A Certain Hogwarts Forbidden Magic Legend

Those who support the heroine being Hermione are here to report.

Reading a fanfic and all I can think about is whether or not there is a female protagonist, and posting a post trying to teach the author how to write a book is quite boring.

If there is a female protagonist, I hope to develop feelings and confirm the relationship early. . Don't be like the one who only had a female protagonist at the end of the original novel.

Don't write emotional lines! ! No heroine! ! 😅

The last book used the lack of a heroine as a gimmick, but the ending suddenly ended with Hermione being together, which disgusted a lot of people. Whether there is a heroine or not, make it clear at the beginning and don't change your mind midway

Character: The protagonist's character is very strange... Completely unlikable Story: Maybe it's the elegance and calmness of Professor Magic that makes this book a little uncomfortable to read from scratch? The overall narrative rhythm is also a bit strange, and there is no sense of substitution. I once read what an editor said, which may be helpful to the author. "Don't use the narrative state at the end of the previous book to write the beginning of the new book." I hope the author can make more efforts in the later period, and I can also revise the previous ones when I have time... It's a bit incomprehensible.

As always, the common problem of HP is that the Virgin is still a nanny, and the protagonist group is a follower. HP fan fiction does not nanny for the protagonist group and does not lick Hermione. I guess the author will explode on the spot. How about changing the name? It's called "The Days I Worked as a Dog Nanny in HP"

You wrote Professor Magic. It's understandable that you want to make a different breakthrough, but can you read the first twenty chapters of this book by yourself? It's better to write another book without changing the medicine. How many writers failed at this step before becoming gods? Look at the eagle catching the chicken, and the blood-red people. You can become a god along the way. No matter how you show off your skills, you can travel hundreds of roads to play. You have all turned to writing online. Change your shell and refine your writing. You have a seat as a great god. There are several writers on the monthly list who show off their skills. There are no great gods in fan fiction. You are the only one who has hope. Don't waste your talent. Ahhhh~

The three-year agreement has come and the Dragon King has returned to his throne!

I feel like the writing style of this book is much different from the previous one. Is this still the same author? Or is it that it's been too long since I've written?

This book is no longer on the shelves, why are you still arguing here? . The writing style has not deteriorated compared to the previous book. It has new content expansion and new angles. Isn't this great? Or are there any HP fanfics currently being written that are better than this one? Everyone can recommend each other and taste it. Every novel has flaws, so if you can't accept it, delete it from the bookshelf. What's more, this book doesn't focus on companionship, and it also needs bicycles. .

Hermione is the heroine - the standard answer, don't write it too badly and people will look for the heroine Other relatively normal heroines (female classmates such as Ginny, Qiu, Luna, the one with Veela blood, etc.) - Are not as popular as Hermione, and more rely on the specific plot to attract people to watch, and the writing is good or not bad Other less common heroines (Professor McGonagall, Ulrich, etc.) - The quirks of a few people, not It is the favorite of most people. Unless there are other very attractive features, people will not be interested in clicking in. No heroine - most people don't like it. The reason is very simple: in the original work, the characters are paired up in the end. When the protagonist is single, it feels like "left by everyone and no one wants." (No matter how awesome the protagonist you write is, how committed to magic and does not need love, it will give people this feeling). Although Ma Hongjun in Douluo Dalu is considered a funny character and does not have a female counterpart of the same level, he still has a wife other than the Seven Monsters. The main character of your hp fanfic has no wife, which makes people feel more clownish than Ma Hongjun. And many people won't watch it if there is no female protagonist.

Not much reason, just tired of watching it. There are many reasons why I like Hermione, including the movie version's good looks, seriousness, kindness and perseverance, etc. The only thing I hate about Hermione is that she has a strong personality and low emotional intelligence. In summary, Hermione has flaws and flaws, she has a few minor flaws but is overall great. However, I have written too much, and I am tired of aesthetics. A good woman does not mean that I should write a heroine, just like you don't have to go to bed to appreciate a person. Hermione's appearance in the movie version was stunning at first, but she got tired of it. Following the protagonist group is very popular. Nowadays, many people don't want to take Harry Potter, the destined child, for being scolded as a nanny, let alone Hermione. The protagonist Harry Potter can be said to have very few faults and almost no black spots, but some people are tired of watching it and don't want to follow the protagonist. In addition, being single is also a trend, and it is also because old bookworms are tired of eating delicacies and want to become vegetarians. Stallion books were popular in the past, but now they are rejected.

Isn't the title of the book called "A Certain Hogwarts Detective"? Now that I have been in school for so long, where does the detective reflect? It was said before that the protagonist encountered an accident while watching the Sherlock Holmes exhibition, but now I don't see the protagonist embodying a detective fan.

I suggest just cutting it and re-opening it. It's a bit hard to accept that the author who wrote Professor Magic has become half-dead now.

I see a lot of bad reviews in the discussion forum. Is it because the author's expectations for the last book were too high? There aren't many hp fics from Qidian that I can watch. Either the characters are bad, the plot is bad, or the writing is bad. I feel good about this one

A lot of people in the comment section said it was pretty bad, but I think it shines brightly. Especially memory magic, the author's further research based on the ancient magic in the previous part allowed me to see more possibilities of magic. Very charming, this is a magical world unique to the author. The only drawback is that there are too few updates. Maybe everyone thinks it is not as good as the previous one, but at least it has surpassed most novels (not limited to fan fiction). Readers, authors, everyone wants to see better works. But the author's magnificent imagination must not be abandoned. I look forward to seeing more and better chapters. 🌹🌹🌹

At present, the best emotional drama among Harry Potter fan works is the one in Hogwarts. If the author wants to write more emotional drama, he should write more. The magic text is a bit too abrupt. It is basically a plot about Hermione's time travel and the two characters have developed.

Author, unless you are of a good level, I don't want Hermione as the heroine. I really can't handle it. I feel like Hermione is almost exhausted. This is a novel with some hp elements and I have to go through her.

I have read many HP fics, and Professor Mowen can be said to be at the pinnacle, and it is difficult for the author himself to surpass him. And since the book was released after such a long time, readers' expectations are also high, so it's hard to be satisfied with the new work.

How should I put it, I actually look forward to the author being able to break out of the Hogwarts framework and write Harry Potter fan fiction. Professor Rune is so perfect. In my opinion, there is no better Harry Potter fan. But it's almost like having to play a game all over again after it took a long time to reach all achievements. I'm already a little unmotivated. I hope the author can write a more innovative book. After all, there is still a lot of fog of war in the world of Harry Potter, and those places can be freely depicted. Is magic school the only way out? Even if you go to school, why can you only go to Hogwarts?

Professor Magic is a masterpiece Looking forward to the new book

I just finished reading the last book some time ago and I liked it very much. I need to work harder on this one, the gap between the two books is a bit big.

It's May 26th. Is there a new book?

It's Ron's cp in the author's previous book, The Magic Professor. I've been thinking about it for a long time and I can't remember who this person is. I can't even search it on wiki. Can anyone kindly tell me where she comes from in the original work?

Will the author publish new books in the future?

I am already a long-time fan of the two books. There are very few good-looking Magic Forbidden fics in Qidian. The last time I thought it was good was a certain Forbidden copy of Infinite Stream.

It's very important for the author to write the next book, and it's the same with your crappy book that's easy to write down.

I suddenly discovered this book. Actually, I had no expectations for the later plot of the previous book.