement is slow, big grind, and no competition for territory. I know you want to write a larger world view, but can you grasp it? Your level is not even up to par. Your writing is so messed up that it makes my head ache.

This introduction. . . Have you forgotten whose territory the starting point is?🤐

This book is a bit retro, full of frustration and no excitement, but the writing is good. Playing the protagonist like this in the early stage

I saved 8 chapters and finished them in two minutes, which is not interesting. If this was a story about personal strength, writing this way wouldn't be a big problem, but this is a story about a lord. As a lord, you don't develop your territory, but instead take risks, and you have to take risks for the missions of the ancient fragments. What's more, the golden card soldiers and spirits are all auxiliary, which is too contradictory. If you rely on personal strength to lead the force to take off, and have a strong general with a gold card as the main force, it won't be so uncomfortable to watch. The author has some writing skills, but he has too many ideas and writes everything he thinks about. In this way, he cannot write anything well. He has to know what to choose. This book has been written to waste. If this side plot is left to be written later, it can still be read. For example, conquering the entire island only to discover the secret. Now I am writing it too hastily and it has gone too far. Get ready to write the next one, and that's it for this one!

No, brother, you are a bit poisonous when it comes to writing books. Pioneers, do you know what the word pioneer means? Let's go and see how the white people colonized the Indians. Do you have any ideas? Like to dance? Yu Wenhu ordered his subordinates to die and none of his players dared to say anything. How could there be such a big gap between human beings? .

This book has been abandoned. To be honest, it is a magical book at the beginning. It makes people uncomfortable later.

Abandoned, good subject matter is useless, priority is not prioritized, and the result of the struggle for hegemony is written as urban nonsense. There are obviously a lot of contents that are not written but must be written to be bloody. It has been disgusting to watch a villain like Wu Hui come in and out of the plot for five years. When the author has accumulated it, it is not just random selection, why bother to investigate? My sister is also a bit of a loser. If you can't pass it off with one stroke, you have to get to the bottom of it. We are looking at the struggle for hegemony, not the city. What we want to see is the development of the island and its power, not your intrigues. There is no improvement from the previous book.

In ancient times, the first person in the military general system directly participated in the imperial examination, which was the foundation of the ancient civil service bureaucracy. (The order given by Liu Yan herself was carried out by her soldiers. Directly bypassing the civil servants responsible for the imperial examination.) This is not a matter of fairness at all, but a very serious political incident. I have said this, but I still don't understand it. It only shows that you have no political talent.